Love Modest Mouse!  love "Dashboard"...that's all I gotta say...:)

Awh cheer up Benna there

is a psycho in Forks who'd like

to see you bleed.. I assume.. :)

Fuck Renee is a major bitch... never liked her

she's almost always evil in fics..

Your Bella fucking rocks.. she's different and I like that a lot ;D

Well, this chapter was better than the previous ones. Not that they are bad, they are interesting. But there was a lot of filling, of unnecessary things. I loved the humor though ;)

This chapter was good, I liked it ;) And you managed to show a lot with just a few words - perfect! ;)

I'm reviewing but not because I've laughed.  I get it.  Bella is in a bad mood and she's got a 'super power' she hates.  She's been bitching about it for three chapters and by the looks of it, it's going to go on for a lot more before she even gets to that first day of class.  So, as your Bella might say "I'm officially over it." Set up is one thing, dragging something out in an overwrought attempt at "comedy" is another.  You don't have to try so hard.  Good luck with the rest but I can't stick around.

Author's Response:

I know it's dry, trust me, I know. But I actually started writing this fic a while ago. It's something like my first attempt at writing. It gets better as it goes on, matures a bit, I guess. There's a lot less bitching by chapter 17, which is up on fanfiction. I appreciate the fact that you took time to review, but I would hope that maybe you would rethink your views if you read something with a bit more finesse. I will be the first to admit that this is not my best writing, but I also think it's important because it's somewhat like a bird trying to fly. This is my failed attempt. But I know I'll make it out of the nest somehow. I do not condemn your critique, I think it's spot on. So thank you for taking time out of your day to give me your opinion and I hope you might not find as much fault with some of my later works.

angsty.. too angsty for ch 1 ?

Author's Response:

Hah, I get that a lot. But don't worry, that's about as angsty as it will get for a LONG time.

She really is a sanrky thing isn't she.  I love her. Can't wait for more.

I'm so excided about the next chapter! I would love to see Edward soon *whink whink*

 

~Posy

I laughed but am still waiting for the biology scene.

So I am doing what I seldom do and favoriting your story after just two chapters. Ugh,risky. Well, I hope you are a fast updater, or, if you aren't, at least you add a recap. After 10 days or so I would have forgotten about what this story is about.

Karma needs to find Renee

A very interesting start. Nice twist that Bella can read minds. Can't wait to find out what happens when she gets to Forks and meets the other characters... Hope you post the next chapter soon.

Poor thing.  Really hope that things get better for her!