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Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 43
wow great chapter cant wait for victoria to get slaughtered woot....
cant wait for next chapter
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 43
I adore this story! Please post again soon!
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 43
Only Aro would think to call it "playing with one's food". Thank you so much for the update, this is one of my top 3 favorite stories!!
Reviewer: madamsprout (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 43
What a treat to see another chapter up so quickly. Well done again. I'm looking forward to more of Jasper and Bella. I've really enjoyed this pairing. You've done a great job making them a strong couple. Thanks again, and l'm looking forward to reading more!!! :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 43
love it
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
I have read at least a hundred fan-fics and I can honestly say this is the best one I have read. Please post an update soon.
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 43
So glad you updated. But I'm dying to see if anymore of the Cullens will appear. I hope Aro lets Jasper change her on his own. I also hope they burn Victoria
Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 43
AAAGGGHHHH! Great cliffhanger but now I neeeeeeed more. Love this chapter.
Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 43
more more more!!!
Reviewer: Amaterasu (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 43
Oh My Gosh! Okay just found your story today. You write so well. Had me stuck to my computer reading for almost two hours. Please do go on? This is one of the best fanfics i've read to date.
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 43
I love the last line! Awesome! This line from Jasper was perfect: "I am nothing without you, I need you to survive, you are what completes me.” This whole chapter was incredible! So, next chapter, do we get to see Victoria torn apart and burned?!?! I hope the evil hag suffers!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 43
Wow! Thank you for the update. I love where I think the questioning of Victoria is going. Great for Marcus and Aro to confirm to Jasper and Bella the strength of their connection, I know Jasper is an empath but its still nice.
Reviewer: roza (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was REALLY good.
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 43
Hahaha. I like that your Aro has a sense of humor.
Ah, but you didn't translate the Italian yet! Tricky...
Great chapter, I really like where you went with this whole Volterra thing. I am so curious to see where you go next. I can't believe I am rooting against Edward. I wanted him to show up & fight for Bella, but i think he doesn't stand a chance. I like your Bella so much, she's spunky, and she made me smile at her range of emotions, and her recognition of them as being not normal. Funny.
More please!
Reviewer: tiffanypabst (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 43
:) I'm so excited to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 43
HEHE!!! I hope if they judge Victoria guilty for a crime they sentence her to death and by death I mean they change Bella and release a newborn on her ass!!!!
I wonder does Edward make an appearance in this story? I have no clue if shes really over him or if her feeleings for her are locked dorment in her!
Post again soon I love the tensionits so thick and juicy!!!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 43
WOWOOWOWOWOOW!!!! That was great. I like that you gave Aro a bit of humanity. This still my favorite story. PLEEEEEAAAASE dont wait so long again to update. You're the best.
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 43
Thank you so much for updating! This story is amazing!!!!!
I hope they rip Victoria to bits. =] I particularly enjoyed the Aro's little lesson in table etiquette! LOL
More please...
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 43
ahhh hahaha oh aro what a funny vampire...love the last line=)
Reviewer: madamsprout (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 42
I've enjoyed this story. Well done, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Again, great story!!
Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 42
Please write more. That was a work of art.
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 42
Great use of details from the saga! Can't believe it took me so long to come across this story... Bravo!
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 42
Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Brianna Newth (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 42
I can't wait for the next chapter! I absolutely love this story. It's wonderfully written.
Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 42
You're such a tease! Please MORE, and soon. By all means, feel free to make the next installment a bit longer, too! ;)
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