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Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 (content1)

Was the person on the bike, Bella's friend?

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

I liked Bella's remark about "no distractions". I'm interested in finding out who Clara is and how she has been there for Bella.

Interesting start. Bella seems capable of breaking some vampire balls and I'm loving it.

Reviewer: mei-lin (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 (content1)

Keep going!

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 2 (content1)

Hey i am glad you are switching the point of view =] I loved this chap !!!!!!! poor edward ad bella =[

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 2 (content1)

Wow... this is very interesting... keep up the good work!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 2 (content1)

is it over already??thats not a very good ending....

Author's Response:

of course its not over. theres nearly 30 chapters alrady written, aaiting beta checked to be posted, most already on ff.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 (content1)

well it serves him right doing that to bella cant wati to see waht happens next 

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

hey great chap !!!! it  seeems like this is going to be a great story !!!!!

Reviewer: twihard55555 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

amazin cant wait for more

Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued and want to read this despite my swearing off such stories.  Can I make one request? Please update often. It's hard to get into an AU story if there is too long in between updates.  You forget the details and then I usually just end up giving up after a few chapters.

Author's Response:

glad you liked my story. Yo said you hope I update quickly... well I can do one better. lol


The first 14 chapters of this story are alrady available on

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