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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2011 03:21 PM · On: Dry Gulch

Well geez, you would think that the woman about to have been raped would have been shown some respect! So, will she become the next outlaw? Keep writing!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Keep Your Powder Dry

Aww, now he's in trouble and forty dollars plus poorer! Let's hope his friends were prepared for the worst!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 08:47 PM · On: Keep Your Powder Dry

whoopsie

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Bad Medicine

Well, Edwards temper did waylay his mission to find out what Bella was asking for in her dream! Will James best Edward again? He is older and wiser now, isn't he?

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Man-a-hanging

I think maybe he will be struggling a bit more with his conscience now! And will he find out what Bella meant about her not having an easy life?

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Prologue

Life changes in an instant! How will he handle his new reality?

Reviewer: WinniePony (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Man-a-hanging

I like the premise. Outlaward is sexy. I'm curious to see how it plays out. :)

On an unrelated note, a gelding and a stallion are different. Geldings are castrated, stallions are not. Therefore, stallions are much stronger and more unpredictable than their calmer counterparts. You referred to Edward's horse as both, just thought you should know it has to be one or the other. 

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:33 AM · On: Man-a-hanging

cant wait for the next

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Man-a-hanging

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Man-a-hanging

Really great chapter!

Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Prologue

Great start! Very intriguing!

Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Prologue

This is very well-written. I love your descriptions - very vivid. I'm excited to see what happens!

Reviewer: amazingragdoll (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Prologue

seems like an interesting story to me.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Prologue

looking forward to more

Reviewer: lfcpam (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Prologue

cool story  cant wait to see what is next

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