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Reviewer: persephone (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 49

Write more soon please! I'm addicted :D

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 49

AHHHHH! Come on you got to be kidding me don't stop now!!!! Write! write write! I am dieing here you got me so wrapped in the story it is insane, come on! WRITE!!!!

Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 49

Aha! I love this moment...please update soon. :D

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 49

Oh...I am practically biting my nails!  I hope she chooses to stay with Jasper.  He has been completely honest with her and I think Edward hasn't.  So there :)

Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 49

ahhhhhh!! what a cliffie! I need to know her reaction! God, i love this story...

Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 49

uh-ohhhhhhhhhh!

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 49

Great chapter.

Thanks for posting.

Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 49

wow even immortal guys have really REALLY bad timing.

 

heh..

 

hot damn.

Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 49

Oh dear God. How could you stop? I love this story so much, it's AMAZING. I'll sulk until the next chapter goes up =/

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 49

Aaahgggh! What? Now? He had to tell her that now?! Gack! 

Reviewer: dazzled22 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 49

oooh, major cliffie!  awesome. can't wait for update!

Reviewer: frackandbonechick (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 49

holy shit!!!

UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 49

Beautiful cliffhanger! I'm so dying, here. lol

 

 

Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 49

Oh, mean!!  What an awful cliffie!  Aargh, don't leave us hanging - how does Bella respond to that bombshell? (once she gets past the disbelief, anyway)??  Great writing, as usual - please update soon! 

Reviewer: leebell (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 49

Oh wow what a line to end with. I hope that Bella is not too upset with Jasper. I can't wait to see what her response is.

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 49

oh so glad to see you back!!! i am loving this just like always. i like them together and i cant wait to read the next update.

Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 49

Awesome chapter!

Evil cliffhanger!!

I mean, GAH!  This is making my teeth itch!  Can you update tomorrow?  I gotta know what she says about Edward!!

j/k...not really, but...i understand that it takes a while to write this awesomeness.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 20

I'd applaud if it wouldn't wake up my kids.  

 

I enjoy how you've got everyone's speech patterns distinct; it makes for much more involving reading.  :)

Reviewer: leebell (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 49

Oh wow what a line to end with. I hope that Bella is not too upset with Jasper. I can't wait to see what her response is.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

Jake is sweet

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 15

You know, as much problem as she had with her relationship to Edward (in this AU), at least her thoughts as feelings were as private as she could make them if she could keep them off her face. 

With Jasper, she has to be feeling so much more exposed.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

cool point of view

Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 49

Gahhhhhhhhh!  Great chapter but evil cliffie.   Update soon.

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

ahhhh! love it!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

soo cool!

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