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Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 9: Determination
is she gonna go to italy?! om what if she goes it italy and tanya has the same idea and makes edward look bad again!?
Author's Response: LOL! I'm not saying anything about Italy because I don't want to spoil the surprise! Thank you!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 9: Determination
i think she needs to start to let edward in a little more ! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: That will start soon and events in the next chapter will be the catalyst. Thank you!
Reviewer: angelspinknose (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 9: Determination
so ready for the heartache to be over.
Author's Response: We're getting closer. I promise, but we still have a little way to go. Thank you!
Reviewer: rhochradel (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
That is cool. I trust you. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! There's a lot still to go, though!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
“Here’s the thing, Edward. I get your reason for wanting to wait, and it’s totally valid.” I paused, and it lasted longer than I had intended.
“But you don’t agree?” Edward asked with a hint of amusement.
“It’s not that. It’s . . . well, I feel kind of cheated,” I admitted.
“Cheated?” He was holding back a laugh.
Because...getting cheated upon is so hilarious, right?
It's...interesting...to see what Bella does is like 180° away from what a normal person would do. (namely me *cough*)
Looking forward to seeing what Carlisle wanted of Edward? And then there's the toughening up of Bella.
Spikey
Author's Response: They aren't laughing at his cheating. They are laughing that she feels like she has been cheated of their intimacy. You aren't the only one that read it that way, so I guess I wasn't clear. He thinks it's amusing that she she's embarrassed and admitting that she wants a more of him.
There will be a tougher Bella for the next couple of chapters. Thanks, Spikey!
Reviewer: rhochradel (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
Ugg I cannot wait for Tanya and Aro to get what is coming to them. I just hope that Bella and Edward will not have too much more drama ahead of them. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Eh, there's gonna be more drama. Sorry. It's not a fluffy story from here on out. Thanks!
Reviewer: chrisnor (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
lIKED THE OCTOBERFEST PICNIC ! GREAT CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love a good church picnic!
Reviewer: arwen01 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
it was nice.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Iteachu4600 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
Well Edward should NEVER be alone with Tanya again but they do need to work on the trust. Also, WTF Esme you son cheated not the other way around she is an adult she can do what she wants. Since when is stealing someones credit card and useing it gifts!? In my mind that is theft.
Author's Response: It is theft, but there's more behind it than just simple greed. ::raises eyebrow:: Thanks, bb!
Reviewer: Iteachu4600 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
All I can say is he should NEVER be alone with Tanya. Also, WTF Esme YOUR son cheated not the other way around she is and adult she can do what she wants.
Author's Response: Now that Esme has realized her failure to know there was a problem, she's a little over-protective. Thanks!
Reviewer: arwen01 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: arwen01 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 3: Perspective
loved it
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: arwen01 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: The Calamity
woooow. i'm speechless
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
Reviewer: roselove0827 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
awwwwwwwwwwwww wat does dad wanna speak to edward about??????
should update twice a week because this seem like 22-32 chapters story??? how mant chaps are there going to be???
Author's Response: I wish I could update twice a week, but I don't have that many chapters banked and, with the holidays coming up, I know time is going to be in short supply. I have no idea how long it will end up. Right now, I'm thinking like 20-25 chapters, but that's what I thought with WHIV too and it is 41.
Thanks!
Reviewer: OujdagirlFromIreland (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
*Crushing on this story* Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! Update coming next Wednesday!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
I knew Tanya was up to no good! As for Edward and Bella they really just need to do the deed and get it over with. Carlisle might want to apologize to his son for everything he puts him through.
Author's Response: There's more coming between Carlisle and Edward. Bella and Edward will eventually get there, but it will be a slow burn. Thanks!
Reviewer: publix (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 4: Coming Home
This answered so many details. I really liked this chapter and hated seeing the end appear. I really liked the Steelers... we have quite a few "terrible towels" and other game day good luck charms. I love how pleading Edward seems. I might have missed it, but how much older is he?
Author's Response: Edward is now 25 and Bella is 18; they were 15 and 23 when they married (canon birthdays and a July wedding). I love the Steelers and cannot wait until the game tomorrow. We are huge fans here! I just couldn't write her as a Ravens fan or something!
Thanks!
Reviewer: publix (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Messages
I like this but i'm confused about why she got married at 15 and why her parents let her? Will this be revealed later? Finding this interesting and original so far. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: I am assuming that you now have those answers. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
i liked it :) slow is what they need.
Author's Response: I agree. They need slow to get to know each other better. Thanks!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
I'm curious to see how Tanya and Aro are working together. I'm slightly confused like I missed something.
Author's Response: Tanya and Aro are not working together. These are two separate issues that Edward is dealing with. Does that help with the confusion? Thanks, bb!
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
Carlisle!!! I hope he apologizes for being so critical to Edward. Glad Bella and Edward are progressing nicely and getting to know how wonderful they are together.
Author's Response: There will be more Carlisle/Edward interaction in the coming chapters. Things are changing there, too. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: RiesePieces (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
This is the one story I can never wait to update because I love it so much! and once again you did a fantastic job! I am nervous as to where the Tanya thing is going, and how Bella will react, I think this would be a good point to have Bella be strong and stand by her man because Edward is truly trying. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you. Yes, Edward is trying, and Bella is attempting to get to know him. They have a long way to go, though.
Reviewer: angelspinknose (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
I hope she's going to Italy with him
Author's Response: I'm not telling because that part is really important. See you with the answer on Wednesday! Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
I want Tanya to get hers. However, Edward is just as fault. Cheating is cheating and if Bella had a spine she would take him for everything!
Author's Response: Yet, even if Bella stays, she gets everything and Tanya really loses. Win-win there! Tanya has her own motivations and there is a lot of complexity there yet to be seen.
Thank you, BB!
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
Read all your chapters today want to say story is really good enjoyed reading wanted to hit Tanya afeww times ther and tought Edward was a bit daft with the Tanya thing but very good plot so far.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad that you are enjoying it. I update on Wednesdays so I'll see you again in a few days!
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