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Reviewer: kikirocks (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow that was sooo hot...god i totally wet myself reading this...and these were $70 victoria secret underwear....damn...how am i going to explain this to my hubby when he comes out of the bathroom.... i wish i could give you more than a ten
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 1
(sweat running down my forehead)....holy cow. More, please!!!
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yup...it's HOT in here!!
Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hot, definately hot
Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
certainly is
Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
it's hot, way more than hot! but i'm having a hot flush too lol
Reviewer: twilightlez (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
*panting* More? Please?
Reviewer: cherrypie0192 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
more please........ that was freaking HOT!! Want... no NEED more!?!?!?
Reviewer: IvieM (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 1
It is definately hot in here. OMG.......I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.....ahhh
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Is it hot in here?? its a fucking INFERNO!!! DAMN...SOLD!!! favorited author and story!! you so rock at this!!
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
*** THUD ***
Reviewer: whitestripe (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow, yeah its hot in here!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 1
Pretty wild and amazing. Are you continuing this fic?
Reviewer: Bookworm03 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 1
Holy moly...that was great! And yes, it's hot in here!!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey read the one shot and i think its cool that your continuong it =] this was a cool cahp =]
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey read the one shot and i think its cool that your continuong it =] this was a cool cahp =]
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey read the one shot and i think its cool that your continuong it =] this was a cool cahp =]
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
"Permission to review?"
Yes, incredibly hot! So hot, the rubber band is melting....; so hot, Bella's dress needs cleaning....; so hot, the ravioli seemed cold....
Three fucking weeks! If only the bruises were camoflaged (sp?), is that all he was waiting for???
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
That was mindblowingly HOT! Seriously! Can't wait for a possible 3 chapter. Ever think of having Bella pass out (not fall asleep) after an intense orgasm and then writing Edward's reaction? Having had them, I can say that the rush after coming back from one is intense. But the look of panic, when you don't respond, to intense pleasure, on your lover's face, knowing what they did to you, once you come to, is even better. Love your S&M side :)
Reviewer: 4everintwilight (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, I have one word for this:
I'msoaked!
Man, was that ever hot!
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
no it really is hot in here... *pants*
damn... just damn
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
So, so hot! Could I possibly love Edward Cullen any more?? No, didn't think so.
Reviewer: eddiescherry (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
JEEBUS, that was motherflippin' HOT. I think something fried in my brain, and my husband has no idea what he's in for later, heh heh.
I thought I could write a pretty good lemon, but DANG, I gotta step up my game after this. If I can bring it, I will be thanking you for inspiration in every other fic I write.
Are you planning on continuing this story? If not- why, and will you take bribes? =)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2008 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 1
You definitely have a knack for writing lemons... this was so incredibly hot. I need to take a cold shower just from reading it. Great job. I beg of you to continue to write more!!!!
Reviewer: bubba212 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
wow's the word alright. i need a cold shower.
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