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Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 16

love these 2, I'm thinking that Jake is becoming a wolf boy!!

Reviewer: wootmoot (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 16

I am in love with Bella's hair now. You wrote a great chapter. Now, I want long wavey hair so I can twirl the locks around.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 16

Bella knows & everything seems good with her! Happy for that! Edward is so romantic - love it!

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 16

Love Clipped Wings, and her sexy photos on Twitter.



Author's Response:

Oh, shucks.  I'm not on Twitter and now you make me want to go sign up.

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 15

And you are really cool.



Author's Response:

I am?  Neat!

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 14

Your Edward is so cool and sexy, ha ha cool get it.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 16

i lovede clipped wings and inked armor!! i hung on her every update it was murder waiting! but it was too incredible! and i love that bella is so interested in edward and that her research is so close to correct! will jake be ok? will others change too?



Author's Response:

LoL - I'm on the chapter right after Bella overdoses.  It was killing me all day yesterday because I was traveling and couldn't read.  I was coming up with police statements from all th characters in my head.  You know it's a good fic when you find yourself mentally writing fics about it.

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 13

God woman, that was the best chapter of all of FF, bloody hell you must write for a living and I will buy them all, I need a drink. xxx



Author's Response:

Wish I did.  I'm a freakin' accountant.

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 12

I love this story so much.

Reviewer: LikeAir (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 16

Tantalizing, as always.  I do love grown-up, poetry-reading Edward.

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 11

I've been thinking about this wonderful story for weeks waiting for updates,I must have forgot to put you in my favorites, now I have some catching up to do SQUEEZE.

Reviewer: anothertwilighter (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 16

That was so hot and sweet and romantic and.... shall I go on? ;-) I loved it!!

Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2010 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 16

finally we are moving forward!! great chapter

Reviewer: 1216 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 5

so far, I am really enjoying your story. The characters seem to fit in the same mold that the original author created, but you help them step outside of it here and there and that is wonderful. I love the idea of Edward's store. I would love to check a place out like that.

 

(I love books as well... have a whole walk in closet full of them.. my mini-library..)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I am trying to stay in character and with the spirit of the original books (uh, except for the no sex part, I guess).  Glad that it seems to be working.

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 16

Great chapter. Who is killing all those people? Glad Bella's not running from Edward and he's made his feelings clear. 
I know what you mean, about Kristen's hair. I love her hair too though not so much in Eclipse... but that's cause it was a wig.
Anyway, can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

It was a wig?  How depressing.  I only saw it once in the theatres...can't wait for it to come out on DVD.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 16

At least Edward let it all hang out. Thank you!

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 16

I love how tenderly you are portraying Edward.

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

Bella must be in shock after recovering from her insanity.  Otherwise she would not be able to go home after being over and under Edward like THAT while he recited love poems and kissed her.  Lovely.

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 16

I liked this chapter.  Very nice balance of passion, sweetness, and humour from his family.

Reviewer: Missypooh (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 16

I have to say I'm surprised that Bella can resist romancing Edward.  I would think that many could not.  Look forward to seeing how the ride home goes.  Thanks again for another wonderful and quick update.

Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 16

Poetry, yum! Glad they talked...

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 16

He's so sweet to her. I love it. You're spoiling us with all these super fast updates. I am always so excited everytime a new one pops into my email. Keep em coming, bb!

Reviewer: lizf22 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 16

swoooooon! if she can resist that SHE'S made of stone. gah! 

I think that leaving her in the dark re: wolves is going to backfire on him. I understand why he's doing it but I'll bet she won't like it when it all comes out.

thank you for the update! xo

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 15

Who killed the red head?

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 15

Fab chapter as always.  I loved the 'well I do but i'm not going to' and 'don't you think we're a little past the denial stage babe.'... great writing.   It was sad when Tony Curtis died, Some like it hot is one of my favourite old movies.

Loved the song too at the end it is beautiful.

 

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