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Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 30
Such a romantic.. following the rose petals..
interesting with the releasing the beast stuff, and how she managed to control him and calm him down, just adds to the connection that they have together.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 29
I really liked this chapter a lot, seeing Jasper's feeling and thoughts from back when they were during the Twilight period.. I like how you altered it slightly and made it your own.. if that makes sense.. and I also liked how you had him say it was his pain that he was feeling.
One more thing, Bella is one lucky woman.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 28
I'm glad they have gotten everything out in the open.. it was only fair that Bella answered some of his questions as he answered her.
These two are so brilliant together, I honestly adore them.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 27
EEEEEEEEEEE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
That was some hot lovin' at the start!! These two are so hot together!!
The second half was lovely, thats great that hes told her everything about his past.. I think she took it relatively well, its true.. it shouldn't change the way she feels about him because hes not that person anymore..
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 26
He wouldn’t even open mouth kiss me for crying out loud.
hahah. Edwards a pussy thats why. Bring on the real man Jasper ;)
Hot hunk, what a brilliant description of Jasperr.
Wow, wonder if Logan talked to Jake.. he didn't take it too well - understandably..
Jasper is awesome, filling her with every emotion he feels for her.. showing her he isnt going to leave her.. *sighs* hes just perfect ;D
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 25
Wow, I love reading Jasper's pov of things.. brilliant. Unlucky Logan, but as i said before.. just go home.
Really really hot. Bella is luckyyyyy.
Sorry, I can't help but laugh at 'we can actually do that?'
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 24
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
they kissed!!!!!!!!!!!!! Omg how hot was that!?! and the staring at each toher as well.. wow.. i mean just wow.
Boo hoo Logan, you're hot.. but you're no Jasper. Go homeee!!
Reviewer: AMM (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great story! I'd love it if you'd write a sequal -- Bella and Jasper as a vampire couple, their adventures, meeting back up with the Cullens, Jake and Edward. Plots are endless.
Reviewer: lepi19 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
And voila, Jasper. I will tell you, I have only read 2 JxBs, the first one was very unbelievable, and the second was A Murmur of Fire in the Vein which it seems like everybody and their brother has read, well, that and this one. I'm still a little bit apprehensive so when I rant later on know I'm just trying to get my bearings. I'm sure this'll be great!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 23
Hahah. You tell that needy where to get off, LOL love how she told him!
Shes going on a date with Logan?! Aw jeez :-/ Poor Jasper, hes proper feeling down now.. shes thinking maybe he might like her.. hes thinking that maybe she might like him and its all going around and around..
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 22
The “dangerous bad boy” syndrome
Hell. Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bless, Sandy is sweet!
HAhahahah. Bella is jealous, don't mean to laugh but its just funny.. they are both getting hit by the green eyed monster ;D
Adore how Jasper is all happy because of Bella's reactions!!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 21
I'm sorry, but I'm starting to dislike Logan. I'm so madly Team Jasper its scary so that could explain why I don't like him all that much..
Knew he'd appear at the bar and that Jake would love him..
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 20
Good lord, even his muscles had muscles.
Some of your lines just crack me up, that one is epic.
I knew Jasper would work it out, he isn't stupid.. and he knows that when he first went to Bella's and he smelt that doggy smell that it was a werewolf..
Can't wait for the next chapter.. bloody Jacob, hes gonna have a FIT when he realises that Bella is starting to have feelings for Jasper!
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 19
*fans self*
Honest to god the hottest dream ever!!!!!!!
But poor Bella, knowing she was dreaming about jasper when she thinks jasper was thinking about Alice when he was actually dreaming about Bella.
oh deary, they'll get it out in the open soon enough I'm sure ;)
Reviewer: theflowerboxx (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 51
I Loved your story............
Reviewer: saracullen1234 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 51
The has to a sequal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They need to see the other Cullens!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!!?
Reviewer: bamagal (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 51
This has beemn the most beautiful love story I have ever read it was so sweet and sensual I love how Jasper and Bella aer together so open and honest with each other it is so great, I hope that that is not the end of this story, I was so kind of hopeing you would put in a chapter where they come face to face with all of the Cullen's especially Edward...
Reviewer: SkittlesBlack (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 51
awww.. finally. im sad that its over tho:(
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 18
Suddenly, she tilted her head back, pressing herself into me, making me gasp as she moaned again. It was faint, just one word, but my hearing picked it up as if she had screamed it from the rooftop.
“Jasper…”
*squeals*
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shes dreaming about Jasper!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hehehe. Jasper walked in on her in the bathroom!!! LOL Bless he was so embarassed.
I adore this chapter. Honestly, brilliant.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 17
I'm glad they managed to get it all out in the open, no secrets.. well nothing in their past and how they got to where they are now anyway.
The water fight sounds brilliant, and then Jasper having the carry her away because she was trying out for the wet t-shirt competition LOL
oooh I wonder whats wrong with him.. i totally have an idea.. but I'm not saying..
and I wonder who it is that is coming in with the towels..
one more thing.. Jasper. Wet t-shirt. Clinging to body. *faints*
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 16
Jealous!!!!!!!
You write the emotions in this perfectly, I just adore every word. Why the hell didn't I start reading this one before?!!?
Bless, she wants him to help him to sleep as well.. you know what, I'm totally having a hard time sleeping... if Jasper's free I could totally lay on his lap and go to sleep ;)
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 15
I think I'm going to faint. You write such a dreamy Jasper. Dear lord, I honestly think I've melted a bit.
Scrap that, I think you're gonna make me die of jealously!!! Honest to god, apart from Stephenie Meyer you are the only other author on here and other place to actually make me jealous of characters.. who are not real!!!!
First you have him carry her up to the room.. then when hes having a shower.. dear god *fans self* then he calms her down.. SLEEPING ON HIS LAP. And then you have him say 'the pleasure was all mine'
amazing.
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 14
Isn't it just adorable how protective he is? Aww :)
And inpropriate thoughts when she hugged him.. interesting.. :D :D
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
Such a jumble of emotions.. love it!!
I think I melted when Jasper told her about the birthday present.. tahts so cuteeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:) I love you, you're an amazing writer :)
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 12
Noooooo!!! Its a misunderstanding.. Jasper didn't turn up because he thought Bella was going on a date.. but she was going on a date.. well near the end anyway.. oh god oh god!! Its strange, because hes a outsider so to speak.. hes a new character. I'll keep an open mind and won't immediately hate him because I don't know him :)
Wonder who is there.. bet its Jasper!
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