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Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 21: Epilogue

thank you just doesnt seem enough for this beautiful well written story i just finished it and im smiling thru tears please keep writing! Love&Light

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 5

hi just started reading learning to love dont know if you still read reviews but having been where bella was i wanted to say you handled a senitive subject very well ive read some stories where they treat it like erotica and i really appreciate that you didnt just wanted to sat thanks anow ill continue reading hope ill see new stories frm you

Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2012 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 21: Epilogue

what a beautiful story love this Edward abuse is horrible I know been there and you handled it very well thank you looking forward to more stories from you Love@Light

Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

this is a good story. At first I didn't know where you were going with Bella and Jasper, then along came Edward. I like to read a good meaningful story like this. Not just meet and constant sex, to me that kinda gets old real fast. Thanks for this story line, its such a true problem in society today. Pain, scars inside and outwardly and so many time one or the other dying.--------Don't get the wrong idea about my comments because I really like a good love story and for one who has been so wounded to finally find some peace and someone to truly love them and treat them with respect is  wonderful.

Reviewer: LuckyLeo (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 21: Epilogue

I just finish your wonderful story. I am sorry that I did not leave any reviews before this but the story was 2 good to put down. The fact that I compleasted it in 2 days say alot . I cried and I laughed with this story. Great Job.

 

 

Reviewer: wendycd41056 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2011 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: Epilogue

great story, i decided to read this while waiting for your update on Feral.

Thanks

Wendy

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 21: Epilogue

very very good ending

thanks for writing it

bye bye

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 21: Epilogue

O.M.G. *sniff* Absolutely PERFECT ending!!! Thank you so much for sharing your awesomeness with us here on Twilighted!!  I hope to see more of your fabulous work here.  Much love, Linda xxoo

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2011 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 21: Epilogue

Great ending to a great story! They are finally married and now parents....love it. The story really came full circle. Bella is finally with someone to make her forget about all of the troubles of her past. Thank you for sharing. Good luck.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 21: Epilogue

cute ending! 

Reviewer: BellaMarieSwa112 (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2011 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 20

that was soooo sweet!!!! It was very good! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2011 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 20

Bummer it's over but YEAH for the Happily Ever After!! Great job sweetie & hope you keep on writing? ;+)  Love ya! Linda



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm working on an epi for this and I also have another story posted here called Feral. I appreciate you always reviewing! xo!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 20

Wait.,..this is the end...NOooo.   I love your story, and how everything end is just so sweet.   She just accepted Edward and finally agrees to a life with him, children, everything, and then fade to black.  Please tell us there is an epilogue.   We need it...Pleaseeee.   Thanks for your story.   It brightened our days.    We will miss you.   Thank you!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I enjoyed every minute of writing it! I will in fact be adding and epilogue...writing as we 'speak'!

Reviewer: robstensiempre (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 20

Please tell me there is another chapter or a sequel to this story. It doesn't say this story is completed yet so i hoping there is another chapter.

 



Author's Response:

I will be doing an epilogue. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fir3 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 20

what a sweet story, although I would have preferred a slightly longer final chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I will be doing an epilogue.

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 20

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 20

im excited that they got their happy ending! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: twilightluver96 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 20

Please, PLEASE!, tell me there is going to be another chapter. I know it said 'The End'. But, you could just be playing, right?

Eunice



Author's Response:

That was in fact the end, but thanks to my lovely validation beta, I am working on an epilogue and will post it as soon as I get it written!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 19

im glad that he got what he diserved! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 19

YEAH BABY!!!!!!!! Take THAT you piece of shit James!! Revenge is ssssoooo sweet & I hope he has a lovely time with Biggy!!! LOL



Author's Response:

I thought it was only fitting that he is now at someone's mercy! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 19

VERVERY GOOD KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND POST SOON

BYE BYE



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 19

It was definitely nice to see James finally get what he should have coming to him.   He might not be in jail for twenty years, but he will most definitely not enjoy his stay.   This won't be a Four Seasons experience, maybe more of a Red Ass Inn experience, he he.   Awesome!!!   If only all nasty people got their true punishment in life!!    Charlie was coming through in true daddy style!!   Glad to see it.   Can't wait to see a more confident Bella now!   Keep up the Great writing!   



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I wanted James to get what he deserved, but I wanted to be as true to reality as I could be and sadly domestic violence is not high up on the punishable offense list. I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 18

James will hopefully be behind bars soon where he belongs!   Bella will hopefully be so much stronger once she knows she has nothing to be afraid of anymore.    This was such a sweet chapter too, how they both want to be together all the time now, and Edward is willing to have Bella move in.    Hearing them say they love one another now, is just so special.   Can't wait to see when they are actually able to commit to one another.   Keep up the spectacular writing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, I appreciate it!

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 18

they are awsome together 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 18

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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