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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2011 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 39
Great chapter. I'm glad everyone's safe and all's right again. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 39
Sorry about you, your mum and my sexy reviews. Glad I gave u a giggle tho. ;)
Visual arts = porn. Well yeah, but fashion too. Fashion = womens lingerie that is. Grass sculpture, photography of people and anime as well. Too bad reviewers can't comment on authors comments to their reviews.
No I don't understand female self depreciation. I doesn't make sense. Grow a backbone girls!!! Lots of men find confidence sexy. Limp wet fish girls are not.
No story recs but I do have t-shirts.
Vamp T
Denali girl T
Tanya T
Author's Response: OMG, those are so cool. Are you on Twitter? You and Jada Pattinson could keep me entertained for all time. I especially like the first one, "Keep Out of Direct Sunlight," because I'm super photosensitive.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 39
Awesome chapter! Though I'm still a bit worried about Esme! Question for you, do you think you might continue The Audacity for Change?
Author's Response: Oh, I'd love to! I'm just so tapped out creatively. I haven't seen much interest, but since you like it I'll do my best. Thanks.
Reviewer: meyerfan (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 39
I had seen your banner a few times and thought that it wasent the story for me , but found myself clicking on it last night and I just wanted to say I am SO glad I did. It is by far and large one of my favourite stories on here and I simply cannot wait for the next installment.
I have this sad wish though , I keep wishing that the wolves diddnt really burn Carlisle and they'll find all his pieces through the woods and put him back together again. Silly I know huh :( I can't bare the thought of Esme being stuck all alone for the rest of eternity
Loved that Jacob has found a mate in another tribe - I am curious if this tribe has shape shifters too or if it is completly new to Morgan.
please update soon I am so enjoying it!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed! You read it super fast, didn't you? Did you get any sleep? :)
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 39
But what about Esme? She doesn't want revenge after all?
That's my only question for the chapter. It was pretty light and fun to read.
Author's Response: We shall see....
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 39
I have to say I wouldn't have guessed it. But it was an interesting twist and it brought what was much needed, a truce between the wolves and the vampires. Just settling things is left, and apparently wil be done by tomorrow.
Alice found out a bit more from her past, it's now up to her if she ever wants to know more. But for now I am sure she is okay. And Esme is fine and with them.
Now we are up to some Bella and Edward time :)
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 39
That went better than I anticipated - Esme is back and James is gone, that's good.
Reviewer: snowball64 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 39
Great chapter as usual but my heart was in my mouth when Esme was gazing into the fire...I hope this isn't some of that horrible foreshadowing you pesky writers insist on!
Reviewer: xxyz (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 39
Jasper/Alice rec: Struck Upon a Star's Tie Me Down To This World. It's lovely, sad, and unfinished. A great read none the less.
Fantastic chapter! I've truly fallen in love with this story.
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 39
Great chapter, update soon. Glad Jake finally Imprinted.
Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 39
Interesting chapter! I'm glad they're on better terms. I almost wonder if there's a way Carlisle could be brought back... if somehow the wolves could retrieve all his 'pieces'. Sigh. I can't imagine how... but wouldn't it be nice. :)
Neat story! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: atina10 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 39
Oh... Jake imprinting!!! Good for Edward ;) Thanks for update...waiting for more...xo
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2011 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 39
Love makes the world go round, huh? Saved a big showdown between the Cullens and the Quileutes, also. Thank God James is gone, for good! How ironic that Esme saved Jacob's imprint, after the wolves killed Carlisle. That has to be hard for her to process. Charlie may have some thoughts about all this, one of these days, too. Things are looking up for everybody.
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 39
Hi dear, this was so good.
As you ask about Jasper and Alice I would like to suggest The Brandons by Jmolly at ff net. She is recreating the whole Saga in wonderful, non angsty way, and in this one she has Alice going to find her family of origin.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6008317/1/The_Brandons
Author's Response: Sweet! Thank you!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 38
The end of this chapter reminds me of a Rambo movie. Leaping out of the water to surprise the enemy.
