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Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
well written and i would be interested in reading more only if he is not the ass this makes him out to be, if he is i don't want to read it. maybe james or someone stold the pics and maybe the woman is his ex or soon to be ex
Reviewer: En426 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow that's fucked up! Please tell me she spins this in her favor.
Reviewer: orcagirl09 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ugh! I cannot believe Edward would do that! Poor Bella. I love this story and want more! please add more chapters
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
I have enjoyed it so far, and I'd be interested in reading more if you wrote it. My opinion of the idea that her image is forever tarnished is that those Disney tweens are like teflon. Especially considering that Bella's character is 22- that's not a child anymore. I think the outrage, if there even is any outrage, over nude pictures, and sex tapes, and overtly sexual images, isn't because of the images themselves, but because of the age of the person in the picture or her position as a role model. Aside from that all a sexual photo would do would reinforce to those who already dislike you that you're a tramp.
Bella though is neither, and eventually I think her character would grow up enough to not regret the bravery that comes with trusting someone in that position, but perhaps regret the foolishness of who is trusted.
Reviewer: Boxer R65 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like this story. I buy the characters. Bella's p-o-v kept me engaged. I think your writing is good and this story has promise and I have made it on eof my favourites ( I wont post often however).
I also REALLY like HEA's.
As a heads up, if, as an author you chose to go with the plot line that slimy James swiped the pics of Bella off of Edward's computer in order to divert the blame off of Edward, I will groan in disappointment.
Edward, never should have asked to take pics of her while he's having sex with her. No. No. No. Hell no! Not, Nein, nix, neit, non, neh.
Good luck getting out of that one. Edward is seductively slimy. Perhaps Rose should beat the crap out of him or something.
I don't know - good luck. I like it. Except for..you know.
Reviewer: karengon2007 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh my god. I have to know what happens. This story is amazing. Add more soon.
Reviewer: amazingragdoll (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
so far it sounds like it could be an awesome story.
Reviewer: babynancy (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMFG you cant leve it there i hate edward and i dont like to hate him please please cont. this story
Reviewer: seven9v (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, that was just evil. You HAVE to continue this. :)
Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay, if you don't continue this, I just may have to hunt you down and murder you in your sleep! (not really, but it sounded good LOL!).
Reviewer: vampiregirl72 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, that was such an amazing first chapter. I sincerely hope you continue this as it would make a great story!!! Looking forward to next chapters to see what Edwards' excuse could possibly be.......did James leak these photos or is Edward just a jackass???? Please don't keep us waiting long!
Reviewer: kansas_girl1 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love the story can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: moongirl (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! That was one hot lemon! I love this Bella and am reserving judgement on Edward. Hmmm...not sure if there is a viable relationship here considering the leaked private pics could have a very negative effect on her career, not to mention her pride. Although I'm sure Rose can come up with a way to force Mr. Masen to cooperate in salvaging Bella's career in what ever way he has to in order to avoid a lawsuit.... Hope you continue this one!
Reviewer: shlly (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
this would be an interesting multi chapter story. Altho i think Edward is an ass. I kinda had a feeling he was gonna do that.
I loved the story tho
Reviewer: Twirl91 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
Seriously *whinespetulantly*
I think my love for Edward just got crushed like a bug hitting a car windscreen.. :S
That was pure pure pure EVILNESS!! :(
It was really great writing and I loved how you described each shot, everything was clear like I could actually picture everything you were writing..
The lemon was totally fukhot and gave me tingles :P but the ending made me want to throw Dickward off a bridge.. Grrr..
I hope you continue the story because I'd like to know if Edward is really the Assward he seemed at the end..
LovesLovesLoves to you and your AMAZIIIING writing..
Issy~
Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh please do. i don't want this to be the end. bella's words for body parts had me rolling on the floor. can't believe edward was such an asshole. please take the story further
Reviewer: chelsiecullenxox (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
please please make this a story it would be so so so amazing please im begging lol
Reviewer: tawxil (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! That was amazing! Please continue! I really want to know what the hell was going on in Edward's mind. Please please please!!
Reviewer: cemcclelland (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
I so hope it was James and not Edward. But even if it was, she should have known better.... Thanks for sharing!
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