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Reviewer: eliza3ame (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:33 PM · On: He Showed Me
Im really enjoying reading your story, can't wait for next chapter. please update soon
Reviewer: epm0001 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 02:03 PM · On: He Showed Me
love it!
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:54 PM · On: He Embarrassed Me
I officially hate Bella. She can't be more of a bitch, she wanted to leave Edward there... again. And she is okay with the idea of killing a poor baby and made a face at everything Edward did.. I'm surprised Edward is still taking her shit... What a stupid bitch.
...Sorry about the Bella hate.
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:33 PM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me
It's Edward, I know it is. I'm surprised really, after how Bella is with him. The flowers and the messages were so beautiful. *sigh*
I like Jasper, but then I don't like him? I'm so confused.
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:09 PM · On: He was Pleasant to Me
People are such idiots with Edward. They look at the place he lives bladly, they talk about the way he dresses, they roll their eyes when he speaks... and he is just so...nice. I know who my Mr. Perfect is. *nods*
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:01 PM · On: He Showed Me
Alice's character is certainly interesting! Glad to see Bella finally give Edward some attention too! Enjoying the story!
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:48 PM · On: He Showed Me
I think now I'm more confused than ever. Alice - and Emmett's remark about "the past couple months" - and... oh well, I'll try to be patient :-)
Apart from the "confusing" factor, I really liked this chapter ;-)
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:35 PM · On: He Disliked Me
Could Bella be more shallow? I think a man in plaid is sexy ;) I can't wait for Alice to get to this story... Jasper and Bella not good.
I wonder what happened to Edward to make him sell everything?
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:34 AM · On: He Showed Me
Edward's place sounds absolutely gorgeous!
Your Alice has me totally intriuged...if she gets together with your Jasper I hope she dicks him around a little...what's good for the goose is good for the gander, right? Someone needs to mess with is head the way that he messes with Bellas!
So glad that Bella went to see and talk to Edward. Even though they didn't actually talk, they did interact, which was great.
Thanks for the chapter!
Reviewer: masochisticlion7 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:28 AM · On: He Showed Me
mmmmm I love the tension!!!
Reviewer: nessie88 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 10:47 AM · On: He Showed Me
I hope that Jasper won't fall in love right away with Alice, it would be too easy for Edward otherwise! Great chapter as always! :))
Reviewer: Elysia23 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 10:27 AM · On: He Showed Me
Yay! So happy to see this update this morning! :) I hope that the next one will be here soon *wink wink* I am so bummed Em had to go and ruin their almost kiss. lol. Hopefully next chappy? :)
Reviewer: moongirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 10:03 AM · On: He Showed Me
Hmmm...glad she finally swallowed some of her pride and insecurity and sought Edward out. His awkwardness is sweet and I hope she sees through it to the loving guy he is underneath.
I have to say, I don't like the passive/agressive way she blew Jasper off in the last chapter...I think he needed to hear EXACTLY how much of a jerk he has been since he broke it off with her! I hope he makes another move (before he goes ga-ga over Alice) and Bella lets him have it with both barrels.
Good story! Keep up the good work:)
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:52 AM · On: He Showed Me
Yeah,. Alice's apearance was totally surprising. I liked it.
I also liked the fact that now Bella's thoughts are ocupied with Edward, not Jasper. YEY!
But I'm sure things will not be that easy.
Reviewer: Paige Parkker (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 09:12 AM · On: He Showed Me
NOOOOOOOOOooOOOOOOoo I want more!!!!!
Author's Response: That's a hell of a lot of O's! I don't have more of this chapter, but I have more of various other things in my house, if you want that.
-Dani
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:05 AM · On: He Kissed Me
:)
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:05 AM · On: He Embarrassed Me
:)
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:04 AM · On: He Barely Spoke to Me
:)
Reviewer: Secret Rose (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:04 AM · On: He was Pleasant to Me
:)
Reviewer: siennacullen (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 06:25 AM · On: He Kissed Me
Yeah, Great chapter about time Bella stepped away from Jasper who is only keeping her there for he's go to girl.
Open your eyes Bella and see Edward
update soon please
Reviewer: Elysia23 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:41 AM · On: He Kissed Me
OH! Please update soon! I'm anxious to see what happens! :)
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 06:27 PM · On: He Kissed Me
He needs to grow a pair and stop running. :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 12:28 PM · On: He Kissed Me
hot
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 06:03 AM · On: He Kissed Me
It's about time she started getting tired of getting used by Jasper. She deserves better than what he has to offer.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 01:04 AM · On: He Kissed Me
A change is gonna come :) About damn time!
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