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Reviews For Let Go of My Heart
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Truth

I'm glad that she finally made a decision (without any input from Edward).  It does suck that she is doing this with Jake gone but that is how their life is in the Navy.  I hope that it goes well for her and Jacob.



Author's Response: Hopefully they can figure it out easily once he's back. Guess we'll have to see! Thank you!

Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

It's so sad, I need like Bella & Edward detox or something... under any other circumstances I would probably be hoping that husband and wife can work it out... but now I am just hoping Bella and Edward find their way to each-- damn it all. Really I need counseling!!! So please update soon, so we can see what we are considering



Author's Response:

LOL  I am sorry, but your comment actually made me laugh out loud! You're awesome!  Thank you! 

Reviewer: navy_wife (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

So, yum. Can I get in on that Edward action? hahaha!



Author's Response:

;) Right! Me too!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Prologue

Hi!  I don't normally do this but I want you to know that I found your story this morning and plan to put it on alert after scanning the first several chapters and checking out your blog.  I will be leaving town in a couple of days for a month or so but I do plan to read and review when I get back.

Your writing is really very good and I can see myself getting caught up in this story.  See you in December!

Sandra



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Sandra! Hopefully I'll have a nice long "bath worthy" read for you when you return!  Have a great month! :)

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

OK that is so no fair!!!!!!!!!!! I will be on pins and needles til next chapter. Oh well I guess that is what a really good author is supposed to do to you. You Win.

 

Lilly



Author's Response:

Aww Lilly!  You're so awesome!!  Thank you!!  :)

Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

I really love this story.  Very tragic how they ended up.  Can't wait to see how it all ends up.  I'm hoping they get together - maybe Jacob has an accident that ends badly?  Here's hoping.  Love it.



Author's Response:

I am seriously laughing so hard at all of you that want Jacob to "die".  LOL  Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

I actually feel bad for both of them.  To be so in love with someone and not be able to be with them ....that is just heartbreaking.

I'm glad that Bella talked to Alice.  She needs to lean on her friends now - more than ever.

Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Bella has great friends! Thank you for reading! 

Reviewer: melee (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

Great Chapter.

I hope that Bella makes a decision about her marriage soon.  She has admitted that she is unhappy with Jake.  I just hope if she decides to leave him it is for the right reasons.

I do hope that these two can find a way be to together.  Wonder what the rest of the email will say.



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I hope so too on all accounts! :)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

That was heartbreaking :'( Poor Bella and Edward! Jacob is acting like the douche he is. Dickhead! lol



Author's Response:

LOL  You're not the only one that thinks that!  I've heard "douche" attached to Jacob quite a bit lately!  ;)

Reviewer: mandi79 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

love love love



Author's Response:

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

HMMMM! I can't wait to see what she wrote to him. Please don't say that her older child is his. lol... If she really felt that strongly about him I think she should have done this SOONERRRR!!!



Author's Response:

That'd be SO wrong! Keeping his kid from him!  ;) But think about it...he left her, so she moved on with her life and tried to forget about him. She looked for him once, but it wasn't until FB that she "found" him.  So it's all coming back full force!  ;) Thank you SO much for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

well i think she needs to lead with her heart and just leave jake! cant wait to see waht happens next

 



Author's Response:

I think I agree! Let's see what Bella decides!  ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BELLAxMOMENT (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

Really you left it like that, in the middle of her e-mail? You NEED to stop doing that! For my sanity please! LOL, loved the chapter as always, it was soo sad =(.  Can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

Ok, promise...no more cliffies....for a few chapters anyway!  :)  Thanks! <3

Reviewer: beng_326 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

 

a cliffy!



Author's Response: Sorry!! Not too bad tho!! Thank you!!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

Great Chapter......



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: kgostorm (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

I cant wait to read this email please let jake die so they can be togather without a divorce.lol



Author's Response: Lol u guys crack me up wanting Jacob to die. Thank you for reading!! :)

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

Really good. Cliffie though :(



Author's Response: Not as bad of one tho right? ;) Thank you!!

Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 10 - What I'd Give

Rut row! I think she should have given Jacob the heave ho first before spilling anything else to Edward. But that's just me.-Deborahlicious



Author's Response: No regrets remember? Shes putting it all on the table. :) thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: beckz111 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

fantastic !!
love it!!
whens ur next update hun ? x

Author's Response:

Thank you!!  Chapter 10 is waiting validation as I type!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!  Chapter 10 is waiting validation as I type!  :)

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

Sweet and sad. Ideally, Jacob will meet his true love, Edward's girlfriend will meet her own soulmate, and Bella n Edward can get their second chance......

Author's Response:

Ideally....  ;)  Thank you for reading! 

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

Mmm...piano sex with Edward. Where do I sign up for that? Aww at Edward at the end even if it is a cliffie :)



Author's Response:

Right!? Yum!  Thanks! :)

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

Really loving this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

Not again you have to stop doing this to us. I don't know if my heart can stand it. they need to at least kiss before parting. I feel sorry for Jacob but I think he knew that Bella married him on the rebound and she was still in love with Edward. I guess the only way to get them togeather without pulling the childred apart is to have Jacob die.Hate to say it but that would be my guess. Till next time.

 

Lilly



Author's Response:

OK, so maybe the next chapter won't get too far away from me, and I won't leave ya hangin'!  LOL I can't believe you're hoping for death!  ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Didn't You Know?

yay! I'm glad he told her he never got over her. It's almost like pulling teeth to get any man to reveal his true thoughts and feelings. It seems our Bella will have a really hard time when Jacob comes back. But I am really liking the fact that they came to a talking point.- Deborahlicious



Author's Response:

:) Thank you for reading!!  :)

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