Riddles and more riddles! Love it! What happened in Forks? Did the original treaty with the wolves not work out? Did soemthing happen to Carlisle? What a horrible line of thought. Better stop now!

Exciting stuff! I wonder why he had to write a letter to Carlisle. Not phone him. Is it easier to express through writing? Will she go back or will she be too embarrassed? Loving the tone of this story.

Oh I love love love how the book store is organised! It sounds so exciting, just the kind of shop I'd love to go to too!

still have hopes Carlise is alive, sigh

That Microsoft Word doesn't recognize priapism is hysterical considering that the software was likely written by a programming geek who probably suffers from it on a regular basis.  No offense to programmers everywhere...it was a stereotypical thing to say, but I get a pass because I'm married to one : )

Great chapter, as always.

beautiful dialogue...so romantic and intense.. Bella & Ed's yearning and longing, i can visualize so clearly...loved this

Great chapter. Can't wait to see how meeting Charlie goes. Please update soon.

Wow, Edward really put down on her, didn't he. That was Awesome.

i hope that the girls don't try to start anything without back up! will they find esme? i feel so heartbroken for her! she lost her one and only!

hehe Glad that Edward's looking like he'll really talk to Bella about her options for their life together. Looking forward to meeting Charlie though!

I always loved the group as vampires.  I love the way you have them together as they should be with the Carlisle exception which still breaks my heart.  But it is a great story, one in which I voted for.  

Before the James-, Jake- and Esme-problems are solved Edward shouldn't concentrate on turning Bella or leaving her human. Wonder what will happen in Forks.

Can't wait for Edward to meet Charlie.  Enjoyed the conversation between Rosalie, Emmett and Edward.  Chuckling.  Good luck with the awards!