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Reviewer: bellwardc (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 8: Learning
Sorry I hate Edward. I am however hooked on this story.
Reviewer: jfc (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
You did a good job.
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
I'm going to be so sad to see this end but it has been an amazing read :)
Reviewer: beckaboo924 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
Awe... A second wedding had crossed my mind and what a perfect ending for such a great story! :)
I'm kind of sad today that two of my favorite stories came to an end today minus epilogs thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: mara west (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
Awwww... loved it! Can't wait for out takes! PS I agree my favorite day on my honeymoon was shopping with my sister-in-law on Maui! Well besides the day we got married! But I think you know what I mean!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
Loved this chapter soooo much...so sad to see it end...can't wait for the epilogue...♥♥
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
Love the second wedding :) Sweet, hot and sexy...all rolled into one :)
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
*Tear* That was perfect for them. I'm glad you brought everyone else in. thanks once again for sharing its such an amazing story. Can I ask why you chose to write it? what was the spark?
Author's Response: Lilmissb, I know this is long overdue, and for that, I'm terribly sorry. RL got in the way! Gah! The spark? The idea came to me and had to come out. That's usually how it goes. I wanted to see where they would go and show that in some circumstances, repentance is possible. Thank you for all your support!
Shasta
Reviewer: dupak (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
Lovely from start to finish - thank you for a great story! I enjoyed every moment!
Reviewer: jfc (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 16: A Trip Home
If she doesn't want to be rejected,why not just ask him to fuck her.Jezz.If she really cannot forgive him easily why not go away and take a break from him.
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
oh so wonderful! i am glad the siblings came along.. it seemed to fit them. And i am so glad that bella was able to move on past the things that edward did in the past. those 2 are just too hate together to be limited by a mistake
Reviewer: mimimgr (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
happy they renewed their vows, nice way finish.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I wanted to leave them up at start of their new life together and this is it.
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
I thought it was sweet that they renewed their vows. I didn't see anything wrong with inviting their friends. They still managed to have some time to themselves.
Author's Response: Thank you! This honeymoon was really about them and their family is a large part of them. They had to be involved somehow!
Reviewer: jfc (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 15: Parties and Promises
Jezz,Bella should get over it already.
Reviewer: jfc (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 14: Strides
Can this woman move on already.Jezz,she needs to get over it or leave him.
Author's Response: You've said this a couple of times, and I am wondering if you mean that she should get over his infidelity and poor treatment and give herself to him without reservation or if you think she should leave him?
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
What a journey, I never thought in the beginning this would be that interesting. It has been all of that and love. Well love does make it all worth while in the end.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you like how it all rounded out.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
well i hope for the both of them they will be happy !
Author's Response: This was just the official start of their happiness. Thank yoU!
Reviewer: Iteachu4600 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
I loved that they renewed their vows and go new rings for each other. This time when they said their vows they were not just words. You got me pumped for my honeymoon going to Jamica for week leaving May 1st :)
Author's Response: Woman, I hope you enjoyed your honeymoon and I would love to hear all about it. Thank you for all the support you've given me.
Thanks!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
Im glad they were able to have a wedding that meant something to them! it was wonderful!!
Author's Response: That's exactly what I wanted. I wanted it to be about them, for them. Thank you!
Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
: sigh :
I can't believe it's (pretty much) over.
Great story! Can't wait for the epi!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's been quite the ride, hasn't it?
Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
This is so sweet!
As I was reading their last lemon after the ceremony, "To Make You Feel My Love" by Mick McAuley & Winifred Horan came on. It's such a tender, sweet, loving song, it just seemed to fit so well with this chapter and the ending.
It nearly made my cry. :D
So good!
I'm so sad this is ending! But I'm also so happy that things worked out :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That song really does work for that lemon, doesn't it?
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
I loved it all They did get to spend some time alone, and then having their siblings and friends there was, in my opinion, a nice touch. It made it more real, so that they can all talk about the memories, but the parents would have probably been to much. The younger folks were there, and could drink and be embarassing, without being too embarassing. The addition of the new rings was a very nice touch too. I wasn't sure if Edward was going to get rid of his old band, or just add it to the new one. I figured Bella's ring was just an additional ring. The intensity of their relationship is just wonderful. It grew out of friendship, which is how all strong relationships start. Great job on this story, and I was happy to have had the opportunity to read it. Looking forward to the epilogue and can't wait for additional outtakes. Great job author! Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it. Those were the exact things I was trying to convey and I'm glad it worked.
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
I'll have to take your word for it but I treasure my alone time away with my husband.
Author's Response: I treasure my alone time too! LOL! But it was nice to have friends to party with when we wanted them around. Thank you!
Reviewer: cullen-mad (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
I love this story, how loving and kind edward is and Bella firerybut forgiving nature. thank you for all the hard work you have put into the story, the hours you must have put into each chapter.
I look forward to any future stories you may write, you are truly gifted and your story shows this. You have a way with words.
thanks again looking forward to the epilogue
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Those four words aren't adequate enough to express how wonderful and inspiring your words are to me. Thank you!
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