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Reviewer: BRITANY14 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 36: Top of the World
please update soon
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 36: Top of the World
Thank you i'm in the midwest, hell-troious day yesterday was. But aside from that ... lets talk about your chapter. i love the normalicy you give, and the progression, i almost wanted Edward to propose to Bella. I love the X-mas Eve Wish that was good, and B admitting she is a 'few' chapters ahead of Edward. I think he would move things along if he knew that was what she wanted, lol. Anyway cant wait for christmas
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 36: Top of the World
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 36: Top of the World
great chapter!
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 36: Top of the World
You had me smiling the whole way through this chapter, although I almost cried at the Christmas tree scene.
Reviewer: karenec (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 36: Top of the World
oh my goodness, that was so sweet, from start to finish - loved it! glad everyone's rebuilding lives and relationships, as well. yay!
Reviewer: hockeywife87 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2011 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 35: Follow Your Heart
You had me hooked! Great story (: Can't wait for the next chapters!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 35: Follow Your Heart
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 35: Follow Your Heart
ok so how long do i have to wait to see what happens next, and what's going to happen next, i want to see their HEA!!!!
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 34: Be Mine
ah! *tears* (Lots of tears!) I'm so mad i had to read the kiss like 10 times! work kept interrupting! (LOL)
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 33: Tattoos and Misunderstanding
Oh please, oh please, oh please let them have a date!
MAC!!!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 31: What Now?
YOU BETTER BELIEVE *HIDES* What are you thinking, that boy needs to fight for her, ... oh that's the Twi-fan talking. Sorry. I think i'm nearing the end of your updated chapters and i'm going to be sad having to wait for what is next. But wait i will!
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 30: Battlefield
Does time really heal all wounds, are you going to fast forward now? what does anyone have left to say?
MAC! ??
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 29: Secrets and Lies
I still am uneasy about forgive and forget, or forgive but never forget. Sometimes, the fences are just too broken and cant be mended. You just have to build a new one from scratch. It's A LOT of hard work, but in the end you change the things you didnt like before and you paint it a differnt color. You seal it and protect it and when you do it with a greater sence of knowledge, pride and accomplishment, you have something that is built to last.
Starting over is hard, but with learning from you mistakes as a goal mindset what you get is better that what you had before the mistakes. If we dont fall how can we ever learn to walk.
OK Enough from me! UGH~! LOL!
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 28: We Carry On
OMG! OK so i read SEVERAL chapters on my ereader last night and I can't review on my ereader, but if you want i will go back and review every chapter, some of the quesitons and comments i had have already been answered. And I cant believe that my last possible guess at a supect was the right one! I was shocked to say the least. This is good, but i still dont see how you will bring Edward and Bella to a place where they can be soulmates?
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: BeautifulComplication (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 35: Follow Your Heart
I do love this story.. enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to next update. :-)
Reviewer: karenec (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 35: Follow Your Heart
this was a great chapter - so exciting to see bella and edward really trying to meet each other half-way. those crazy kids. and just when i think edward can't be any greater he is... aw :)
also, you got me good w/ emmet's opening "Bella's truck is at Edward's," -- i completely LOL'd at rosalie's reaction.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 11: House of Cards
it's good to see where everyone in Edwards family stands and I bet if she tried, Bella could get Rose's help to help Edward... hmmm
MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 10: Head Full of Doubt
very interesting, i knew she couldnt let it go and those files would haunt her, now ... onto the the meat
MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 9: Where Do I Begin?
oh yes i need to know why edward treated bella so badly and ... bella NEEDS to do some digging especially when she goes home and the fact that the files that are missing out of her desk are the ones pertaining to her and Edward and the last man to work at her desk is now dead!!!!
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shattered
so much ... clues, clues, and more, clues. Ok so here's where i stand. Suspect #1 - Phil -bad devorce, Suspect #2 - Mike - unrequited love, Suspect #3 - Jane - What ever happened in HS comes back to haunt Edward she wants to see him go down?, Suspect #4 - Random stranger - but that doesnt set well considering that Now Garrett Logan has been Murdered? there is a conneciton, oh and one last on Suspect #5 - Eric Yorkie - No man likes to be turned down even a rapist.
OH! and one MAJOR thing that been bugging me and i might have mentioned it, Bella and that Damn knife, she said on the stand that she saw him (Edward) with the knife, but ... was that a typo or did she get so upset on the stand she blurted it out, but she never really saw anything? just the blood?
Ok so i'm really gettin into this!
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 7: Your Words, Like a Bomb
BOY was i way off base. So this is how it will be ... actually i cant forsee anything and when i try you surprise me. Cant wait to read more.
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Beginning of a Revelation
wholy shit letters from edward? oh my? what do we not know about eddie??? was he really having an afair with Renee??? wholy crow? or are they letters to Charlie prclaiming his innocense?
GOTTA KNOW, MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 5: I Didn't Sign Up for This
sometimes we need to return to what is familiar before we can venture forward into the unknown. I love the storyline, but i'm wondering if B & E will ever even be able to find a freindly patch of grass to agree on. Know what i mean?
LOVE MAC!
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 4: Lost Ties
Why? i still dont think they had sufficent evedence, did they find his prints on the murder weapon?? that is a big one?
LOVE MAC!
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