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Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 42

Oh, God! Every chapter I think it can't possibly get any better, and you blow me away with the next one! This was just fantastic! I don't know what to say other than - amazing! Out of all of the fan fics I read, this has to be my favorite!

Reviewer: RENESMEESMOMMY (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 42

Please hurry and update. this is one of my absolute favorite stories and I need to know what happens next.LOL

Its wonderful. Keep up the amazing writing :)

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 42

wow go jasper cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Dapenim (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 42

This story is by far the best one for me, I love Jasper and Bella being together, and with this twist it makes everything so much more exciting. Please continue posting and let us have the rest of the story as soon as humanly possible. I'm not sure if I ever want it to come an end BTW

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 42

Wow he brought the whole Volturi to it's knees.

Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 42

Oh my god. How can you stop?????

Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 42

amazing

Reviewer: shmommy88 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 41

I LOVE THIS STORY! I have always been Team Jasper and I love when Alice reveals that she never said Edward changes Bella! And the last line of this chapter has me reeling! I can't wait for the next installment. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful imagination with us!!

Reviewer: GWeasley (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 41

OH you have got to update!!! Please don't leave it there. Preaty please

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 41

I remember reading this part of your story and thinking..."NO! She didn't leave it there!" I can't wait until you get the next chapter approved. This is just as good the second time around.

Reviewer: Nienna243 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

You really are an amazing writer!

Jasper and Bella! What a match! Great choice, especially after all that has happend.

What will Edward's reaction be like?? Can't wait for the three of them to come together...

Anyway, KEEP WRITING!!! PLEEEEEAAAASSEEEEE!

Reviewer: edwards emo bella (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 41

nooooo please update pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ebonyeyez1 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 41

This is the most awesome story I ever read, is there going to be an update a sequel or what?

Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 41

whoa! more please!

Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 41

Very clever.  I love Bella's suggestion.  Can't wait to see what happens next although how can he get them to feel what he's feeling without effecting Bella as well.  Awesome as always.

Reviewer: KLJ1843 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 41

Ahhh! I need more! Such a good cliff to hang from, but still! The wait will be unbearable!!

Reviewer: eternallymusical (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 41

oooooo, the next chapter is going to be so good! i can feel it.

*bouces up and down*

i like your felix, i love him after he kicked the filth that is victoria out of the way. :)

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 41

Woo--smart girl that Bella.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: merryXgirl (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 41

Wow.  I have finished with all of your posted chapters and am so impressed!  What a cliffie!  Please post more soon! 

Reviewer: NaughtyVamptress (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 41

OMG! That was totally awesome and oh so original. I can't wait for you to update! By the way, I absolutely love this story and keep it in my favorites list!

Reviewer: Gaia (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 41

More please!!!! I LOVE this story and I really want to know what's going to happen next. You write in a very engaging and gripping way. Thanks.

 

Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 41

I love this story! 

Reviewer: Embrace (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 41

Oh. I can not wait for the next chapter. I want to see how all of that plays out. Again, props for Felix. He's the best Bad/Good vampire there. Lol. (Jasper doesn't count, he simply all good.)

Reviewer: Embrace (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 40

Oh geeze. I almost cried when Alice went into "You've always been who you are now." I was like. ;-; Oh no, don't cry, don't cry, but it's soooo sweeet, doooon't cryyyy. Lol.

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 41

Ok, that was the most fucking awewsome idea ever!!!!! Great spin at the end. You are so my Yoda!!!

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