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Reviewer: Jade10121 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 1

That was ahmazing. One of my curent favorit twilighted stories. You should write anouther chapter on how they got back and the rest of theyr vacation. Maby even collage? Ilike the way u write so that you dont change the origional story and make me feal like im betraying them.

Reviewer: transitory_moment (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

those naughty Cullens! LOL I love your should write more.

Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 1


Reviewer: sunshine2b (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1


Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

Why did they not see that coming--cause I was so wondering where the beach bag full of spares was.  Loved it.

Reviewer: Meganashlee17 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love the last part that was so funny

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Alice has a vision, brings them clothes and Edward "hears" when she does, duh... : )  Good story still.

Reviewer: musicluvr (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this! Does it have to be a one-shot? I'd like to see how they fare coming back to the others sans clothes. I'll bet Emmett would have a field day!!

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

ahahah!  Emmett probably snuck up and stole them. 

The sand thing was hot. I can imagine how excited Bella would get if she managed to get her very propper husband to be a little "dirty."

Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was so sweet and funny Alice will have to help them get a new set of clothes...

Reviewer: new2twilight23 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

The ending is priceless! I loved it. I could see that happening.

Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

I just love it when Edward is vocal and willing to be submissive. Thanks for the new story. Please write more!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the family fun at the beach.

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

brilliant loved it

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very cute....full of vampire lemoniness!

Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it! You should write a lot more post-Breaking Dawn stories. I know I would love to read them!

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