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Reviews For Around the Bend
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 25

preggo hormoens are totally awsome! cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response: LOL!! They certainly make for a lemony chapter, that's for sure.

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 25

this was very cute and i can't wait for the next chapter
well until next time

Author's Response: Thanks, sweetie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 25

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 24, 2011 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 25

I squealed when I saw this update!  YAY!!

I don't know about mess, but you're right.  You ARE hot...sorry.  Couldn't resist...

Yay for employment!  Haha abotu using the belly as a table...even in the middle of that, I would have laughed :)

Haha, Jasper made The Unbreakable Vow...Jaden would be pleased :)

I could make about 5 gallons of lemonade with the lemons in this chapter haha :)

LOVE it obviously :)



Author's Response: It WAS pretty citrusy, but A&J have been getting the short end of the stick. They deserved some lovin'. Bow chica wow wow.

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 24

lol what kid says famished : )
I loved this chapter so much and I can't wait for the next one
well until next time

Author's Response:

My five year old nephew says he's famished all the time.  I think he learned it from my nine year old niece.  ;)

I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 24

Hey i really loved this chap so much !!!!!! I loved that everyone seem to calm down and it was just so great because they all realisied the they are lucky to have each other and i just feel they sorted things out !



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 23

poor bella i hopt she will be okay
god i love this kid he's like perfect and just what this family needed
well until next time

Author's Response:

Bella's a tough cookie.  This is just a minor blip on the radar in the grand scheme of seizures.  If she had been sitting down it wouldn't have been more than a "daydream" type seizure, or a brain fart.

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 22

wow that was a lot and really made me want to cry!
Really Really Really sorry for the late review i'm going to the next chapter now! lol
until next time

Author's Response:

It's never too late to review.  :)

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 24

:)  Love how Jaden came to this realization. Such a sweet boy.



Author's Response: Thanks. :). It was time he started dropping the formalities because they're pretty much family, and frankly, I was getting tired of typing it. To be honest, I still goof and type Mr. Emmett and Miss Rosie from time to time. :)

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 23

it was going to happen sooner or later and he was going to see it

you also made me cry again

you cry monger



Author's Response:

Hey, B.  I'm sorry I made you cry again, and yes, *sigh* I am a cry monger.  I will admit it.  :)

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 23

Hey this is such a great chap !!!!! i know it was so sad but the beginning was so great where jaden opened up to bella i really loved it ! the ending was good as well jaden was so brave ! i hope bella is ok but i guess we expected something like this :L



Author's Response:

Thanks, and I'm glad you got through it, R3.  Just keep in mind that for every sad thing that comes up, it's making everyone stronger and better.  It really is win-win.  Right?  ;)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 24

Again, this chapter was all Jaden :) He is the sweetest/adorablest (is that even a word? It is now) kid ever :) The whole family chat had me tearing up.



Author's Response:

The family chat had me tearing up when I was writing it.  Jaden breaks my heart on a regular basis, but he also heals it.  I really think there couldn't be a better fitting family than Jaden and the Cullens. 

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 24

happy he is progressing but i hope that her seisure isnt a set back for a baby! 



Author's Response:

Bella's a tough woman and this wasn't a bad seizure.  I think it will take a lot more than that to deter her.  :)

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 24

I'm definitely glad that Bella is ok, and Jaden is just so precious! I teared up definitely. *hugs for everyone*



Author's Response:

Hi, Edward_Loves_Bella.

Bella's a tough woman...she can handle it.  ;)  Jaden definitely showed just how strong he is too.  He's a great kid.  :)

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 24

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 24

Jaden is SUCH a sweet soul!  Love it :)

Man, I love this story SO much!  It is the only one that does not go into my "Read it sometime later" folder (and I really do have one) on my email. 

I feel like I am in a desert and this is water...more, more, more hahahahahaha :)



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks, sweetie.  It really means a lot that you love this story as much as you do.  It makes the hard work and the tears worthwhile.  :)

More is coming, I promise.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 23

Aw, Jaden is so innocent...my heart aches that he automatically thinks he made Rosie sad :(

Jaden, honey, no one can ever look at you and not immediately fall in love.  You are just too precious and too observant sweetheart...

I am so glad Jaden didn't freak out and that Miss Bella is ok...

I want that recipe too, btw :)



Author's Response:

LOL!! 

Jaden is such a sympathetic character that it's hard not to fall for him.  Even though he's been through so much, he's still so innocent, so naive, so kind and yet so strong. 

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 22

Holy cow, RL has been so busy, I have 3 updates to read!  That's awesome, but I have been dying to get some time to do so hahaha :)

Jaden totally cracks me up!  I love that little guy, and I really like how Jaden doesn't know about what's happening with Rose...poor guy has been through enough...

It's almost like having Jaden there is helping Edward and Bella get even more closure with Emma somehow.  I can't explain, and it probably doesn't make sense, but there it is...

Man, Jasper can cry on my shoulder any time...seriously though, my heart just hurts for both he and Rosie...

This was heavy, but I can also see light trying to poke through...



Author's Response:

You hit the nail on the head, my friend.  Jaden is really helping especially Edward to deal with the loss of Emma.  Jaden is forcing him to open up, to face things, and allow himself to love another child.

Poor Jasper...always the one to fix people, but perpetually unable to ask for help.  I just want to hug the shit out of him.

Yes, it's heavy, but there are lighter days coming...they just have to make it through the fog.

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 24

wow!  what a smart little boy!  I am caught up!  what do i do now?  LOL!!!



Author's Response:

Geez, it didn't take you long at all to get caught up!  I guess you'll just have to wait like everyone else.  I try to get new chapters in for validation as quickly as possible, and my beta has been pumping them out quickly.  You likely won't have to wait too long.

Reviewer: sparkles59 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 24

Okay, the great healing has begun!  I felt an urge to maim after the last chapter, but you've redeemed yourself here, LOL!  Jaden is getting so big and grown up.  I hope he can start to talk it out with Dr. Scott soon.

Alice is a godsend for being there for Edward.  I hope the hole in his heart is mending at least a little.

Poor Bella.  I hope this won't be a setback for her.

I LOVE Rosalie so much.  Your Rosie is so vulnerable and sweet, but I can definitely see the original character in her, too.  Thank you for bringing out more of her.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I could redeem myself with this chapter.  :)

I think you'll be happy with the direction Edward is heading.  He's really starting to come into his own, which is what Bella needs from him as they head toward a future together.

Bella's a tough cookie, you needn't worry too much about her.

Thank you for loving Rosie.  She's a complex character and I always felt she was slighted in the books.  I like to make her more three dimensional and more compassionate/human.

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 23

Awww, Jaden is such a sweet boy.  Loved thsi chapter.



Author's Response:

I've been writing the final chapters and it's getting harder to do so because I don't want to say goodbye to him or the gang.  :( 

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 14b

what a witch!!!!



Author's Response:

I know, right?  I wanted to slap her silly.

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Did Bella get a ring or did I miss that somewhere?



Author's Response:

Edward has yet to give her a ring at this point.  He's mentioned marriage in passing, but nothing concrete...yet...

Reviewer: jamiesue00 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 23

I have spent the last few days reading Encore and now Around the bend, amazing writing, I feel like i'm right there apart of the story. I hope that Bella will be able to have more children and end up a vegitable. That would make a horible line in the story. i can't wait for more. Great writting.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, jamiesueoo.  I'm glad you survived Encore and you're still into Around the Bend.  :)

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 3

well...i gave in!!!  so far so good and you were right very emotional....



Author's Response:

LOL!  It's going to get REALLY emotional...I'll just warn you now.

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