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Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 10:01 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
Jasper can go jump in the lake. He had his chance and he blew it. How can anyone not like Bella?
Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 09:53 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
I think Jasper would feel hurt & rejected... considering his competitive side. He might sulk for a while and accept the reality that Bellas had moved on and stick by Edward.
Jasper would be Jasper where he could "manipulate" or use his surroundings trying to influence Bella's decision.
Happy w'end!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 09:27 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
Hi again!
"Jasper," I said in one breath. I didn't even know what to say.
"What is it?" His expression was that of concern.
"That was…" I started, and paused. "What you just did was…incredible."
OMG... Bella, you're such an idiot! First you get in his car - okay, you're going to the same place and he did drive all the way over, but it just means you can't leave on your own terms, either - and then you go all OMG! over him giving money to a homeless person? Did he normally do that? Probably not. Did he do it out of the kindness of his heart? Probably not. Did he do it because it might score him a few points with you: PROBABLY YES!
Okay, a line later we learn that he did, but come on! Now *you* have to pay for a coffee you didn't even want in the first place. Geesh.
I'm glad she finally figured out Edward's IT for her. I mean, was there really another option? That other one fucked your cousin, for crying out loud!
I'd think Jasper with his 'feelings' for her would be more dangerous to choose than Edward. He liked Bella enough to date him for so long, but dumped her then, took her stray cousin in, and then when she breaks his heart, magically grows more feelings for her? If she was truly IT for him, he'd have had them before.
Seems to me he was just tired of her and wanted other chicks again.
I'm looking forward to meeting Elizabeth, I guess?
Let's hope Bella will be liked.
Thanks for writing!
Spikey
Reviewer: indiainksky (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 09:08 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
Well, I hope Jasper goes away, but doubt that'll happen. He's probably going to whisk her off to France, or at least try. I know she used to love him, but she's a little gullible sometimes around him.
Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 08:43 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
Bella finally made up her mind. Yippee. Edward's mother will love her. I think Alice might just pop back up and steal Jasper's heart again. That would be good.
Reviewer: Joey Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 08:31 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
This is one of the bst chapters so far great writing love this story!
I kinda hope Jasper ends up alone and miserable but I'm guessing alice will show up again and they'll live happily ever after too, just not as happy as edward and bella
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 08:03 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
Loved it.
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 07:43 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
Aww..I can't be so mad at Edward anymore. Darn.
I'd say that Alice should come back for Jasper, but she seems like a little shit ;) So I don't know...maybe a Charlotte?
Please don't let him buy tickets to France.
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 07:40 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part Two
Jasper can take a long walk off a short dock.
Just sayin'...
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:00 PM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
I will sneak write myself into this story and stab Jasper.
I fully volunteer for that responsibility =P
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 04:15 PM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
I can't beleive there are only 3 chapters left!! I love Edward...Jasper needs to back off, just my opinon. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 12:11 PM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
Edward... I prefer Edward over Jasper in this instant.
Reviewer: Jharris1313 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 11:43 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
God I hope that Jassper will see paint in her hair and that she sees him trying to buy her love instead of earning it. Great chapter, can't wait until your next update!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 09:53 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
Looks like Jasper doesn't know Bella at all. Again he is trying to think that expensive gifts are better than thoughtful ones. He is such a snob. Gotta love Rose for pointing out the obvious to Bella.
Reviewer: carolbenatti (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 05:43 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
If she kickd E and go to J I will kick her ass!
Things that came from the herat,are way better than things that came from money
xx
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 02:44 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
Edward just does it for me. :) I'll go painting with Edward any day.
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 12:34 AM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
Take the risk, take the risk! :) I've just read this entire story in one sitting and loved it. Rarely do fics bring such strong emotions out in me as this one has. I'm definitely looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 12:00 AM · On: He Shocked Me
On one hand, Bella is such a pushover!! She doesn't know how to say no!!! On the other hand, I totally know where she is coming from...and have kinda been there myself. :)
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 11:45 PM · On: He Moved on from Me
Wow. I am not sure I've ever hated Edward in any other fic as much as I hate this Edward!! In other words, you've done a fantastic job at creating real characters and emotions in this story, especially with Bella.
Also, while I'm leaving this review, I have to say that as much as Alice has always been a favorite character for me, I really love how she's been villianized in this story. You did it so well while still maintaining core aspects of the Alice character.
Reviewer: bscullen2010 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 11:29 PM · On: He Met Me
This is is progressing nicely... This chapter reminds me of my own personal experience- having to choose between what is safe and a risk. The guy took the risk and chose me and for that he is now my husband and we are living the greatest love story.
I like Rosalie's character in this story, she is truly a great friend...She is right, you will can never stop thinking about 'The One' you are meant to be with when they are away and never stop beaming with happiness when you are around them.
Thanks for writing a a fab story.
Reviewer: Elysia23 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 08:09 PM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
RISK! Risk! I hope she takes the risk! I'm for Edward all the way! lol. But when am I not? ;)
Great job. Thank you for spoiling us. I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 06:33 PM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
Decisions, decisions. No contest - Edward! Jasper cannot be trusted. Ed is a keeper.
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 06:16 PM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
Well speaking from experience I've taken the risk and got my ass burnt. Looking back I wish I would of chosen the safe bet but as they say...you live and learn. Thanks for the great chapter! See ya Saturday!
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 03:07 PM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
good grief! Bella still has her head up her ass. Still with ya though. thanks for the update!
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 03:03 PM · On: He Vied for Me: Part One
It's easy to make romantic gestures when you have money.
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