jasper is mr perfect? say what? lol

Hmmm, I can't help but think that Alice crawling under Jasper's window meant something.  I think she slept with him the night before and didn't want him seeing her coming into the office.  I wonder if Bella finding out will drive her completely away from Alice, or will it make her realize that she's over Jasper?  Maybe a bit of both?  Can't wait for more!

lol..... wow.... I liked how Bella's character starts off a lil pathetic but hey when you think your in love right!!!!!1

Well, looks like Edward finally got some with her implicit knowledge this time! Though, she did seem to enjoy his erection!

They finally admitted their feelings! Yay! And I guess it will only help that Edward already saw her shirtless - that way he won't be as nervous when the time comes ;-)

Alice's regret seemed to be genuine. Let's see what happens about that; Bella seems to have a hard time letting her back in (and I can understand that).

Yeah, i have to say, I'm not as forgiving as Bella. There is no way with some explanation about a guy I'd forgive and forget. But maybe that says something about me... personally, I think Alice is kind of a bitch!

Please do not take the following message to heart. I think you are doing a great job as an author, and I like this story, but....

I really hate Alice.  I hope this is not one of those stories where everyone forgives everyone for every terrible thing they have done and they all "live happily ever after"  What Alice did was completely messed up and her attitude is hardly apologetic. I can just see it coming.... Jasper starts dating Alice. Bella is upset at first, but eventually realizes that she has Edward so she is happy that the girl her abandoned her (and acts like a pompous bitch) ends up with the guy that jerked her around. I know its coming because you wrote that Rose likes her, which did not really seem fitting to me since you have Rose as being so protective of Bella.  Its just not realistic. Practically every story on this site has the same elements (Jasper and Alice - love at first site. Rose and Emmett- love at first site. Bella- a pushover who forgives everyone) I liked this story originally because of the whole idea of Bella and Edward not being so combatable. I just want to know now before I get too invested... Will this have the cliche Twilight-Ending?

Author's Response:

I'm sorry, but I can't tell you what the ending will be. I also am mildly offended (and I stress mildly) that you would consider dropping a story because you have assumed it's going to be a certain way. Those that have read my stories know I try to stay clear of cliches. So, stick around if you like the story, not because you think a secondary character is going to end up a certain way.

-Dani

;)

Ohhh, I luv the this..just enough sexual tension for Edward and Bella. I don't know Alice's side, but I'm not liking her at all right now.

Ok... Anyone who likes Alice after this chapter must be crazy. REALLY crazy!

I want this Edward for my own. He's a sweetie :) Poor Bella. Alice is a piece of work lol.

yes, he is really sweet.. and i think i hate alice too.. well it's bad