still no Jacob or Esme....i feel so bad for both of them.

I'm addicted to this fic! I have been reading it every chance I get! I am loving this story! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Okay, I am a little confused about where Carlisle is and the others. Edward seems deep and thoughtful. Well developed.

I loved the letter to Carlisle! God! Edward is so in love! But he's being typical Edward and not talking to Bella I'm afraid. Really, that man/vampire thinks he knows everything. Again this couple is not talking, not communicating. Talk guys! Tell each other what you mean to one another, define your relationship! And talk about the change!

I wonder where Esme is... I guess I'll have to have to wait for the next one.

p.s. I really enjoyed the tingling description on Edward's... juices.

Love the fact she used his inability to move to help him along with his hesitant approach to moving things along. Also, where can I find the story you rec'd above, And With Thee Fade Away, I couldn't locate it on this website.

 

Author's Response:

Here's a link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5304342/1/

Arizona has definitely been in thoughts and prayers around our house! So, now that she has Edward addicted to sex, maybe she can use it as a weapon to torture more information from him? Or she can just ask Emmett. He apparently has no filter!

yummm! BPOV of Edward coming? yes, please *ahem* sorry..

Edward is doodling her name like a high schooler, how cute is that? I wonder when they will define their relationship. Obv Edward has to makes things a little clearer to her since he has already figured out that she is his mate! 

Thank you! xo

Hello, your story was rec'd somewhere so I thought I check it out. Though everyone is very much in character your having Carlisle killed gives it a very interesting twist, I love that it's so unpredictable where you are taking this. You have a lot of clever ideas like Edward changing his stock to avoid detection.

eheh Edward's got his hands full there :)

That was the most eloquently written act of fellatio I've ever read.  And hot.

Oh, Emmett.  Let's hope he didn't accidentally screw up by saying Edward was changing Bella.  Maybe Edward hasn't told him that Bella doesn't want to be changed.  Let's also hope that Bella doesn't freak out and run.  Let's also hope she doesn't think he'll change her without permission.

I'm not sure what to think about Esme.  I do miss her though.  Could you have her call?  (I sound like a mother whose child is away at summer camp.)

One last question.  Are there more wolves or is Jacob the only one so far?  That's probably a secret that you'll get to later.

oh emmett - Our kind ain't usually gentlemen in the sack.  Wait ‘till he changes you.  It'll be a whole different ball game."  he is too funny and i cannot wait TILL THAT happens

Great chapter. I ate a jalapeno today at work (pizza shop) today, and I ended up drinking like 4 cups of water and choking on the aftertaste for the next half hour. Bella's description of Edward's cum kinda reminded me of a milder version of that. I still love it though, Edward is 'just that hot' afterall. 

Poor Esme, hope she's okay. It's good the other Cullens are letting her go so she can avenge Carlisle or find some closure or whatever she's doing. Just hope she's safe. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.