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Reviewer: westernem (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 31
gosh seriously, i mean i don't want jake to die because he really isn't doing anything wrong or did anything wrong - there's no treaty or anything. and i don't want esme to die, but keeping her alive for all time without carlise seems even crueler, you know? maybe a treaty will come out of all this but who knows, definitely a lot of different ways you could take this, can't wait to see what you do.
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 31
That chapter was too funny. hehe im so jealous of bella. who wouldnt want their man to just completely lose his shit and devour you? lol like i said... so jealous! hehehe
Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 31
Loved this chapter. Can't wait for Charlie to meet Edward. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: mitzfree (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 29
Okay that was seriously hot. I never thought about how a human bite wouldn't hurt..down there. LOL
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 30
love it!
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 28
Thanks for the rec's I need to learn to speed read. LOL This story has me! I don't get to read many Edwards as the vampire. Mostly all human ones. Not that they aren't great. I just really have a thing for the vampire thing. Go figure.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 30
Great chapter! I hope Esme doesn't attack
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 30
i hope that esme stays safe! and that the wolves and the vamps can work something out!!
Reviewer: lbritt (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 30
yay an update. we got quite a bit about what happened to Jacob and his reasons. i hope that there is not any type of showdown with him and Esme. I can't imagine what will happen if the wolves kill her. It will be an all out war with Bella smack dab in the middle.
Oh and where is James lurking. We all know he is around. He is such a stalker.
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 30
Almost spit my Captain Crunch out when I read "No fellatio. Wait, that's not good." HA! Oh, Edward is a little horndog after all. I'm liking the whole story line with Jake (and believe me, I'm soooo team Edward) and the fact that they never figured out that the Cullens don't eat humans. Will Edward be the one to ultimately forge an agreement with the wolves? With Bella's help of course. Look forward to what you post next! By the way, at least the chairman is not "he who shall not be named". LOL
Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 30
ouch... such an unfriendly banter there.... wonder how Esme going? missing her motherly figure in the story... =)
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 30
Interesting chapter, wonder what's going to happen now?
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 30
still worried about Esme...and wondering whats going to happen now with Jacob and Bella and the Cullens.
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 30
Ha! Totally does sound like someone who works in the Ministry of Magic....
I just discovered your story and I love it! Really brilliant and original and well written. Going on my favorites list straight away.
Author's Response: Nice. Glad you're enjoying.
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 30
i dont like how bella is acting with this...i guess it would be hard to with a friend but edward is her mate in the end and her trust and loyalty should be to him...and esme...cant blame her...
Author's Response: She has a fine line to walk. Sigh.
Reviewer: rubyred21 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 30
lol Awesome. As always. Anwayy, I ope you update soon. :D (Btw i didnt do my hmwrk thnx to this story. I still have a whole week but i wanted to do it on the weekend. Oh well it was worth it)
Author's Response: Not good! Get back to work, missy!
Reviewer: LikeAir (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 30
Yes! Waiting for the epic battle...
Reviewer: rubyred21 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 28
I REALLY did to do my homework... but i really wanna read this.. maybe just more ten minutes...
Awesome chpater as always :D
Reviewer: cellibelli85 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 30
Thanks for the chapter. Curious to where this is going. I hope Esme turns up soon.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 30
;D
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 30
Is it fair for them to have full disclosure on Jake, and he only have partial on them? No it's not. I hope Esme will not be harmed.
Author's Response: Yeh, Jake's going to be pissed if he he figures out Bella's holding out on him.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 30
Great chapter. Glad Jake told Bella (and the vampires) what happened to him and Bella told him to just talk to Esme is she finds him. Hope Jake and Esme don't hurt each other. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 30
Absolutely loved Bella putting Jacob/Dogman in his place. "Monsters" working in bookstores or on cars - where's the difference. Should put things in perspective for him. Wonder where Esme is and hope nothing bad happened to her.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 30
More! More! I'm off to vote right now!
Reviewer: rubyred21 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 04:41 AM · On: Prologue
awesome
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