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Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 10
Yuk Yuk Yuk! No Bella - you love Edward!!!
*sighs*
Next!!!!!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh no ..... Jacob making his moves! And Edward is slow to do anything. It' s gonna take forever to do anything!
Author's Response: Yeah, he does drag his feet a lot, doesn't he? It's like he thinks he's going to live forever. :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 10
LOL...my car is called Bianca...she gets a bit bitchy sometimes so the name seems to fit. I think I am going to go crazy with this whole Edward, stay away from Bella because it's best for her bit. Aaackkk and then Jake kissing her while she is drunk...shudders. This is just crazy! Please update soon...
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh, please let her stop before anything happens with Jake (sorry, can't stand the guy)
Reviewer: cellibelli85 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
Hey, I liked the interaction between the Cullens. It thought it was Carlisle because of the letters. So far I really like this story, though I don't like the direction in which this chapter is going. I have no interest in reading a Bella/Jacob story. I guess Edward will see them kissing and freak out.
Reviewer: Rhi Aeffyll (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 10
While I am completely on board with your take on Honda engine technology, I'm less than enthused about the direction this chapter steered me. I've zero interest in reading a Bella/Jake story, so tell me now if they are about to start fooling around.
Author's Response: Check your email - it's a secret. :)
Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 10
Nooooo!!! Edward is going to see her make-out session and back off again! Just Say No to Jake!
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 10
I like very much this Rose and the interaction between the vamp-team.
I really hope Bella didn’t give in to Jake advances, not when se was drunk.
Reviewer: flagrad (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 10
can't wait for you to update again! and maybe angry-ward will show up to bella's in the nick of time??? she kisses Jacob, EWWW...
loven the story!
Reviewer: bmccall2068 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ewww gross! I can't believe she kissed that mutt!
Reviewer: annienow (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 10
I'm lovin this story. It's my new favorite.
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 10
Go away Jacob! LOL So, I'm assuming Edward is going to see this since he went to her apartment? I do adore angst. Thanks for the uber fast update!
Author's Response: Oooh, you caught that, did you? He he he...
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 10
God, that last line breaks my heart. Bella is drunk and lonely, But Jake thinks this is going to be best thing that ever happened to him. *sob!*
And I'm thinking when Edward shows up violence may just ensue.
Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Prologue
My mom died of cancer too. She had lymphoma. I talk to her all the time...
Author's Response: Cancer Sucks. Says so on a tee shirt.
http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/ab239/CyraBear/IMG_1207.jpg
Author's Response: Cancer Sucks. Says so on a tee shirt.
http://i867.photobucket.com/albums/ab239/CyraBear/IMG_1207.jpg
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oops sorry I meant to erase from memory, not actually erase the chapter (not that I could)
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 10
OMG I am so NOT into Jacob. This chapter makes me cringe. I have to erase it and hope for better things ...
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Prologue
Great Beginning!
Reviewer: myimm0rtal (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hey there!
Your fic was recc'd to me by a dear friend, and with the homages to Donne and Lewis, oh, you'd had me at hello.
I just read up to this point all in one sitting, and am riveted, utterly riveted. I beg of you - please keep this story going. Stories like yours are what keep the magic alive, and I'm truly grateful you're sharing your creativity with us.
Thank you!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! <blush>
Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 9
I knew the first time Edward wrote to Carlisle... Well that was MY suspicions because I often write to my mother... she passed away in 2007... and it helps... Anyways XD I'm anxiously awaiting new chapters XD
Author's Response: My dad died of cancer in 2007. I talk to him when I'm sad.
Reviewer: flabella (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh snap! Totally didn't put two and two together, mostly because I had it in my head that there's no way Carlisle would be dead. He never is! LOL
Another fantastic chapter! I can't wait to see what happens between Bella and Edward when she lets him know she knows "what" he is.
Reviewer: lizf22 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
Well I guessed no treaty but as usual I missed the clues that it was Carlisle who was killed, how devastating! This could mean a whole host of issues with the relationship (conflict more like) the Cullen's will have with the pack!
I can't imagine the complications when Jake and Edward become aware of each others existence and/or role in Bella's life!!
Great job, I may not like where it may go but I like how you're doing it! :O)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 9
sniffle...oh god carlisle is gone...i am so saddened by that twist but i guess i can understand a bit more about edward and his reservations...edward doesnt know what to think of jasper and alice while bella is freaking out about vamps...i cant wait to see how you bring this all about...
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hey Hey I guessed it right! With no Carlisle there has been no treaty, which means the possiblity of major fallout if any of the Cullens are in the Forks area, but no treaty means that there is nothing to stop Bella from being changed as well. Also none of the Cullens live in Forks or near LaPush. Does Jacob live in the same apartment as Bella? If so major problem!
Author's Response: Yeah, you were one of only two who guessed it outright - yee haw!
Yeah, Jake lives in Bella's building...it's gonna really piss Edward off.
Reviewer: Aleea-b4u (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2010 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 9
No, I didn't see that coming, obviously. My last review gives me away so I can't even pretend, damnit. ;-) I was leaning heavily towards Esme. She seemed the most likely. You know, I have no idea why you'd be surprised so few people made the connection. We're you trying to make it obvious? Leaving clues we all missed? I even went back and tried to find them, I like to think I'm fairly intelligent, lol, but perhaps not,because I couldn't find any really. Not definitive ones anyway. A few that now I know the secret are clearer, but that's hindsight for you.
So this just ups the interesting quotient. The lack of Carlisle's guidance and support adds a whole new element here. I'm really looking forward to finding out how it all plays out. I don't imagine Edward is going to like finding out who Jacob is and how close he is to Bella. Though he's not technically a wolf at this point, correct?
I loved the way Edward got to see things through Alice's thoughts, and how you portrayed her in genearal. Her wanting to find Edward and bring him home, loving him already just through her gift was so sweet. :) It made me all kinds of happy and helped balance out the ouch factor from you killing Carlisle. ;-)
Can't wait for more. Keep up the amazing work,
Author's Response: No, I meant that I didn't think I'd hidden it so well - you guys are way too intelligent for me. :)
Yeah, the kids are going to kind of screw up from here...
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 9
Loved Alice's intro :) More Alice and Jasper, please?
Author's Response: Of course.
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