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Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 30

The plot thickens...poor Esme.  Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 33

oh no.  No blocking. I've been waiting for updates patiently.  You must tell us what happens to Jake and Esme and solve the need for the big bite--there is so much to tell, you just need to breathe it out-- cause I am so enjoying this story. 

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 33

Good advice from Kate, hope Edward takes it to heart.  He seems to be making a good impression on Charlie, which must please Bella. The next week could prove very interesting. We all await your next update with anxiety and eagerness, see you soon!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 32

What I love about your story, beyond the obvious,, is that, aside from the supernatural element, it's so'normal' seeming. You know, girl meets boy, they fall for each other, she meets his family, now he is going to meet hers. See? Just like any other couple, sort of. Who am I kidding? I just love Bella and Edward.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 31

So true, what a way to go! Good thing Edward finally listened to Jasper's thoughts, or he could have really done damage to Bella. That would have killed him, too. Well, they're going home to meet Charlie, that ought to be a lot of fun. I can't wait!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 30

Cleared up a few misconceptions with that phone call. I really liked Bella getting on Jake's case about ripping off Edward's arm. After all, he's her man and she should defend him and his interests. Now maybe Esme can be a little safer, and Jake too. What I really want is for the Quileute to get the message that the Cullens are not human- killers, maybe that will make a difference.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 29

I'm supposing this is the calm before the storm, but it was a really great calm. Bella was awfully good for someone who had never done that before, and I'm sure Edward really loved that he was her first. It's no wonder Rosalie hits Emmett upside his head all the time, he has no idea of monitoing his mouth. I'll bet Edward wouldn't be pleased that Em bluted out that bit about changing Bella and how much easier it would be to love her afterward.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 28

I really must agree with Bella, Edward may just be perfect. That scene with background music of Bolero sure was. Are you old enough to remember when Torvill and Deane ice-danced to Bolero and won a gold medal at the Olympics? That was one of the most erotic things I've ever seen, and I'm close to seventy! Good choice, for Bella pleasuring Edward, perfect timing too, since he only has one arm for the moment. Pardon me while I get a cool drink and turn on a fan.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 27

The debriefing session went fairly well, except for Bella being upset about Jake being called names. He's lucky it was only names and not something worse. Hope Edward listens to Jasper and goes along with what I'm thinking Bella has planned. On to vampire reconstruction!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 26

I about had a hissy when Bella got caught by James and Victoria. Thank God for mind-reading vampires and family solidarity. It was nearly painful to read that Edward lost an arm, but I take comfort in the fact that vampires regenerate quickly. By the way, that was too funny to hear Bella holler at Edward to get his ass upstairs!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 25

Edward got some fairly good advice and Bella got some comfort and support. Not too bad, Now I'm worried that Bella may be about to do something stupid involving Jacob. She just doesn't get it about him being a danger, he's been her friend for so long she thinks nothing has really changed between them. Little does she know!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 24

So Microsoft isn't as smart as they thought they were. Last time I looked priapism is a real word, and a very uncomfortable condition. Edward has the right idea, he is crazy to deny Bella, especially when it's what they both crave. A few days apart are going to be tough on both of them.Especially if Edward has to ask Emmett for advice, what with Em having no verbal filter whatsoever. That's a conversation to look forward to.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 03:24 AM · On: Chapter 23

You may have been a bit shy and reluctant to write these lemons, but I must say, you've recovered quite nicely. Your descriptive powers are really quite good, better than good. even. Just one question , when is it Edward's turn?

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 22

Calm yourself , you did great, that was one fantastic evening of dancing and sexplay. Lucky Bella, and wonderful Edward! Tanya always was so subtle in her pursuit of Edward's body, rather like a freight train.Too bad for her that all Edward wants in this world is Bella.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 21

That last part sounds like the Denalis have come to Seattle for a visit. Tanya and Bella are about to meet for the first time. This should be real interesting.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 20

We are closer  and closer to the big love scene, I can tell. It might have happened tonight, but for the fact Bella fell asleep  Nothing like a good orgasm for tension relief, followed by restful sleep. Whatever his Bella needs , Edward will see that she gets. Safety from werewolves being high on the list, of course.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 19

So the story is coming out and a sad one it is. Of all the vampires in the world the wolves could have killed, why did it have to be peace-loving Carlisle. I just feel so awful for Esme, without her love forever.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 18

I get a kick out of your enthusiasm for CW&IA, my daughter just loves it, too. The 61 years is close enough, Alice and Jasper have been together since 1948. The fabulous remodel sounds like I could happily live in Bella's new quarters, no problem with style or color, fantastic! Well, on to the big reveal.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 17

No big surprise when a giant wolf leaped out and tried to kill Edward. I figured Jacob was going to be phasing any time after the kiss in the kitchen. All the symptoms were there so it was just a matter of time. Thankfully Edward got Bella to come with him so he could keep her safe.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 16

Now Edward has something else to worry about. Not only is he afraid Jake will hurt Bella, there is another vampire killing in Seattle. That might bring down the wrath of the Volturi if they're not real careful. I'm so glad that Bella knows what Edward is and still wants him, Yay!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 15

Aha! That light in the tunnel wasn't a train after all. It was Bella adding two and two and getting five. She thinks Edward and the Cullens are traditional vampires, and she's dinner. At least this gets a lot of stuff out of the way and secrets revealed. Much better.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 14

Late night visits and poetry, what could be more romantic? I know, stalking isn't romantic, I vote vampires get a pass on that rule. Jasper shouldn't fantasize about biting Bella, not unless he wants Edward and Alice on his case.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 13

I'm with you, midnight visits from Edward would be amazing. Poor Bella, she probably would have enjoyed that more if she had been awake. Or they both would have.

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 12

Always a little sympathy for Jacob, he never gets the girl, if Edward is his competion. Bella is clearly head over heels for Edward, even now she's pretty sure he's a vampire. I can see all kinds of problems popping up for the both of them. At least Edward has his family for support. 

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 11

Relax, girl, anyone silly enough to truly hate Jacob is too silly to read your story. I think it just is too funny how some people have a cow over Jake loving Bella. As long as Bella and Edward  end up together, all's right in my world. Since the wolves killed Carlisle and one dares to put hands on Bella, I can certainly understand why Edward hates wolves.

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