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Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 31
OMFG!!!! That was priceless!!!!
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 31
so good can't wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 31
well that was hot. wonder when they will do it for real? hope that esme and jacob both survive esme is just heartbroken and bella will be upset if jacob dies. wish it could ll be just a misunderstanding and carlisle isn't really dead
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 31
"Oh, shut up." "You're just too delicious for your own good." Bella has changed Edward for the better - a lot.
Is Esme looking for revenge or her own death? I know what I would want.
It seems like Bella may be proposing a treaty of sorts between the vamps and the wolves - unheard of! I like Rose's idea too.
Premature posting is a bad, bad thing. Slow and deliberate works much better.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 31
cant sloww down now were at the best part...... whines
Author's Response: Sorry..would you rather I write stuff that sucks?
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 31
poor edward! premature finishing! that has happened once to my husband in 10 years! i thought it was funny! will they be able to save esme?
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 31
Love it, love it, love it...
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 31
Ooh, I loved Bella's cocky prowess! But see what she got for it! Turnabout is fair play, or revenge is sweet? !!
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 31
Haha! Premature posting - Edward's specialty... LOL. That was too funny!
I agree. I think death by cunnilingus sounds like a marvelous way to go. If I could choose, this onw would definitely be near the top of my list.
Interesting crossroads you are at. You've got many different pathways working here. Can't wait to see how they all come together.
Reviewer: Snuffy10 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 31
Love it, absolutely love it! So got a few questions, is Edward gonna change Bella and is Esme gonna kick Jacobs ass? Lol excellent writing. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 31
Hmmm. Edward gets to meet Charlie. Is he staying with Bella at her dad's house? Should be interesting. Yes, indeed. What a way to go. LOL
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 31
Damn! What woman doesn't wish for a guy that just simply loves to go down on her so much that he does it until she can't take it anymore? *drools*
I'm really worried about Esme's situation... I'm starting to think maybe you're going to reunite her with Carlisle. *sniff*.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 31
"crunchy and taste good with ketchup"--hidden HP fan?
And death by cunnilingus? God, please. can't imagine a better way, really....Loved it!
Author's Response: Did they use that line in HP? I've seen the tee shirt...and of course I'm a Harry Hoor. Who isn't?
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 31
Excellent, they are going to Forks!
I really hope they save Esme, however at the same time she probably doesn't care does she?
Can't wait for the next chapter, however I do want you to feel good about what you put into the story so I can be patient.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 31
Umm, what a way to go.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 31
Despite their efforts, I have a horrible feeling that Esme has not gone to the wolves for revenge, but to join Carlisle :(
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 31
I loved Irina's arm comment. That made me laugh. Talk about ravaging lol Edward needs to make house calls lol
Reviewer: cellibelli85 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 31
Thanks for the chapter. Oh Edward.... I hope they find Esme before something bad happens.
Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 31
You are NOT kidding!!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 31
After this note what can one say? Think away and come back to us.
Reviewer: mommakat (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 31
Hi- updates take as long as updates take. Your story is well worth waiting for. Thank you!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 31
Back to Forks, and introducing Edward to daddy - that's going to be fun...
Reviewer: elauradannon (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 31
Oh. My. God. Excuse me, I need to go jump my husband now. Just, um...WOW!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 31
This is a wonderful story! You have me hooked!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 31
ohhh boy :)
Looking forward to Charlie's reaction to Edward!
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