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Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:38 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
Wow – this really, really made me sad. Definitely have a heavy heart for them.
I thought I was able to see both Edward’s and Bella’s side in this. But I don’t know. Hope there is a EPOV coming up. Otherwise I think I’m gonna have to put him in the “asshole” category. I have this gut feeling that appearances are not what they seem. That Kate and Irina are there for Edward’s support somehow. Edward did not come across as uncaring and deceitful in prior chapters. And don’t tell me that he didn’t know that it was Bella standing beside Irina. Playing dumb so that he could just perhaps get a closer glimpse of her? You really have quite a quandary going on here.
So Jasper finally manned up and had a heart-to-heart talk with Bella. He was so insensitive to her feelings. Why is it so hard for him to believe that he broke Bella’s heart? Perhaps his breakup with Alice gave him a little more insight into Bella’s feelings. Hopefully this will bring them to a stronger friendship that is no longer seemingly one-sided.
All I can say is you have certainly given us a lot to contemplate. Hope next chapter brings enlightenment. This was very brilliantly written. Not too many authors can keep me guessing like you have. But you’re good – really, really good. Can’t wait until Tuesday.
Thank you so much for writing a superb story.
Elaine – sparkledamnu on twitter
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:36 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
So, so sad and so, so confusing! I would really like a peek into Edward's mind.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:35 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
So, that is really a sick in the pit of your stomach feeling. I know, I was there once. Maybe Edward isn't into punishment and pain, but you could give a class on it! I hate to admit this, but I actually want to go downstairs and kick the guy who did this to me 22 years ago! Yup. He's sitting on my couch. He won't know what hit him....
Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:34 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
That....was painful. I want to cry for Bella right now. WTF is up with Edward? I'm always the first to give him the benefit of the doubt and not jump to conclusions- I did it with the whole waitress incident at the bar, and even with the girly drink left at his house. By the time Bella was greeted at the door by Kate in a robe, it became a little harder. But now? WTF? I know Edward had feelings for Bella- I know he was insecure about Jasper, which caused him to overreact the way he did. But to move on so quickly? And to treat Bella with such indifference at the store.....wait a second! Indifference? That was Jasper's reaction to the way Bella handled their break-up, and she was dying on the inside. So maybe, Edward is a good actor, but still- how is he in a new relationship so quickly? I don't like it :(
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:31 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
Man, that was painful. But, at least now, she can really move on....
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:22 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
*takes review 600*
Grrrrrrrr. I'm trying, Dani, I'm trying...
Grrrrrrr.
Spikey
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:20 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
You're killin me here! There is NO way in hell I would ever go back to him after all this bullshit! He's a dick! Yes...the whole Jasper thing was ridiculous but how many women does it take to get over someone??
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 09:10 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
I know all is not as it seems, but - it seems pretty bad!!! I'd love to know what's going through Edward's head right now. I hope you are not going to keep them apart much more.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:59 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
i hope so cause now i'm even more pissed
Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:52 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
Oh... the poor girl The would be so hard. I'm sure he was feeling something he's just good at hiding it. And Irina is Kate's sister? So, not sure what is up there. What a twisted web you weave. I am all up in arms wondering what is going to happen... OH! and so glad Jasper finally admitted to being a jerk. Because... well... he was.
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:51 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
I'm hoping it's not as it seems.
Reviewer: Te0214 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:48 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
Wow.......way to go Bella, time for a little payback. Maybe it's petty but he deserves it. Can't wait for update:)
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:43 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
Bah, this made me cry.
Reviewer: tracish (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:43 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
Wow.
Reviewer: indiainksky (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:25 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
This is so saaaad :( Poor Bella.
Reviewer: jbellamore (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:14 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
I don't comment nearly as much as I should but you are a brilliant author. You write angst so well and I'm happy to see that Jasper and Bella's friendship is getting closer.
I'm looking forward to your next update! :)
Reviewer: ec1luver1 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 08:03 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
I think I'm going to cry. Thanks....
Reviewer: monicaloin (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:56 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
My God, poor Bella. How could Edward did these to Bella if he truly cared about her? Not giving her a chance to explain, sleeping with another woman and moving on so quickly?!!!!!~ If I was Bella, that "goodbye" would be a genuine goodbye, meaning I'd never be with him again no matter what.
Reviewer: orangemonkey (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:56 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
Thanks for the update - such a great way to start the weekend! Another fab chapter ..... glad that Bella and Japser are on their way to becoming friends again. Still so sad for Bella .... I can practically feel the pain in her heart : (
Reviewer: carolbenatti (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:53 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
OMG
amazing chapter
but so sad,I wnated to cry over this
can´t wait for more
xx
Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:50 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
oh god edward just gets worse and worse what a creep
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:47 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
I don't know if I wait 3 daysish. Right now I want to smack his little pretty face. i hope dosen't even ever consider taking him back. He's such a hypocrite.
Reviewer: Siobhan (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:46 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
Thanks for a great story.
My heart cant handle anymore though, Im afraid.
That physically hurt....
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:45 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
gee...that kind of made me want to cry...looks like he really did move on ...in a really big way..but I am glad she and jasper got all that all on the open and they are still friends ...he is to trying to get back into her life romanticly he just must not feel that way about her ... and i will wait out epic cant wait
Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 07:42 AM · On: He Moved on from Me
i hate this edward and this story is just soooo sad
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