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Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2018 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 1

So sweet! Another wonderful one shot.

Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

The fact that she was so worried about Penelope right at the end made it adorable. Other than that, that was a really nice one-shot, and I love how he finally gave in.

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

Thanks for a terrific and very different one shot.  I loved this Edward and Bella.  Do you think you might ever write more of this story.  I would love to hear about their lives together and if they ever met up with the Cullens.

Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was... different... cool!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

i loved it so happy edward changed her
that was kinda funny at the end
you a wonderful author very creative and detailed i look forward to reading more from you

Reviewer: Cullen Eclisped (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very original, I liked it!

Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, what a story, I really loved it. It was sad though what happened to Bella and Jacob. I'm glad that Edward found her and that Sam gave his blessing for Edward to change her. I loved the ending, that was funny. ;)

Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

LOL Of course leave it to Bella to say something like that in the heat of the moment. This was a great one-shot i'm glad you won.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

what an odd last line to a story lol....great job!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 1

interesting variation... had to chuckle at Bella's concern for the Eiffel Tower and Penelope... I think Pen would be fine, and probably end up almost as a "therapy pet" for newborn Bella :)

oh and the Tower's already been standing, what, 110 years longer than it was intended to? What's the worst that could happen? hehe it's not like Paris and France don't have a dozen other well known landmarks.

I wonder how they'd go meeting back up with the Cullens in this version though? :)

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great story. Loved how caring and nurturing Edward Bella had woken him from a dream. I know Edward was conflicted but he had to turn her, its too personal a thing for someone else to do. Hope Penelope makes the adjustment...LOL

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for posting it.

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it!  Poor Penelope!  :)

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

A lovely story, faultlessly told. All the saga in an one shot. Somehow it is helping me to finish the one I am writing ... thanks

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

that was so good. i wish there was more. i would love to read more about their future and maybe them interacted with the cullen's. also, i wonder how she will handle the bloodlust. anyway, thank you.

Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

Really really liked it like a lot. I love how she didn't feel the pain but just a arm feeling taking over so at least Edward wouldn't feel too guilty for changing her.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really love the story! Pooe Bella - thank goodness Edward found her & loved her! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: meadowmate78 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Beautiful one-shot! I liked the real things that were put in the story such as Penelope-service dogs are awesome! Looking forward to reading more from you!

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