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Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 11:18 AM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me

Well after all your snarky comments to me this morning, I actually decided to read your latest chapter because I can't resist.  I loved it except for the fact that I wanted to really smack Jasper up side the head for pulling that shit. Bella's a big girl and can take care of herself.  I have to say that the flowers were a nice touch.  I loved them.  The only person that can be sending them is Edward.  It all points to him.  Getting upset over the card.  Seeing Bella getting rid of the flowers and him being on the phone clearly upset.  Then the phone call from flowers dot com.    Someone has a serious crush on Bella.  Great job hun.  Now that I left you kind words you can comence your snarky comments to me.  *smiles*



Author's Response:

lol. No snarkyness, here, just on Twittahhh. Me = love you. But feel free to smack Jasper. I'm glad you enjoyed the flowers, though. And regarding who they're from...I think it's pretty obvious, especially with your observations. ;-) <3

-Dani

Reviewer: Vamp Belle Mortes ardeur (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 11:03 AM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me

Laughing hysterically at what the card said. Desperately wanting to know what Jasper is up to. He is stringing Bella along. She needs to wake up and see she getting taken advantage of. Of coarse the flowers are from Edward. But something is also up with him I think.

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 10:49 AM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me

Argh. The flowers are from Edward, obviously. Thus his reaction to the wrong card. Why does Bella have to be so blind?

But I must admit, I can't understand Edward. I mean, yeah, Bella said some kinda nice and thoughtful things to him during their encounters, but it's not like she's actually nice to him. Either he sees more than I do, or he's a lovesick fool ;-) Sorry for that, I didn't want to bash your Edward.

Thanks for updating, I'm looking forward to the next chapter (where I desperately hope that Bella will finally open her eyes and see what's right in front of her...).

Reviewer: bmccall2068 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 10:29 AM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me

Jasper is an ass...why would she ever think of him as Mr. Perfect?

Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 10:05 AM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me

OMG!!! Bella, please wake up and get a clue! EDWARD is sending you the damn flowers and Jasper is a dumbass. WTF was all that couch action? What is his deal? Bella needs to tell Jasper to go fuck himself and then get a new job.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 10:04 AM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me

I'm sure it is Edward who is sending the flowers, but what he sees in Bella is beyond me .... she is not nice to him.  And Jasper certainly sends mixed messages! I wish these people would straighten up & let the real fun begin! Loving the story!

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 09:14 AM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

I wonder what Jasper wants.

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 08:44 AM · On: He Disliked Me

:)

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 08:44 AM · On: He Apologized to Me

Jasper's trying to get her to move on.

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 11:17 PM · On: He Met Me

Jasper's being an ass and she's blaming Edward.

Reviewer: arian134 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 11:46 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

oh  mann poor edward =( update soon! i cant believe what a jackass jasper is, im so against him now =P update soooooon pleaseeee

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 12:32 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

Rose is right, Jasper is playing games! I hope Bella gets pissed instead of happy!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 12:11 PM · On: He Apologized to Me

Ah Bella ought to just crush Edward under the heel of her shoe already! He's obviously affected by her!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 11:29 AM · On: He Disliked Me

Well, someone is a bit sensitive! I'm guessing that a lot of things have happened to Edward since Jasper last saw him. Jasper seems a bit callous about it all, though.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 10:42 AM · On: He Met Me

Well, it does seem as if maybe Bella has been wearing rose colored glasses when it comes to Jasper. Poor thing, she needs to loosen up a bit as well!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 03:36 AM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

I bet the "Code Red" is something stupid - like he needs her to fetch flowers for his date or something. Oh, she's gonna be pissed :-) And I'm looking forward to it!

Poor Edward probably didn't have the best evening ever. He's head over heels for Bella, it's so obvious :-)

Thanks for updating, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 03:31 AM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

Bella should watch 'Two Weeks Notice', and get some of Sandra Bullock's balls... Urgently.

Jasper was jealous, right? That's why he interrupted the date he basically sent her to? He must have figured how much time minimum it would take her to perhaps like one of the guys and go home with them, like Rose's doing right now, and in order to sabotage that, he sent her a message.

Bastard.

When will Edward get what a bastard his friend is?

Also, I'm guessing Jasper would get jealous if he heard Bella was with someone else, but of course since he's a man and has needs, he can just pick up one-night stands or something, right? Pathetic bastard.

Spikey

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 03:31 AM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

Bella should watch 'Two Weeks Notice', and get some of Sandra Bullock's balls... Urgently.

Jasper was jealous, right? That's why he interrupted the date he basically sent her to? He must have figured how much time minimum it would take her to perhaps like one of the guys and go home with them, like Rose's doing right now, and in order to sabotage that, he sent her a message.

Bastard.

When will Edward get what a bastard his friend is?

Also, I'm guessing Jasper would get jealous if he heard Bella was with someone else, but of course since he's a man and has needs, he can just pick up one-night stands or something, right? Pathetic bastard.

Spikey

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 02:22 AM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

She totally ditched him. Poor Edward. ;)

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 11:30 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

That so wasn't cool of Bella. I would never abandon Edward. He deserved that ice cream lol

Reviewer: Mrz_Jasperhale4ever (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 07:50 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

she should have totally said fuck jasper and ice cream with edward but w/e

Reviewer: moongirl (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 07:17 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

Wow, Rose is so insightful about Jasper here. It makes my heart ache for Bella a little less to think that he is just missing the chase and is not entirely over her when she still loves him so very much. I hope she starts to see a little more of Edward's personality so that she is finally tempted to move on. A little anger at Jasper would be nice too! This could be a very interesting triangle...keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Carson1 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 06:31 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

Oh hun!

How I love this fic!!! You are brilliant. Code red... hmmm- something tells me a code red means something a whole lot different than what I think it does.

Looking forward to more.

XO

Les

Reviewer: carolvieira (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 05:30 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

oooh my guess: i think jasper is not in any trouble, so when bella gets there, wherever it is, she will see that rosalie is right, and get a little pissed, maybe?

don't know though, bella seems a little too... little? hahaha i didn't make sense, but...

anyway, loving it

hope you can update soon

-caroline

Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 03:21 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me

So glad I found your story! I'm definitely enjoying it, but find myself upset at Jasper for being so cruel and stringing Bella along. That working dynamic has to be so difficult for Bella. I hate to say this because I always find myself as Bella's biggest advocate and supporter, but she is totally annoying me here! I want to scream at her for being so pathetic. I realize she is in a difficult place, but I really hope she gets it soon. Like really soon. Looking forward to your next update!

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