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Reviewer: stwin315 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
utimalte cliff hangerr!
Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
Wow!!!! Just stumbled on this story and love it so far...hope you plan on continuing??
Reviewer: suziecat444 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
very good
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
Wow, ch 6 already? Seems like yesterday... :)
Another great chapter... will Jasper be strong enough? I'm glad she finally opened them, but I wish she had put them up or something! :)
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
Poor Jazz. How will he extract himself from this without causing a scene or hurt anybody (which would cause a scene)? Perhaps Bella can come up with a distraction.
I figured that Jasper was the one behind the yellow envelopes. Though now I want to know the significance of all the stars.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: blueeyeddemon (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
Loved how this ended, cant wait for the next part.
Is this a Bella/Jasper fic? I wont stop reading if it is, but I think of Jasper as more of a brother figure than a lover. Your gonna have to sell it hard.
Loved it. Its beautifully written and I'd love to see the next part in my inbox as soon as possible.
Reviewer: zgp3 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
I keep hoping Jasper's purpose is to somehow get E and B back together, not for something to happen between J and B......Also, what about poor Alice?
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
Very beautiful.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
I like this gentle nudging about what is important to enjoy in life...all the things she'd been letting pass by...
Not HORRIBLY worried about Jasper in the dance...but i DO have a niggling suspicion, that perhaps there are messages in the stars....
Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
Awh. Poor Jazzy.
Can't wait for more! <3
Reviewer: alys (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
love b&j
great chapter.... betting his eyes are darkening due to the closeness of 1 human LOL
Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
I really like your story. I've read a few Bella/Jasper stories and it always feels awkward and wrong when she leaves Edward for Jasper, but the timing is just right here. I look forward to keeping up with it!
Reviewer: calamityme99 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 6 Jazz
Thank you for updating.This story is charming me and I cannot wait to see how it progresses.
Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 Parts
Cool, I want more :0
xx
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 5 Parts
Uh oh...the pieces are falling together... :) Another good chapter, thanks for writing :)
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 5 Parts
I'm still getting the feeling that it's Jazz behind the letters and not Jacob. And I like the fact you're keeping Jake in character. He still pisses me off in the way he does things (so did Canon Jake), but clearly his heart is in the right place.
Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 5 Parts
Finally...she gets it!
Reviewer: lpeaz814 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Canaries
so glad she finally opened the letters...can't wait to see what they say
Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 5 Parts
This story is absolutely beautiful. I can't wait to see what Bella does now that she knows who the letters are from. And will she open the rest of the letters? I hope so. But good things come to those who wait so I will wait as patiently as possible for you to continue!
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 5 Parts
about bloody time Bella figures it out! THANKYOU! (yes, it was driving me crazy!)
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Scarf and a Napkin
What? She doesn't remember that the letters are marked J??? Well, I guess it's been a few weeks, but I want her too. Maybe if I yell loud enough, she'll hear me? Another good chapter, thanks for writing!
Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Scarf and a Napkin
Really enjoying this story. Never given much thought to Jasper and Bella, but................why not? Love Jasper!!! Can't wait to read more
Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 4 A Scarf and a Napkin
I love this story! I like anything with Jasper, to begin with but Jasper/Bella stories are even better and this is the second amazing one I found today! I have to know, though, is Bella going to read all the notes now? Wait, don't tell me! Just update soon...
Please & Thank You!
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Scarf and a Napkin
I surprised she didn't put together that it was Jasper sending the letters and signing them with J.
Reviewer: maruxf (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 4 A Scarf and a Napkin
I'm a E+B gal...but this story is fantastic!!! Please keep updatin'!
Awesome job,
M.
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