That was beautiful. I love the way you described her change, and the way Jasper was able to absorb her pain like that.

I just saw that the story is completed. Will there be a sequel?

Yey I couldn't wait for her change. Now I want Edward to see what happened. LOL What torture that would be to see her finally a vampire and in love with Jasper. Don't get me wrong I love Edward and Bella but there are times that I love Jasper and Bella more. This is one of those stories. I can't wait to read more.

I read this story first on ff.net.  It was worth reading again.  This is the best B/J story I have read.  That Jasper was willing to take Bella's  pain for her transformation shows he is her true soulmate.  As I said when I reviewed on the other side, we need an epilogue.  Possibly a whole new story of when they are released from the Voltouri and maybe meet up with the Cullens again.  I'd love to see Alice with someone and I would love to read Edward's take on their relationship.  Either way, I loved the story.  It had all the romance, angst, adventure, humor and mystery you could ask for. 

Aw, come on!! How the hell am I supposed to review THE MOST PERFECT freakin' chapter ever?????? Yes, I love drama and I love lemons but THIS is the chapter I have been waiting for and I honestly cannot imagine it being done better.  It was  sweet, moving and illuminating to hear Jasper go through her change (I especially liked his thoughts regarding kinky sex and "the nudge"-those made me smile).  You have out-done yourself with this chapter; thank you for letting it be the loving and moving experience that I always knew it could be. You rock!

time and again, you prove why this is one of my favorite fanfics. You were able to capture Jasper at his most vulnerable, and yet, he never came across as weak or whiny or overprotective as Edward ever did. I Love how you showed how perfect they were for each other, both in the beginning when they were finishing each other's sentences to the end when her first thought after her change was of Jasper and her love for him. I can't wait for the next update, and especially when the rest of the Cullens find out! Please update as soon as you can!

Wait I just saw story over is there going to be a sequel?  This can't be the end what happens next just becaise she has eternity doesn't mean end of story does it?  

I started this story a few days ago and have devoted every spare moment i could carve out to finish it...needless to say i loved it!  I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!

I love this story so much.  Jasper, in so many ways, has always been the strongest character - silent, trusting, passionate - and this story brings those qualities to life.  I can't stop reading. Thank you for this.

 This was a GREAT GREAT story i have been looking for jasper stories for AGES!! thank you X's and O's

Hi there

I am really enjoying this story you wrote.  I hope to read more soon.

Thanks for a good read. :)

OMG I just love this story. I can't wit to see what happens next. What and How will Edward react know that Bella and his Brother have sex not just sex but have made LOVE before she was even changed. How will the rest of the Cullens react especially Em he so cracks me up. OOO wouldn't be interesting if Alice and Felix got together the would be very interesting. He would have to change his diet but ppl do alot crazier stuff when they are in love. I just won't her to be able to find a love of her life I don't like thinking of Alice as being lonley even though she has her family and her credit cards she still deserves a Mate. Then thers Edward who really pisses me off but hey he do stupid things when we are young even if we are 106 year old vamps. maybe he will end up with Tonya they seem to have had a thing in the past then againg he is still hooked on Bella but after he sees her with Jasper what will he think or do OOO i can't wait to read more I'm babbling and mispelling things left and right i don't care I just want more of this story please give me more I want it like a fat kid wants cake I can feel the venom pool in my mouth lol

That my girl