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Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
I loved the description of the book store, you have a great writing style and I can tell that I am going to love this story.
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Prologue
Really intrigued with the prologue.
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 10
i dont see how she can say vampires arent sexy...does she really not think edward isnt...every vampire is beautiful...she is crazy and if he loves and wants her so be it...jjake is not interesting at all...just sayin
Author's Response: The lady doth protest too much, I think.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 10
I am loving this story! Keep up the great work!!!
Reviewer: heavenscent (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 10
I have never written a review before, or even left a comment, but simply could not resist doing so now.
Although I am enjoying your story immensely, it was your Chapter End Note that stopped my heart.
When I was a little girl, my mom would sing a song, the name of which was (I think) "They Call the Wind Mariah". I never remembered hearing anyone else sing it, or heard it playing on the radio. I just remember her, in the kitchen, singing "Mariah blow my love to me/I need my girl beside me."
Your casual reference brought back a memory (of 1966?) so clear and so happy that that I know it will make me smile for days.
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Author's Response: Hey, that's neat! The song is from a musical called "Paint Your Wagon." I'm so glad you enjoyed.
Reviewer: heavenscent (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 10
I have never written a review before, or even left a comment, but simply could not resist doing so now.
Although I am enjoying your story immensely, it was your Chapter End Note that stopped my heart.
When I was a little girl, my mom would sing a song, the name of which was (I think) "They Call the Wind Mariah". I never remembered hearing anyone else sing it, or heard it playing on the radio. I just remember her, in the kitchen, singing "Mariah blow my love to me/I need my girl beside me."
Your casual reference brought back a memory (of 1966?) so clear and so happy that that I know it will make me smile for days.
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Reviewer: holtzgirl (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 10
Are you telling us about Mariah to block the horrible Jake/Bella moment that you just ended your story with? (It's not horrible, but I'm quite canon, you know?)
Author's Response: LoL - kinda. It was supposed to be a random non sequitur to make you go, WTF?
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 10
I love your Rosalie :) And no no no Bella. WTF is the matter with you, girl? lol
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Glad Rose and Jasper talked to Edward, hope he takes their advice. Can't believe Bella made out with Jacob, then again alcohol is never good. Hope she stops things before they get too far. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 10
Why is it so hard to not want Edward? Jacob is so wonderful and pretty perfect in every way. I'd be like melted butter in his arms. BUT knowing the possibility oh having Edward looming near, oh man forget it. Poor jake, he deserves to be happy. Edward is irrestistable.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 10
Well,if Edward is anywhere within hearing/listening distance he is both raging jealous and holding his dead heart in his hands! Time to deliver a pizza!
Author's Response: I can just see Edward in a Domino's uniform, showing up at the door with a pepperoni and extra cheese.
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh no, crap,crap crap, Edward is going to come to Bella's at the wronggggg time... He is either going to think Bella has feelings for Jake or think Jake's advances are unwelcome.
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 10
Interesting,can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh no. Bella is going to be upset with herself if this goes much further. I hope they get the chance to talk soon. Although I"m nervous if Edward is over at her place while Jake was there. I like how supportive Rosalie is of Edward...its a nice change. :) Great chapter (well except for the kissing LOL)! Excited to find out what happens next! Very much enjoying this story!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm trying to keep Rosalie mostly in character, just less bitter about everything. Deep down you know she doesn't hate absolutely everything.
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 9
I thought it would be Esme. But now those letters Edward has been writing to Carlisle break my heart. Edward seems so lost without him. Glad to see the family together again and I like that Rosalie doesn't seem upset by the prospect of Bella becoming one of them. The wolves killing Carlisle is certainly going to make things so much more interesting between Bella, Edward and Jacob. So very very curious where this story is going to go. Excited to find out! And its so very heartbreaking that Carlisle died. Poor Esme. Great chapter!
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 9
This is different, so sad that Carlisle was killed.
Reviewer: JB30 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
I wonder what happened in the fight from Edward's pov. I'm guessing perhaps the wolves didn't give them a chance to explain themselves? So curious to find out! And Bella is putting the pieces together....so curious what she will do with this info. Great chapter!
Reviewer: raewright (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh man, a blue Honda prelude was my dream car.
Author's Response: Yeah, mine is blue-purple. Love that car.
Reviewer: heldtoransom (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ahhhhh!- oh no Bella, stop now! Has Edward just seen all this!
I'm on tenterhooks until the next chapter.
Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Prologue
Haha that it does. Like the t-shirt :)
Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 10
I have been following your story from the start and truly like the plot and flow. Your story actually has a very original line to it, regardless of the characters. Your working a more adult version and it is refreshing.
The Jake thing - BARF. I would appreciate him better as a friend. I never cared for him in the books or his portrayal in the movies. Bella as a matter of fact was written very poorly in the movie versions as well. Absolutely no depth of character. And though EC would be the worlds worst boyfriend, lets face it, seriously controlling and who want's a guy capable of killing you every two seconds when you kiss him?? What I like about him was the angst, the brooding, the lonely soul.
Sorry, I digressed....I feel you brought the character of EC to your story and that's what makes it so interesting. Please pleaae don't do the triangle. There is no such thing as being in love with two different men. it's not possible.
Anyway - am looking forward to more. even if you do slip Jake in there every once in a while! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm enjoying writing it. I hope I don't disappoint you in coming chapters!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 10
LOVED the first part of the chapter. Your Cullens ae awesome and I even like your Rosalie, whom I wasn't ever able to warm up to in canon and rarely like in AU fic. I like where you have replaced her advising Edward in place of the usual Alice character that you see in fics. It's a really cool change of pace!
The second part of the chapter made me sick.
And as for what you mentioned to me in response to my last review [you asked if TLautner had hiked my panties]? Uh no. He seems like a nice enough lilttle guy. I hated Jakehole and the wolfpack when I read the books. I don't care for love triangles. That's all. I'm not one of those idiots who confuse the characters & the actors. ; D
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the Bella/Edward and Cullen parts of your fic! Thanks for sharing with us.
Author's Response: I really do LoL when I read your posts. Don't worry, I will do my best to make all your E/B dreams come true!
Reviewer: Edward A Masen (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 10
*grumble*
Reviewer: wootmoot (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh no!!! Whats going to happen with B and J?? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh no!!! Please tell me that Edward didn't witness said kiss. That would just really screw everything up now, wouldn't it? LOL! I am left wanting more, as always. Great update, bb! I'm eagerly awaiting the next.
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