i was up at 3am this morning (couldnt sleep) so i was reading this update and i cant review on my ipod on this site but i can on ff anyway i left my comment and i read a few and now im not sure if kate is the waitress like i assumed (you know what they say about assuming...lol) or a relative of some sort ,either way they dont have achance with all the secrets about ,i hope i get pleasantly surprised because what's happening at the moment is one big downer

Every time I want to like Bella, there's a monkey wrench.  Her materialism & naivete are just infuriating.  Jasper is such a user.  Am still holding on though.

uhhh.... At first I thought why is she assuming he was with her the whole time and not just now... then, I remember the drink on the porch (what was it? the girly drink?) and I'm confounded... like what?! No way.

And I'm sorry, but Jasper still really pisses me off. What was with the diamond earrings?

As for our reviews scaring you. Mybe we aren't thinking along the same lines as you, but you sure got a reaction. And that's good, that your writing can prevoke(?) such emotion.

omg this about broke my heart...i hope that it is not what actually meets the eye and I will keep an open mind till the next chapter...just keep telling your self bella I don't need a man in my life to be happy   make life more  interesting though

I'm bummed you had Bella let Alice live with her...I feel like you had Bella give into Alice too soon...and so much for going slow if you let Bella get bowled over by Alice and letting her crash at her place.

This kind of stuff really bugs me.

Right now, both Edward and Jasper s**t me... Edward is just a douche for doing this to Bella so soon..I don't care if it was a break. Jasper seems like he has an alterior motive.

I just want poor Bella to be happy, at least Rose is a good friend to her. I hope that Edward works on himself and his issues; because right now he doesn't deserve Bella.

okay let me just get it out the way ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

and i'm done yea so i glad she told jasper how she feels that great just great ummm how attached are you to your Edward because i really want to choke him like really and i just going to go i'll form more words and umm re review later

Ok...I'm sticking with you b/c you always come through but damn...that was rough!!!!!!  Does Bella always have to be shit on?  I'm gonna go out on a limb and say Kate is not a threat but I probably would of beat the ho!!!!!  LOL!  See ya next time!

wow this has to be one of the worst birthdays ever for her.

I hope this is all a misunderstanding because if not E is a major D CK head 

I'm just going to hope there's an explanation for Kate that's not as bad as it looks...but Bella is usually the one to give the benefit of doubt! So, would Edward do such a thing? He said he's a different person after circumstances in his life forced a different path. I don't really want to voice the obvious implication, so I'm going to go with something else is going on? Though he did break up with her... I'm just going to take a nap until Saturday!

OMG I loved this chapter! I had a feeling Edward was seeing that waitress chick! I can't wait to see what happens!