I always see this on FFnet, and also how people talk about it, saying it's amazing. I just don't like reading stories on FFnet. Plus, this story is complete over there, right? I'd never finish it if I start reading a completed story. So now you've posted it here, it means I can read each chapter as they come. I just hope it doesn't get updated like every day. I'd never keep up *laughs* I'm going off track.
Onto the real review. I really like this start. It's interesting to see the prologue AFTER it's all happened. Something made Alice hate Jasper, but something made Jasper feel anger towards Alice, or else he wouldn't be snapping at her like that.
I can't wait to see where this is going. I haven't heard anything about the plot, just that it is really good.
I was wondering, can I add this to my series? It's called Eternal Hope, and solely for Jasper/Alice stories. Here's a link: http://twilighted.net/viewseries.php?seriesid=333
Also, if you need a banner for your story, I'd make one for you, if you like :)
Yes the story is complete over at FFnet. And we completely understand you're desire not to read it over there. We're pleased to see you give it a shot now that it is here. :)
We do hope that you enjoy the ride, it's one heck of a roller coaster ;)
In regards to your offer to have this story added to Eternal Hope, I sent you a message in private :) And while yes we do have a banner, we never pass down the opertunity to have read inspired artwork, so that is your call.
Thank you again for the review!
K & Robs