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Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 19

This is one of the very best!  Love it!

Reviewer: atina10 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 19

Beautiful, beautiful chapter!! Iloved it.

thanks for updates!!!

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 19

Edward shared their sad past, it had to be hard for Esme to hear him tell her, but it was also necessary. Especially with what Bella knows and figured out during the conversation. Edward blames himself, should he? I don't think so, but easier said than done of course.

With this knowledge, how will things go now? And how will they tell Esme about Bella's close relationship with the wolves? Won't be easy I guess.

Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 19

It's good to know that we provide something besides football and corn.... vampire-safe bed frames.  *thumbs up*  Go Nebraska! 

On another point, you continue to earn my undying allegience. I love this story.



Author's Response:

LoL - Nebraska also provided me...or at least the paternal half of my family.  Go Huskers!

Reviewer: flagrad (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 19

Love this story.  Keeps getting better and better!  And I love all the quick updates too!

Thanks again!

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 19

Thanks so much for the shout out, bb! I love your story so much so I'm happy to spread the word about it! I hope you get a ton more readers. :D

I loved this chapter. Edward is being a little bit more openly forward with Bella. I seriously wanted to melt when he asked if he could lay next to her. Gah! So freakin' sweet. Things are progressing nicely. She seems to be slowly warming back up to him. I can't wait to read more.

Great chapter, sweets! :)

Reviewer: mitzfree (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great chapter!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 19

Bella's got to get used to these vampires anticipating her every need & desire!  What a nice way to live!  I'm feeling so sad for Esme now!  Great story!

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 19

I wonder what Bella will think of the wolfs now. After all, they're still her friends. Also, it was very sad, reading again about Esme's suffering. =/

Reviewer: DeJean Smith (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 19

Aww!  Thanks for the shout out, Sweetie!  Another fabu chapter.  Can't keep hoping they were all wrong about Carlisle & he's going to pop up alive, having been held hostage for all these years.  I'm such a softie...

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 19

Poor Edward, and poor Esme. I love that Bella comforted him here.

And the newly renovated apartment is stunning. I wish I could live there.

Reviewer: lizf22 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 19

OMG my mattress pad is one of my favorite things as well..so cozy w/o feeling smothering right?

Sweet, sweet chapter. I loved getting to hear Edward opening up to Bella.  And the Cullens' banter was priceless! lol

Thank you for the update, I am so glad your story is getting lots of good buzz, it's so much fun to read! xo

 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 19

I have a heated mattress pad too and I love it, especially in the winter.

Loved this chapter. Glad Edward told Bella about Carlisle. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 19

Love the research you did! *grin*  Really like Edward's response to Bella's tears (and I suspect the others would feel the same as well.)

 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 19

Poor Esme.   I hope Carlisle is not really dead.  Is that too much to hope for?

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 19

Love love love love love this story!

Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 3

Wowwwwww! I would love to kiss him too!!! Thanks, another great chp!

Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Prologue

cool, love it already, thanks!

Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 2

Great twist and creativity, thanks!

Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 1

like it... a lot  already!!! Thanks...new to this...heck your gonna be amazing when you got a few years experience under your belt!!!

Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:39 AM · On: Prologue

intriguing...gonna keep reading, thanks

Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Prologue

Intriguing!!! Definately gonna keep reading...sounds good, lots of interesting potential and delicious phrasing, thanks!

Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:36 AM · On: Prologue

Intriguing!!! Definately gonna keep reading...sounds good, lots of interesting potential and delicious phrasing, thanks!

Reviewer: KnoKnayme (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 19

aawwwwww! poor Esme!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 19

i hate that Carlile is gone and that he is still blaming himself after all these years.....and I have a heated matress pad omg one of the 8 wonders of the world  ...no icy vampire but an Edward with icy cold feet lol....

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