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Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh my God you are such a writer after my own heart! The poetry. The lonely garret where he muses but never sleeps. This story is owning me hard. I am in love. I bake cookies for your Muse.
And btw, don't worry about chapter length. Each one is a self-contained jewel. as it should be. The long and short of it is organic to the content, not a preconceived notion.
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 2
Convincingly vampiric and dark this Edward. Her vena cava, good lord, can there be a more perfect meeting point for the love and death themes that are what the vampire archetype is all about?
There are no foregone conclusions here, I see. What is (or was) in Forks, I wonder?
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
omg i love this story. this is GREAT!!
you write so literately without making it obvious. love every word of that first moment of meeting.
this goes right on my faves list. right now!
Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Prologue
ok, you totally sucked me in with your wonderfully creative disclaimer. and then your A/N at the end. this is going to be good!!
and by the way, the chapter is so intriguing with all its hidden hints!
on to the next!
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter! Were Alice and Jasper the couple that interrupeted them at the book store? An why did they go to Bella's work place with Edward? Some kind of safety precaution?
And of course, such sexy times! I was really (pleasantly) surprised! I thought Edward would resist more.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's kind of going off the deep end re: Bella. More of that to come.
Reviewer: linder08 (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 6
Your story keeps getting better and better!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Damn sexual tension.... Can't wait to read more. What are Alice and Jasper doing in Seattle?
Author's Response: I wonder...?
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great chapter. So Bella and Jacob just friends? Okay. What happened to Edward in Forks? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter. So are Bella and Jacob together? They seem to be but they haven't done anything to indicate that they definitely are. Loved the trip to the book store. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 6
hmm so Alice and Jasper have shown up it seems, though we've not been properly introduced... oh and Edward's maybe going to be visiting his favourite librarian at work more often ;)
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Hope Bella will go back to the bookstore soon despite the fact that she thinks Edward turned her down. Hope Carlisle can help Edward out. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Loved finding out a bit about the shop and its owner. It sounds like an amazing place. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Prologue
I just started this fic but I'm intrigued. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
I hope we are going towards some reveal. I can't wait.
Reviewer: Froggy (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love your story, so freaking much! I just wish your chapters were longer hehe
Great job, I can't wait for their relationship to develop more. And that zest of lemon was hot! *fans self*
Can't wait for next chapter!
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 6
Uh Oh. Why are Alice and Jasper's eyes black? Are they vegetarians? Seems to me Edward showed up to protect Bella. Hmmmm. Yeah, and thanks for some lemons! Can't wait for next chapter......I hate cliffies! LOL
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
Found your story this evening and read chapter 1 - 7. Loving this story greatly.
Thank you for sharing this with us
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
I wish Edward would come pay a visit at my job :)
Author's Response: I know, right? :)
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 6
Still reading [although depressed as hell that you verified there was a triangle coming up] and loved the interaction between Bella and Edward...so damn yummy!
I liked how you introduced Alice and Jasper, as well. Very cool.
Can't Jake just die? Please? LOL
Glad that you are enjoying your vacation. Thanks for the chapter.
Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 6
Alice and Jasper, right? Edward is sure acting weird.
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love how you're making Edward so unpredictable. Makes it much more interesting! Thanks for sharing this lovely story.
Oh, and re: Oregon coast -- have your visited Cannon Beach? It's my favorite place in OR. Would live there year round if there were any jobs (other than summer)!
Author's Response: LoL - Loved Cannon Beach. Went to Mo's for lunch and had the best shrimp alfredo EVER. We didn't stay long because I wanted to get to Astoria, but it was a cool town.
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
i guess they aren't dead wow iam shocked can't wait to read the next update .loved it
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 5
i guess i know what happened in forks the cullens were killed by the pack i guess .this story just keeps pulling me in i love it
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
loved it
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