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Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 48
That better be Jasper. If it's Felix I might have to shoot somebody in the foot, just saying. Toward the end of their conversation I thought Jacob was going to kill himself or something, it got super intense. But it's cool, so whatever
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 47
Feliz wanting to bring pleasure to somebody so honestly and whatever else he said by changing Bella is twisted. All I'm saying
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 46
AWW! I thought he was going to propose earlier, THAT would've been super cute! Anyway...I was wondering when she was going to call Jacob, that really has been due for some time now... and I still feel this over-shadowing sense of "something bad is about to happen"... I re-iterate on my shoot-you-in-the-foot threat...
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 45
Aw. So cute. You see, I just have one slight problem with this. Which is? Simple. The red room...so much more lavish than her original room...to be changed...why? We already know this isn't a big affair. Why that room? I don't understand why Aro would needlessly move her to another room. Better yet, why do I feel a sense of extreme dread? I swear, if nothing happens, you might just get shot in the foot. Yes, that is indeed a threat. =P carry on
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 44
*gaspeth!* He DID NOT! Felix's crush has gone well past the bounds of allowed curious interest, and into stalker, I will eat you! =P really though, I'm super looking forward to it! Just...uneasy
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 43
“Do not argue with me, child, as you will never win.” hahaz, I laughed at that. And what? She's being changed, yes, but not because of their un-dying love, oh no. But because the Volturi have it in for one of them if they don't. How pleasant.
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 42
Huh.. I for some reason didn't think it would affect Bella. I mean, of course Jasper affects her but that didn't really register in my mind. That was interesting, and you just love cliffies! You're addicted to them! I'm convinced!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 41
HUZZAH! Thta's the best idea I've heard all day! Can't wait for this one... but of course, this will also make them curious of Jasper, who they might then want to keep...
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 40
*is actually still reading but had to come down here to say something* VOLTERRA!?! He's going to change her in Volterra!?! In the room that she's kept prisoner in? This is priceless...(/really kinda freaking me out) *goes back up to continue reading* You're killing me! Why is it that he makes me go "AWW!" in every single chapter?! *glares* "then watched as the love of my past tore down the street, fishtailing slightly as the car reached high speed in a matter of seconds. Turning to the face the building in front of me, I moved forward with only one goal, to save the love of my life, the love of my future." AWW! So freaking cute! I LOVE the whole "love of my past, life, and future" type thing. It's just...ungh! So. Cute.
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 39
OOH! Felix has a crush! On a poor little human... (I'm convinced it wasn't kindness there at the end, it was love. Con-vinced.) And Demetri...I don't think he does, I think that's just Felix...anyway, great chapter!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 38
Fine it's Alice. Seriously Jasper! Sad panda for emo New Moon scene! ='( good chapter though, and sad panda for Alice seeing JxB before E even left! That sucks dude! ='(
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 36
Steve. Hahaz, or it could be Edward...I'd laugh so hard if it was. Just saying. I love how Jacob knows he made a mistake but didn't...I don't know, just very frustrated with all of them right now. Why doesn't Jasper know the Volturi's scent? I guess he must not've seen them...ever... Anyway...epic chappie!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 35
OK, so it actually was Victoria, you got me! Tu gagnes! (you win) Just one quick question. OK, Victoria killed her parents, suckish, but didn't they both bleed out? Obviously the police had to see a lot of blood to be convinced they bled out instead of "was murdered", did she just leave out a good portion..? That doesn't seem like her at all...
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 34
OK, either Steve or Victoria, I highly doubt it's Logan or Jake, we laready had the Jake freak-out moment, and Logan seemed pretty resigned. My money would be on Steve, he's already enough of a stalker, why not sneak into her apartment? I think that's really all I have to say... Oh, I find it amusing how she had to slam on the breaks so she could kiss him. Great chapter!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 33
Again! Again with the aww! Super great chapter! I'm highly amused at what Jasper said in the store, I was wondering what he was going to say about the whole job situation. Haha, yes, it's totally fine that you laugh at my reviews, I laugh at my reviews too, I'm just happy that someone other me is amused by my twisted mind. Thanks for the clarification about the blood too!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 33
Again! Again with the aww! Super great chapter! I'm highly amused at what Jasper said in the store, I was wondering what he was going to say about the whole job situation. Haha, yes, it's totally fine that you laugh at my reviews, I laugh at my reviews too, I'm just happy that someone other me is amused by my twisted mind. Thanks for the clarification about the blood too!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 32
FREAK YES! At the beginning of the chapter, when Needy originally called her, my brain immediatly went "Uh-oh! He's a stalker, and he's gonna rape her or something, I'm convinced!" then it came and I did a little fist-pump. Then I did a happy dance when Jasper showed up, but I laughed so hard when she thought "Oh, I'm in terrible danger, I should call Jasper. *catches glimpse of self* Oh...wait...I look like crap. I don't think I'm going to call my vampire boyfriend and have him eat this peice of shit because I don't want him to see me like this." I was like WHAT!?! But, alas, he shows up anyway. *fist pump* Jasper-1, creepy pervert-0!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 31
I find it amusing how you're starting to always end chapters with deep lines such as "rushing so that I could return to the future that awaited me." just to get me to saw "AWW!" Yes, that is clearly the only logical conclusion. Great chapter. Quick question though, why must Jasper hunt after every time? He's not more thirsty, and he doesn't lose blood from sex.. Maybe energy...?
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 30
I was just going to say "AWW!" like usual, but then I realized it was the first time she'd ever said it. Still cute!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 29
AWW! I don't wanna hear about the idiot named Edward, maybe later. Too cute for words!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 28
No comment on Edward. Either Victoria died or she's coming back at some later point. Great chapter!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 27
AWW! That was sweet. Of course, who really ever thought that Bella would act negatively? Nobody. Still a great chapter!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 26
AWW! So sweet. JAKE! WTF! (beyond the fact that I don't think Jacob would just assume something like that, because he always asked her about the time of the change later on, and this is still the same Jacob, but I'm overlooking that) This is just...bad. Very, very bad. What's worse? I need to get up early in the morning and must go to sleep now. Suckish. However, I would first like to say that it sucks, and the same time really rocks, to be Bella. Just saying
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 25
Glad that got solved! "Make love? We can actually do that?" haha, YEESSS! I'd really love to leave you a disertation (sp?), but I must go read the next chapter so...au revoir!
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 24
Haha, whenever Jasper was just sitting there while L and B were dancing I was thinking "kiss her, kiss her. You can do it! Just stand up, walk over there, and kiss her." turns out that didn't happen, but whatever. Onward! AMAZING kiss by the way! I truly loved it!
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