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Reviewer: bellableu (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 12:29 PM · On: I Don't Belong Here

love love love!

Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 08:07 PM · On: I Don't Belong Here

Aww!!!!! I almost started crying!!!!!! Poor Edward!

Thanks for the tear-wrenching chapter. It was perfect. :)

~Madelyn xx

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:45 PM · On: I Don't Belong Here

ok so that was real short....but I don't know if I could have taken anymore right now..... the pain that you capture everyone feeling is amazing...... please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 06:08 PM · On: I Don't Belong Here

:( More please!! <3

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:39 PM · On: I Don't Belong Here

omg this so sad - love ur story cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Decorations

like the concept, and enjoy the banter...but one question...she was holding the lantern wire in her teeth? not sure that would've worked:)

Reviewer: alphabetty (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2010 09:21 AM · On: The Conference

Poor Mopeward. I want to feel bad for him, but sometimes it's to damn hard. Also... blog update lady! Chop, chop :)

Reviewer: alphabetty (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 05:09 PM · On: The Solution

I love your end notes as much as your story. Is that strange, likely. Should you come to expect this from me, definitely.

Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 04:06 PM · On: The Conference

I LOVE IT!!!

I loved Alice's Twilight, and I'm so glad that you decided to continue the story. Alice is my all time favorie character and this is one of my favorite fan fics :)
Keep writing!! xx

Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 07:35 PM · On: The Conference

:)

Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 07:31 PM · On: The Solution

good & neat @ the same time

Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Decorations

:)

Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 06:40 PM · On: The Conference

Simply A-MAZA-ZAZING! Honestly, you've captured Alice as we all love her, I"m really interested now because as we are all aware, there is this huge blank spot from when the Cullen's leave, and pop back in Bella's life. I feel for Jazz though, I always wondered how he would have handled the emotion in that time frame, but thankfull I'll get to see now. Can't wait for the update! xoxo

Reviewer: jmszas1979 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 06:46 PM · On: The Conference

hey... hey ... hey.. nice chapter kid!! i'm here again ... Zoey!!!!!! one of your fans that promised to write a compliment ..... ur... i guesss!!!!!!!!!??????????

anyway, hurry up with more chapters to ... PLEASE!!!!!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!! thank you!!!!!!! and you curtesy of your number one biggest fan for the twilighted website... and all so your friend... i hope!!!!!!!!! ZOEY!!!!!!! PEACE!!!!!!LOVE YA"!!!!!!!!!! :)<3(:

Reviewer: Sarsacia (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 09:22 PM · On: The Conference

Poor Alice. Poor Jasper. Edward being such a selfish pansy. I always figured Alice would have shown him what would happen if he left Bella and he did it anyway. I think he got off waaay too easy, but that is a different story. I can't wait to see where Alice goes from here (and I seriously have my doubts that Alice didn't keep tabs on Bella). Just my $.02...

Reviewer: kikirev (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 08:37 PM · On: The Conference

Wow...so glad I discovered this fic. You're doing a fantastic job of a canon interpretation that is new and interesting but in keeping with the characters. Love Alice and her pov. Can't wait to read more...thanks!

Reviewer: Sallyhop1 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 10:26 AM · On: The Conference

Your vague threat was tempting me not to review- Carlisle in my front yard.... Nicely done, Natalie. Edward is just so screwed up at this point & we know where this will lead. It was nice to see Alice give him a piece of her mind and try to make him see reason. Keep up the great writing. Looking forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 04:20 AM · On: The Conference

Awesome! Stupid Edward....I hate angsty Edward. Soo annoying. Just stay with Bella for goodness sake!

Great job!

~Madelyn xx

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2010 02:59 AM · On: The Conference

Natalie,

Now you know you really aren't going to kill him....make the Sullen One suffer......... yes!!!!!!! As always love your ability to capture Alice in your story..... looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: DecodedParamore (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 08:02 PM · On: The Conference

Another great chapter. Perhaps they should have just locked Edward up until he came to his senses but I suppose hind sight is 20/20. I've been meaning to hit you up with my interesting threats but life has been rather demanding lately. Perhaps this week, I"m thinking something involving roller skates and peanut butter but it's still in the planning process.

Author's Response:
OKAY WAIT

i just updated it again, go look at the new vague threat... a starting point, dont ya think?? Let me know! Hehe:) And next time I'll give more specific details... and probably throw you in somewhere... any Cullen or wolfpack men you prefer to keep to yourself? I'll work something out!

Laters,

Nat

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:54 PM · On: The Conference

looking forward to more

Reviewer: readlots (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 07:51 PM · On: The Conference

Great update. Thanks :-) I agree, Edward isn't making sense. lol

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 06:40 PM · On: The Solution

Oh, I thought I favorited this a while ago. I'm glad I found it again. I love how you write Alice. I look forward to the next chapter. There- I'm favoriting it right now....=-)

Author's Response:
Glad to have you back:) Thanks for the review, as ever, but hang it there... it gets rough >.<

See ya:)

Natalie

Reviewer: Sallyhop1 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2010 03:28 PM · On: The Solution

Thanks Natalie! This has been fun so far. Can't wait to see what you come up with for the Cullen's time away from Forks while Bella is having her "melt down". Keep up the great work. I loved reading your Alice's Twilight.

Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 05:18 PM · On: The Solution

Ahh! Loved it! :) Can't wait for more!

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