Your keeping your story pretty sexually charged.
The largest wolf (Jake) found his long lost but not forgotten sister? HAH!
Author's Response: Esme=Rambo. Hawt.
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 28
You girls are all sexual deviants.
In this however at least you try to be somewhat bit realistic with your sweet lemon. Let you in on a secret, girls often don't taste so got either but men lie about it. It's not that important overall.
Author's Response: LoL!!!!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 24
Ed is easier to write for the sexy stuff huh. You know that's just because malesare so much less complicated.
BTW did you know that it is in fact very possible to f*** a girl silly? Hyperventilating quivering train wreck type silly? Yeah it's great but you can't help but be concerned for her which kind of kills your fun of the moment.
You want any more fun facts from experience? I know girls talk plenty but men think differently.
Author's Response: Your wife is a lucky woman, sir.
Reviewer: BellaPevensie96 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 38
hope you update soon! I'll be awaiting anxiously!
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 16
Huh. Poetry is lost on me but how could she not get the real meaning behind the words. I'm more into visual arts but even clueless I understood most of the intent. There was a lot of sex in or alluding to in there due to the nightly visits no doubt.
Author's Response: A confident male of the species such as yourself probably wouldn't understand a girl's amazing powers of self-deprecation. It's pretty hard for us to understand how cute we are, sometimes, and that "that boy" really likes us.
Visual arts, huh? Is that a polite way of saying porn?
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 13
Being a boob man myself I can tell you Ed was quite restrained here. I don't think he's over the line. Not quite. She called his name. That's permission.
Turning a woman to mush is challenging, exciting and as sexy as all hell. The crying, confusing.
Author's Response: Bella's crying? Or women crying in general? Don't worry about it, I was crying a lot way back when I wrote this, so of course my heroine had to cry, too. It happens.
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 12
*grunt* I don't think a mind read would get much from the male horny drunk mind but a porno movie on loop when he's got a women he wants BAD in his arms. That would be distracting and Ed is in the body of a 17yo.
Author's Response: OMG, falling out of my chair laughing. I suppose I was expecting too much from poor Jake. But again, I have less insight into the male mind than thou.
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm always curious as the the female POV of the male. Or women writing Ed's POV. Lets just say I'm very male in my prespective and comfortable in my masculinity. I think your doing a good job here. No, not many males here.
Oh, BTW. I have two cup holders which can be retracted to make a larger storage area between the front seats of the car. ;-) Depend on my need.
And I'm a university Map Curator professionally. Rare maps to the latest GIS data. catalogue to one of my old exhibitions. 2.6mb.
Your and intelligent woman after my own heart.
Author's Response: I love the maps! Thank you!
I'm sitting here next to my mother, and she wants to know why I'm laughing. I can't tell her it's because some AUstralian guy is giving me a rundown of my ability to write smut from the male POV. Thank you so much for that awkward moment.
Just so you know, the story gets a lot dirtier in later chapters. I sure would love your take on that.
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 10
I've got a 2009 Honda Civic Sport that is just such an ace car. Leather, sunroof, full safety kit, 2.0 engine. Never let me down and never skipped a beat. The Prelude is nice but dated. New 2012 Civics coming out might be worth a look.
Author's Response: LoL. My car is perfect, except that it doesn't have a cup holder. And it's paid for.
Reviewer: griff1au (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
Picking up girls in a bookstore works for me. LOL. I think my wife would be bothered by this however. Intriguing story.
Author's Response: ROTFL. I'm sure you've gotten this a lot, but when I saw "wife" I immediately went to your profile to find out more about the rarest of creatures: the male Twilight fan. Glad you're intrigued.
I love old maps, strictly from an aesthetic point of view. My whole house is covered in them.
Hope you continue to enjoy!
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