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Reviewer: Pixie Chick (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 38: Avalanche
Please!!
I'm begging you...
UPLOAD ALREADY!!!
I mean that in the nicest way possible...
Reviewer: Goska (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 7: Your Words, Like a Bomb
Hi,
I only read 8 chapters of this story up to now, but I am totally captivated. I could barely sleep last night... Your story is very well written and thought out, I never troubles following you into flashbacks, which makes it a lot easier. I can´t wait to find out how the story will continue and who the murderer is (I´m sure it´s not Edward).
So, yeah, just wanted to say that I love your story. You got me addicted :)
Love,
Goska
Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 38: Avalanche
Excellent lemons- and I vote that B grow a spine and live with him.
Reviewer: writinginthemargins (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 38: Avalanche
This story has been so fantastic to read, I'm sad it's coming to an end but it's been a lovely journey. These scenes between Bella and Edward were so sweet (and damn sexy). I love the way you've written them. Can't wait to see how it ends!
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 38: Avalanche
i feel sad for alice in a way...she totally deserved edward to be angry with her i mean that is her brother her blood for godsakes but bella....did bella honestly expect alice to be comfortable talking to the person convicting her brother of murder and destroying her family...i am not blaming bella for doing her job trying to avenge her mother and edward did seem the obvious choice but she cant expect her best friend to just still be friends with her while looking at bella everyday would remind alice what happened to her brother,...bella has to understand where alice was coming from too....this isnt all one sided
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 38: Avalanche
Good Chapter......
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 38: Avalanche
great chapter!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 38: Avalanche
Well...I think we have two very very happy campers. Yes indeed. I hope they have a long and wonderful life together. Bella has finally found a way to let go of all of her past, and is happy in the present, and Edward never wants to look back. I think he'll find a way to convince Bella that they should live together. They love one another and need to discuss it all through. Love it all! Can't wait fo rmore! Would love to see a few more chapters, but that's just me...he he.
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 38: Avalanche
You have taken us on quite the journey with these two. I can't wait to see what the next few chapters have in store.
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 37: Long Time Coming
Excellent Chapter love how their relationship is progressing.
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: What Goes Without Saying
oh shit! Where are Rose and Bella!? this isn't good!!!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 13: Restoring Faith
Hmmm. Warden seems abit shady to me
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 12: Dear Mom
Hmmm. Bella's files go missing and now someone has put flowers on her grave... The plot thickens....
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 37: Long Time Coming
I absolutely loved this chapter. It was sweet....when Edward was staying in bed with her because she was sick.....it was romantic.....when Emmett asked Edward what was going on, and Edward explained nothing, how he defended her.....it was hot....I mean cum on (haha) the sex between these two is explosive. He hasn't had sex in two years, and even before that he has admitted it was OK, and Bella never had sex. Yes...Yes....Yes....it was HOT! Love it! The conversation in bed the next morning is wonderful! Love it all! Can't wait for another chapter.
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 9: Where Do I Begin?
Bella has courage, even if sh doesn't see it. It was very brave of her to go visit him.
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 4: Lost Ties
Oh geeze. What a mess. There's something else going on here... I can feel it in my bones!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Going Home
This is a very interesting story!
Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 37: Long Time Coming
So sweet...I loved this chapter! I loved how honest they were with each other. Can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 37: Long Time Coming
i am surprised she didnt jump his bones in the am,..i wouldve...i mean she had sex for the first time but it doesnt hurt that bad,,,she acts more stressful about it then she should be../i would rather do that then go to the zoo...she is crazy.////good chapter though
Reviewer: Hfrankz (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 11: House of Cards
Slowly catching up. I've been up way past when I should have fallen asleep the past two nights reading this story. lol. I am loving it so far, and I am anxious to read more! I just don't understand how Alice completely hates her best friend because she testified against Edward... but Rosalie is okay? A bit hypocritical in my opinion, but I hope I get to find out more about their falling out! I'm curious.
Excellent work so far! I'm off to read the next...
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 03:04 AM · On: Prologue: Meet the Cullens
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 37: Long Time Coming
great chapter!
Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 37: Long Time Coming
I liked the communication during this chapter. I loved it. Great lemon. very romantic.
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 37: Long Time Coming
What I like most about this chapter is that it is REAL.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 37: Long Time Coming
I just gave a mental girlie squeal (believe me that is very unlike me!) - this chapter was just that good.
Can't wait for more
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