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Reviewer: Tootz (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 7: One Step Back
I need a cigarette!!!
Reviewer: MelanieHeleyna (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
Hi again! Just want to say good job again and thanks for the great story :)) I was playing "I won't give up" by Jason Mraz while I was reading this story and it only struck me when I was almost finished reading that the song fit perfectly! I mean it could practically be the theme song! LOL, what were the chances? Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. The Cullen/Whitlock thing was my bad and I've just never fixed it. LOL!
Shasta53
Reviewer: MelanieHeleyna (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2012 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
I love your story so much! Good job! I'm just a little confused though about Savannah's last name. I thought Jasper's last name was Cullen?
Reviewer: gigi9598 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
Wow, just WOW. I loved this story, every word, every chapter, so different from the usual ff E and B. Love your writing, hurrying off to find more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! I have one more complete multi-chap and a WIP. I hope you like those as well.
Reviewer: CullenObsessed_Maybe (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2011 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 5: Conversations
Im still a little pissed at him. But i like that bella is being strong.
Reviewer: Aria Daffodil (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2011 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: Coming Home
Go Steelers! And for goodness sake, go Bella! Poor girl. Your story is wonderful! I'm loving all the depth you put in Angela and Bella's friendship, by the way. It's all just fantastic!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying it. Thank you!
Reviewer: danqat (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
That was a beautiful story and it was hard for me to stop reading. I look forward to reading lots more from you in the future!
Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
long story...but it was worth it!!
well done on the story. i loved it!!
Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
Awesome story!
Reviewer: SDDoo (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 12: Confession
Just to make sure I've got this all clear - they hand the hands-y fun as teens, had sex twice (once single, once married) and then Eddie got holiday head? And Tanya thinks they're so good together? If they were, they would have done all of that before Edward got married.
Reviewer: SDDoo (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 10: Changes
So, I gotta say, I'm not loving the Cullen family too much at this point. First, they drag poor Bella for a trip to Tanya's house. Seriously? And now they're letting the woman who had an affair with Edward stay in their house?? Please explain this to me. Bella has put up with way more than she ever should and her family should try putting themselves in her shoes. Rose would have killed Tanya if she fooled around with Emmett! Do the Cullens actually care about her, beyond the fact that she married into their family?
Reviewer: ChocolateBliss (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
I love this story .. im a cry baby LOL - im looking forward to reading more of ur works
Reviewer: ChocolateBliss (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 22: Confrontations
YOWZERS!! GOod Going Bella!!
Reviewer: ruthh (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2011 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
i truly lovedd your story, dnt stop writing, you are talented:)
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
This was amazing! I'm just sorry to see it end. I can't wait to read more from you :)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
I was so happy they got their "everything". Amazing job. ;)
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 32: Honeymoon
This was the chapter that blew away all the others. Amazing job, can't wait to see what their future holds. ;)
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
loved this story and really enjoy your writing...this is my second story of yours that ive read and i love your style of writing and the storylines and that you update regularly, thanks.
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2011 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 28: Christmas
Stupid James...
Reviewer: EdwardFanatic101 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2011 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 33: Epilogue
Wow!
Though I first passed over this story because the title didn't pull me in (the concept of arranged marriages is totally foreign to me), something made me come back, and I am really happy that i did. This has been one of the best stories I've read on this site--I really got your humor and style. Hopefully there's more to come, outtakes perhaps? I'd love to know how Jack and Maddie turn out!
Great job, and congrats on finishing with the same quality as you started with,
Louise
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 27: The In-Laws: Part 2
I am in complete agreement about Love Amongst the Ruins.
I am glad that E got to spend some quality time with both parents. Things should ease out for B then too.
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 26: The In-Laws: Part 1
Awww.... Grammie isn't so bad afterall!
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
Of COURSE he has more up his sleeve, it is James after all!
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 25: Dinner
Of COURSE he has more up his sleeve, it is James after all!
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Fear
Ugh, I hate James.
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