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Reviewer: wannabriter (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2008 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 19
Please....OH PLEASE don't make us wait that long i absolutely love the Jasper/Bella relationship!! Great Story almost as addicting as the real thing!!
Reviewer: jeaner_h (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 19
OMG I can't wait to see what happens next! This story is getting very good. Please update soon, I really don't want to have to wait for another 2 weeks to go by for an update!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 19
<Whew!> It's getting hot in here! I'm loving your story! Although I'm torn, part of me wants Alice and edward to join in the fray and the other part of me wants to see what will happen between Bella and Jasper. Hurry and update!
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 19
When you let Jasper come out to play he really plays! Whew,next time let be for real!!! Update REAL soon
Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 19
what a tease! a dream, huh? lol. i hope it won't be too akward between them when she wakes up next time:) update soon!
Reviewer: d2woodworth (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 19
I love it! That was so erotic! Please write more soon!
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 17
Um, Can Jasper come out and play ? I oops I mean Bella hasn't seen in such a long time
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Please write more! I never thought I would like this story, but I keep checking every day! Can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 1
Please write more! I never thought I would like this story, but I keep checking every day! Can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 18
Please update!!! I have to find out what Jasper does. Will he wake up Bella,Wait for her to wake up,or pull an Edward and leave. Na Jaspers to much of a man to leave after a woman calls his name in her sleep. Hurry up.
Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 18
It has been a whole 3 days and I need another Jasper fix. Please Please Please write more & soon!
Reviewer: jeaner_h (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 18
Very well written story. Would love to see the next installment soon!!!
Reviewer: Embrace (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh. My. God. I was waiting for it, the one word, and then it ended. Nooooo. It freaking ended!!!! More. More more more! -Bounces impatiently- I can't wait for the update. I absolutely loved it.
Reviewer: MacGyverTape (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Jasper is my favorite character and I love that with this story, you've fleshed him out, so to speak, even more. I ADORE this Jasper - I also appreciate your portrayal of Bella. I signed up just to give you a review. *laughs* This is really well-written; not many stories grab me instantly and have me impatiently updating nearly every night just to read more. When I realized that you were over on FF, I raced over there and stayed up far past my bedtime to keep reading. More more more! I'm rolling around in this delicious Jasperness. ;-)
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 18
i would have never thought that a J/B pairing would be this awesome, but you have succeeded! Keep it coming! :)
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oh crap! What a cliffy! Jasper hot for Bella, love it! More please!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2008 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 17
oh come on......who is it? please hurry back
Reviewer: Embrace (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 17
Oh my, I want to play in the rain now. Especially with Jasper. >> Hehe. The last part made me laugh. If it's Jasper she's probably gonna give him a heartattack, figuratively. Haa.
Reviewer: closet_twilighter (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 17
I found this on fanfiction and have been reading diligently over there, but I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying the story and look forward to all updates. I don't have a FF account but I didn't want you to think I'd forgotten about you. I won't give any spoilers away here, but thanks for all of the great work!!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 17
Another great chapter. Love the relationship they are establishing!
Reviewer: Bailing1521 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
Yikes! Another great chapter. I just love all the details--like the water fight and the way Jasper organized the perfect picnic. Everything about this story just flows so nicely. Now...if you've already written 49 chapters (I think that's what I saw in one of your comments)--I definitely need more--esp. with cliffhangers like these! P.S. Your brief insight into what happened between Jasper and Alice is intriguing. I can't wait to find out what she "saw" and if Edward is going to discover this new friendship.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 17
I read this whole story this morning! I didnt think that I would like them together but every chapter brings me closer to begging you to let him REALLY kiss her. Come on who is in the bathrooom, I am trying to tell myself that its just housekeeping to keep my sanity until you you get us off this cliff. Please hurry my fingers are starting to hurt from hanging on.
Reviewer: loblolly (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oooh! I'm loving the tension!
Reviewer: Nurse_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 17
Not another cliff hanger! I am on the edge of my seat and cannot wait for the next chapters. I love the suspense and building anticipation!!!
Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 8
Bet Alice had a vision way back when about Bella and Jasper. Yeah i want those two together
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