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Reviewer: Watching (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
Thank you for this story. It has to be one of the best fanfics ever.
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 47
Nice cliffie! I have so many questions that only you can answer, so get typing!!!
Reviewer: EmmaSwan (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 47
I waited a long time for you to update.
I'm very happy with the newest chapter :D
I hope you update sooner!
Reviewer: dnhjohnson (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 47
Is it selfish to ask you to stop everything you are doing to supply us with more??? Will Jasper tell Bella that Edward still loves her before he changes her? Will Edward make an appearance and fight for Bella? Who will Felix meet? Alice perhaps? She is still in Italty...it could happen! You are the first author I've read on the site that faced the virginity topic correctly as well. Thanks for that!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
I got a very good picture in my head of Bella's flat. Great description.
I am officially hooked on this story now :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
Bella is hilarious! "Tomorrow I will be that confident woman" :)
I am getting more intrigued with the story, particularly about why Jasper separated from the family...
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
Loved reading about that fateful birthday party from Jasper's POV :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 2
I knew it must be Jasper but I LOVE how you made it sound like it was Edward until the very end! very cool!
On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love Bella's internal monologue! It cracks me up, especially the part about Starbucks!
I think I know who the golden eyed starer is...*giddy squeals*
Reviewer: TS Tammy (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 47
OMG I'm in love with this story!! I've been reading for days up all hours!! I can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 47
Thanks for the update! I so love this story.
Reviewer: makovitza (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 47
Yay. Go Felix! I really enjoyed hearing his explanation of why he was so taken with Bella. I will admit I got a little teary when he said he wanted to experience bringing joy to someone else. He's so sweet. I hope he and Jasper become friends.
Demetri was wonderfully obnoxious. I didn't completely buy the way Jasper was able to discern his motivations, despite not getting much info from his emotions, but otherwise I really enjoyed their exchange. Defensive Jasper is so cute. I actually laughed at his reaction to the "pussy" comment!
I'm still a bit nervous about him leaving Bella alone, though. I can't wait to read more! :-)
Reviewer: vegan_vampire (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 12
I must say that I absolutely love this story but that I don't think I've ever wished a character would go away more than with Logan - but that's just my Jasper/Bella wishes
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 47
I really like Felix! I hope he remains likeable as the story progresses. I like all the depth you gave him during his conversation with Jasper. Thank you so much for the update!
Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 47
cool.
I was hoping that you might bring Edward into this... maybe just the mention of him and his "true" feelings for her. I think it would be better for Bella to know everything... be fully informed before her change, ya know?
I just hope you give Jasper the chance to explain the whole situation to her beforehand.
This is my absolute favorite story. Your writing is wonderful. I look every day for an update. I can't wait for more! Thanks for keeping it up!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 47
I love this side of Felix and I hope that him and Jasper will become friends in the necht 10 years. There might be a mate in this story for Felix too??? Any way I can't wait to read the transformation and the awakenig of Bella.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 47
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 47
Aaw I hope Felix is going to be nice what he said was so sweet =}
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 47
Awesome chapter! I look forward to the next I can't wait for the change! Post again soon I am so wanting to see hwo it all plays out
Reviewer: mariann17 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 47
This story keeps getting more and more interesting! Thanks for clarifying Felix....
Reviewer: kelmikmag (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 47
SO glad to see you writing on this story again. Could Felix be destined for Alice?
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 47
brilliant chapters. i cant wait to read what comes next. i think this is one of my favorite ffs.
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 47
wow great chapter
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 47
I love this story. Please keep up the good work and update as soon as you can!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 47
I can't wait for the sequel of this story =D
I LOOVVEEE this story. Honest to God, this story made me the biggest Jasper fan known to man.
Seriously.
I LOOOVEEEE IT!
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