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Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
I'm so glad that Edward finally shared that with Bella. I'm also happy about her response that she didn't know any monsters.
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 19
awesome!
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 19
She is so understanding of everything. I can't wait for more,
Reviewer: Borax (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 19
I loved this chapter!
I find it quite funny how the roles are reversed. In the books, it was Bella who was always pressing for more intimacy and trying to get into the relationship, and here it's Edward that's almost forcing himself into her bed. Of course, she doesn't mind too much.
It was really interesting to hear more about Carlisle's death and what happened with Esme. I wonder if she still resents Edward for what he did–we know he regrets it, for a certain part. It seems so un-Esme to be angry at anybody she loves, but this Esme went through very different experiences than the one in the book.
Reviewer: stmur (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 19
Edward's description of Carlisle's death and Esme's reaction is one of the saddest things I've read. Poignant. I can understand why Edward would feel he needs penance after holding her back while watching him burn. (Gah, just typing that makes my heart hurt.) Could you imagine if they let her go for her revenge? You know they (Cullens) wouldn't let her die without attacking themselves. How would that change the whole story line? How many of the Cullens and wolves would have been killed?
Geeze, sorry for the ramble. My brain just took off running through different senarios and outcomes.
"To live alone...having had the perfect love for twenty short years, and knowing that she will never, never feel that again...every day, I wonder if I did the right thing."
I can't help but agree with him. Was it the right thing?
Absolutely beautiful chapter.
Reviewer: sugarvenom (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 19
This is one of the very best! Love it!
Reviewer: atina10 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 19
Beautiful, beautiful chapter!! Iloved it.
thanks for updates!!!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 19
Edward shared their sad past, it had to be hard for Esme to hear him tell her, but it was also necessary. Especially with what Bella knows and figured out during the conversation. Edward blames himself, should he? I don't think so, but easier said than done of course.
With this knowledge, how will things go now? And how will they tell Esme about Bella's close relationship with the wolves? Won't be easy I guess.
Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 19
It's good to know that we provide something besides football and corn.... vampire-safe bed frames. *thumbs up* Go Nebraska!
On another point, you continue to earn my undying allegience. I love this story.
Author's Response: LoL - Nebraska also provided me...or at least the paternal half of my family. Go Huskers!
Reviewer: flagrad (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 19
Love this story. Keeps getting better and better! And I love all the quick updates too!
Thanks again!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 19
Thanks so much for the shout out, bb! I love your story so much so I'm happy to spread the word about it! I hope you get a ton more readers. :D
I loved this chapter. Edward is being a little bit more openly forward with Bella. I seriously wanted to melt when he asked if he could lay next to her. Gah! So freakin' sweet. Things are progressing nicely. She seems to be slowly warming back up to him. I can't wait to read more.
Great chapter, sweets! :)
Reviewer: mitzfree (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 19
Great chapter!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 19
Bella's got to get used to these vampires anticipating her every need & desire! What a nice way to live! I'm feeling so sad for Esme now! Great story!
Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 19
I wonder what Bella will think of the wolfs now. After all, they're still her friends. Also, it was very sad, reading again about Esme's suffering. =/
Reviewer: DeJean Smith (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 19
Aww! Thanks for the shout out, Sweetie! Another fabu chapter. Can't keep hoping they were all wrong about Carlisle & he's going to pop up alive, having been held hostage for all these years. I'm such a softie...
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 19
Poor Edward, and poor Esme. I love that Bella comforted him here.
And the newly renovated apartment is stunning. I wish I could live there.
Reviewer: lizf22 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 19
OMG my mattress pad is one of my favorite things as well..so cozy w/o feeling smothering right?
Sweet, sweet chapter. I loved getting to hear Edward opening up to Bella. And the Cullens' banter was priceless! lol
Thank you for the update, I am so glad your story is getting lots of good buzz, it's so much fun to read! xo
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 19
I have a heated mattress pad too and I love it, especially in the winter.
Loved this chapter. Glad Edward told Bella about Carlisle. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Dryad (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 19
Love the research you did! *grin* Really like Edward's response to Bella's tears (and I suspect the others would feel the same as well.)
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 19
Poor Esme. I hope Carlisle is not really dead. Is that too much to hope for?
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 19
Love love love love love this story!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wowwwwww! I would love to kiss him too!!! Thanks, another great chp!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Prologue
cool, love it already, thanks!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great twist and creativity, thanks!
Reviewer: ised (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 1
like it... a lot already!!! Thanks...new to this...heck your gonna be amazing when you got a few years experience under your belt!!!
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