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Reviews For An Eye For An Eye
Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter Four

poor bella, cant wait to see how she gets hooked up with james and if edward cares



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 03:16 AM · On: Chapter Three

Hmm... what now, Jerkward?



Author's Response:

That he is. I dislike my E :P

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 03:12 AM · On: Chapter Two

Uh oh... Cheaterward is in for it...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter One

OoO, good start, I like :) I'm assuming we'll figure out what happened in those two years coming up, so I won't ask :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Loveisdifferent (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter Three

Darling I love your story! =) But if you do not update soon, I will hunt you down and eat you!! Just by-the-way. <3 Please write soon, I love your story so much. Edward is a huge dick though!



Author's Response:

Your review made my day! I'm glad your enjoying it and thanks for reviewing. I'll update soon :)

Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter Two

Am I really the firste one to review! I like to see what happens further, please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your update and yes your first to update which is awesome!!! I posted another chapter, but it needs to be verified first, here is a teaser to hold you off :)

 

"Eddie?"

I guess all things have to come to an end, Edward thought, wondering why he let this affair go on so long. I don't know why I put up with her shit in the first place. I can't even stand her voice!

Because you thought she'd be a good fuck. Plus, Bella wasn't putting out. A man has needs Eddie, a voice said in the back of his head, that same voice that convinced him that fucking Rosalie was a good idea.

Shut up!

The evil voice laughed at him, Eddie, Eddie, Eddie. His subconscious tsked him. You can't run away from the truth, you fucked her because that slut girl friend, no, I'm sorry… ex-girlfriend wasn't giving you any. His subconscious mocked him. How does it feel, to be dumped? Not too good does it? Asshole. You deserved it.

Shut up! Shut up! Shut up! Edward yelled, willing his subconscious to shut up.

Oh and Eddie, your whore is calling you. Edward's subconscious laughed.

Huh? Edward thought, absent to the fact that Rosalie was calling out his name.

"What now?" Edward asked. As the two left the club, Rose had picked up the car keys that Bella threw at Edward, which Rose thought was quite funny.

"Where are your car keys?"

"In my pocket?" Edward said confused, coming out more like a question, then a statement. As if her statement reminded Edward of something, he felt his pockets for his keys. Where the hell are they?

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