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Reviewer: OposKneg (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Natural Selection

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2011 10:43 AM · On: Natural Selection

New reader & I'm really enjoying your story. Keep writing please!

Reviewer: TheGodsCanDance (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Natural Selection

dum dum DUM.

And ouch. I knew. I mean, of course I did. I read the summary and chapter one but still.

Ouch.

Reviewer: TheGodsCanDance (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Homeostatis

Oh wow.

Such a fabulous entry into a story!

It is a fresh take and well told and well written and a really great baiting of a story hook.

Well done. And thanks for sharing : )

Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Natural Selection

Really good chapter.

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Natural Selection

I love the premise of this story and the quality of your writing tells me I'm in store for a real treat. I do feel, however, that you give a little too much of the plot away in the summary. I feel like I already know what's going to happen...at least for a majority of the story. I think leaving it at "Now Bella will be proxy for his revenge." would have been an incredible teaser and just the right amount of information to get people intrigued.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for that spot of advice, as well as the compliment. It's actually a great idea. I'll make the change.

Reviewer: DarkMetalDoll (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Natural Selection

More please! hahaha

Reviewer: gaspdelight (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Homeostatis

Soo.... This story only has one chapter... And I want to see more of it...

 

Update soon, please?! I think this will turn out a fantastic story...

Reviewer: slc6548 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 11:38 AM · On: Homeostatis

looks interesting.

Reviewer: DarkMetalDoll (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Homeostatis

What a teaser! I can't wait to read this story! I love it so far. Hope to see a new chapter soon!

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Homeostatis

Well goodness. Somehow I am not that suprised about how Jasper is thinking. It seems to me that without Alice than Jasper would most likly return to the way that he found easy to exist as you have shown in this chapter. I am looking forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: Posy (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Homeostatis

Ooooh... Exciting! :D

Reviewer: MinaBR (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 07:24 AM · On: Homeostatis

Wow, really great plot, keep it coming!

Reviewer: way2old4this (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Homeostatis

Oh. My. Jasper.  

I'm in love already.  Keep up the good work!
~Mary

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Homeostatis

Wow! I can't believe Bella refused to go and save Edward! Can't say that i blame her though. I love an angry Jasper! HeXs so damn sexy. Rawr! Lol. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Flitterbugz (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Homeostatis

noooo!!! there has to be more! plz plz pkzplzplz update soon! i just have to know what happens! i love jazzXbella fanfics,and yours looks like its gonna be a damn good one

Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Homeostatis

Darksper....this has some good potential.  

Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Homeostatis

This looks very promising :) How is this any of Bella's fault? Roaslie was the catalyst for Edward's venture to the Volturi.

Looking forward to the next update :)

Author's Response:

In this AU, Alice died when Bella refused to accompany her to Volterra in a failed attempt to save Edward. Therefore, Jasper blames Edward and the Volturi for Alice's death. 


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