Will she be mad.  If the Cullens are in Forks (are they there, what happened there?), why haven't the boys morphed yet? 

Author's Response:

Excellent questions...hmmm.

Doing my happy dance..Yay, you updated early!! I am so excited to see what happens next; will Bella smell Edward in her apartment? I can't wait for them to meet again. I am so enjoying this story!!!

Poor Bella.  She has a wolf having drunken sex thoughts about her as he's trying to get into her pants while a vampire is spying on her from her closet.   Good stuff. 

Author's Response:

Kind of having a bad day, isn't she?

Teen wolf is very fitting for Jake.

I loved the way Edward said, "I warned you".  Very...uhm...promising.  Can't believe Edward wasn't being all prudish on the steps in the book store.  I like an Edward with a little less control.

Ahhh so Edward was in the closet all the time... Thought it so sweet of him to turn out the light and take her trainers off.
Looking forward to the Edward and Bella action. Not sure if he needs much help in 'how to seduce a woman' but I can't wait nonetheless. Great update

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's kinda a natural at that.  But he's going to screw it up anyway. :)

Wow.  It just crackles around them, doesn't it?

I had wondered if Edward had heard Bella and Jake although he took it MUCH better than I thought he would. And he's ready to fight for Bella. YAY!!! I'm curious how Bella is going to handle this...if she is going to ask him about what she knows or wait for him to tell her. And I wonder if he will. I LOVE your plot. The dynamics and history you have created between the Cullens and Wolves is very original and I'm so curious what all you have planned between them. And Bella in the middle of this situation ought to make things VERY interesting. I like how the Cullens don't really know anything about the wolves, that they are shape shifters, that they can smell them. Its fascinating watching them figure everything out. Loved the chapter and very much enjoying your story. Excited to see what you have planned next!
Jodi

Author's Response:

Thanks.  I was hoping that I didn't strain your credulity by having Edward stay quiet in the closet while that travesty was going down.  Hoping that the threat of Bella being hurt or killed would keep him at bay, at least for the present.

Great chapter.  I was wondering how much Edward stayed for.

This is quite the beginning.

I came here at the recommendation of Miss DeJean Smith in her own story.

 

Thank you for writing.

To the next chapter ...

SR

Author's Response:

I'm so flattered to get a review from the UoEM guy...thanks!!

Love this story. Your writing style is wonderfully descriptive and it's an interesting idea you've written about. Thanks for sharing it.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  And I LOVE your screen name. :)

Uh-oh.

Hmmm... derogatory adjectives for dogs?  Mangy?  Flea-bitten?  Scruffy?  SOB (literally!).

Wow. What a history you have created between the wolves and the Cullens. They killed Carlisle before any of the Cullens even got to talk or explain themselves to the wolves! So very very sad. This certainly amps up the Edward/Jake tension!! Curious what will happen when the Cullens and wolves meet again.
YAY!! Edward is ready to fight for Bella. I love this. Curious if she will confront him with what she knows. Loved the chapter and very much enjoying your story! Looking forward to more!