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Reviewer: rubyred21 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oh thumb-nails. :/
This better be a b/e story, lol. I love the drama
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 30
Good to get more of a back story on Jacob, not sure if he will be able to accept Bella hanging out with the vampires. I could imagine them all, still as statues listening in lol. Loved Bella's come backs to Jake when he was being snarky.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 30
hmm dare we hope for Jake and the Cullens to find a way to get along and not get hung up on past transgressions that he, personally, had nothing to do with.... aside from the whole arm thing, of course?
Reviewer: miasmiclouds (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 30
Maybe Reince Priebus could be the head of the "Werewolf Volturi"--or better yet, a Zombie government!
Still loving your story. I hope Esme turns up soon. It dosen't souund like Jake's ready to buy the 'nice vampire' arguement. My question to him would be, before now, just how many vampires has he met? What does he really know about them?
Author's Response: Not much. He's pretty much only heard what the tribal council has told him. They're a little biased.
Reviewer: cornel (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 30
"The place had the atmosphere of Mission Control, waiting for Apollo 13 to emerge from blackout." this line i loved! i don't know why, but it made me laugh. was it meant to do that?
anyway, i love the little funny snippets in the story and i really like this bella. and edward too. my god! he's 100 years old and acting like it. i hope esme is fine and nothing bad happens to her
i always liked kate in the series, and liking her more, the way you write her
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 30
Reince Priebus could be a death eater with the right costume.
I was picturing Bella on the phone with Jake with all the vamps listening in and it made me laugh especially with how he had to hide while he was naked.
Did Bella explain how the Cullens eat animals? Maybe if Jake knew that he could start to wrap his head around the fact that they don't drink from people.
I would have loved Emmett hanging around my job.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 30
Emmett cracks me up lol
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 30
Ok so now we have the story on Jake shifting...aaaakkkk I wish those two factions would actually talk. It sucks that the tribe is encouraging a kill first policy. I guess in some ways that is good but they could at least try and figure out why the Cullen's are different, I mean shouldn't Bella being alive be a testiment of goodness. This will be interesting to see if they can work something out. I sure hope Esme is ok....
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 30
I have to agree, sounds like HP ;)
And about the snarky comment, don't worry, I think there were more than plenty and enough through out the chapter.
Bella and Jake both now how to answer to each other's comment. Yes, they weren't always the nice ones, especially the ones coming from Jacob, but if you step in his shoes and Bella's it turns out to be more than understandable how both of them went after the other.
Bella has tried with effort to try and convince Jacob to not go after Esme, if that's what Esme is planning . WE'll have to wait and see if he does so. Not to mention what Esme is and has been up to until now.
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 30
I really like Bella's retorts to Jacob. The chapter seems a bit unfinished, however.
Author's Response: Aaaw, shoot. I'm going through a slight bout of writer's block. This chapter did not come easily. I guess it shows. :(
Reviewer: as63926 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 30
Adore the naked Billy talk comment and the visual it came with. I want to see Edward sexting . Great chapter and I will be voting for you...
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 30
I think you would be a great RNC chairwoman! Maybe you could show them the right way to be and lead them into the Left!
I just found this great little fic called Branching Inward by Life in the Snow on this sight.If you get a chance try it.
I am going to the sights above and go vote for your story!
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response: I was totally worried when you said I should be RNC chairwoman...not a conservative, at all. But then I read the rest of the sentence and I felt better. :)
I've seen people reccing Branching Inward. What's it about?
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 30
Love Apollo 13!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 30
Oh boy, Bella is not being Switzerland! Can she make a truce with the wolf? Or will wwIII break out when Esme finds him?
Reviewer: Shemhazai (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 30
After quickly looking up what RNC stood for, I must agree with the naming being fiction like. I don't think he would be a professor though... Professor Priebus? Naw... I think he has a ministry name...Minister Preibus? yeah, he might be a death eater on the side too ;)
Reviewer: westernem (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 30
great chapter glad that jake is ok, and that edward is as well. nice to get some more information all around. hope you get a chance to update again soon
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 30
Wow great chapter! Love, love, love this story!
Can't wait to see where it goes, hopefully Edward and Bella naked and some point and Bella turned into a vampire!
Reviewer: twiharder2 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 30
I loved the sense of humor in this chapter!! Excellent job!! :) KC
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 30
Congrats on all the award nom's. That's exciting.
Still loving this story. I can't wait to see where you take it. It gets better and better as we go. :)
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 30
Another interesting chapter. I am curious to see where you are going with this. Jacob has always been so hard to work with or accept the Cullens even in SM's version where he knew that did not hunt humans. I see him being even harder to convince in this version of things. I'm also curious about where you will take James. Will he head in the same direction that Victoria did or something else. I love this story and look forward to your next update.
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 30
Very cute conversation with Jake! Loving the story!
Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 30
Best end note ever!
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 30
This chapter made me snort a little. hehehe :)
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 29
You are awesome! I loved this chapter .... the whole play-by-play on the blow job was hilarious & very informative if I ever need to give one to a vampire!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 30
(priebus) I think he's Umbridge's husband! Remember she liked pussys! OMG I just wrote that! Anyway, love the chapter. The story is excellent!
Author's Response: Hahahahahaha!
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