Go Jasper! (Can't believe that I am saying that- your writing is that good!)

What is Edward up to?

wonderful chapter, I like how your exploring the relationship between bella and jasper.

I am confused as to how Edward didn't see these visions or memories of these visions when they were in her head. She couldn't control the timing of them.  Did Edward move on? Alice needs to tell Jasper this stuff because I have to know. Sorry, I'm getting antsy...LMAO

Haha - Bella the Vampire Slayer! Gold!

Great update! I like the way you've almost made me like Felix in this chapter. I can't wait to see what Aro has to say, and see what happens when Jasper and Alice turn up...

I love this sooo much!

ohh cliffy!! i hope u post more soon i have really enjoyed this and the plot is excellent.

omg another cliffhanger ouch hehe it is very good lol hurry with the next chapter very anxious to read on :)

Great chapter!  I am intrigued by Felix's behavior.  I hope the Volturi take Victoria out for lying about Bella!

damn you people and your cliffs!!! Love it!

WOW, so that was great. What's up with Felix? Can't wait for the next chapter.

I am going to be dangerously late for work but I have to review. I just pulled an allnighter with this story, nearly dropped off around 330am but there was no way I was going to miss the date with Logan and WOW was I rewarded.

Try to ignore the sleep-deprived babble.

First, I am SOOO Team Jasper because of you and wish to all that is Holy for a spin-off book (hey let's start with YOUR story) as I think Jasper is the unsung Twilight Hero.

Next I have to tell you how much I am loving this story - I think I'm at about chapter 30 - and can't bear the thought of coming to the pre-posted end. So I am willing to become your personal slave that you can never stop writing it and will post a new lengthy chapter once per day. Please, feed my completely admitted addiction.

I particularly love how utterly human you have made Jasper. It would be so much easier to forget he's a vampire than with Ed-(who?) -ward, who was more disgusted of being a vampire than any of them.

Jasper is so much more in settled in who he is as a vampire that Edwards angst-ridden seriousness and gulit seem stifling after this.

So for that, BRAVO.

Next I must admit my guilt and if I were Catholic I'd be in a confessional right now because I'm sure SM will have her own volturri guard after me if she ever reads this. I feel so ...guilty? about how much I LOVE how you have depicted Jasper in so many ways opposite Edward. If I had to I doubt I could find them all but there are so many little things that make me love his not-Edwardness. SO REFRESHING and definitely adds to the addiction.

The love scenes are the best I've read - just enough NC-17 but not the same old usual phrases and actions. And SOO realistic. Thank God.

Last, there are a couple excellently woven untied strings that will keep me from getting anything done at work today, so I'll braindump them here:

Why didn't Alice warn me about my parents? Can't wait for that one to play out. I'm pretty sure I know but I won't admit it to myself.

Logan. Nuff said. I think I got his number too, but again don't want to know for sure.

Will Bella ever call him Jazz or is that only an Alice-ism...?

Thank you so much for writing something refreshing - not once did I wince for reading the same phrases and adjectives used over and over ad nauseum. I could elaborate but I'm sure you know where I'm coming from.

Jasper, if you're reading this, I like decaf raspberry mocha with whip.

Chris.

Does Felix have a crush?  So interesting!  Will Edward ever make an appearance?  Such a good story.  It keeps me guessing as to what will happen next.