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Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 20
Very nice little lemon there! Edward is the hottest virgin on the planet, I think! Loving the story!
Reviewer: lizf22 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 20
gah! holy hell that was just..um..yeah. fluffy fluff that made me squirm like whoa! Oh Edward! xoxo
ps. are you on the twitter yet? :)
Author's Response: LoL...no, I'm hanging on to sanity by my fingernails.
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 19
Very sad at the end. Great chapter.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ah okay. I had the demise of the wrong Cullen. HOW SAD!!
And so we have they lovely Family Support Group. Rosalie did a nice one. *fistbump*
So, Bella's drunk off her can, she's making out w/Jake and that'll be when Edward shows up, right? (I'm in a non-internet access point just now so will send this when I get it back, lol, and then I'll read and find out how wrong I am THIS time.)
Judging by the chatter I've been hearing about this story, I am guessing Bella doesn't succumb too far to the whole Jacob mystique, even though he is, apparently, a nice guy. I like that he is showing his shapeshifter tendencies at the moment with the stealth and all. Very cool.
And to continue...!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oh wow....
Is this, like, what happened to Esme and did Carlisle go ape? Or...?
Oh wow. TERRIFIC storytelling.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 19
still painful to read of Carlisle being gone... but I do like Bella's support of Edward through his recounting of their past :)
Reviewer: sherriola (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 12
Oh don't pity Jacob. I'm not one who likes Jacob. In fact, the Jacob of canon is abusive and manipulative, and I was appalled that Meyer made him such a hero in Breaking Dawn. So, thank you, thank you for having Bella break off that kiss and not take it any farther! Jacob can go imprint somewhere and stay away. grin. love the Cullens in this by the way. I really like what you've done with Rose and I like the growing bond with Alice and edward.
Reviewer: sherriola (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh my. Someone recommended this to me on twitter, and I am truly loving it. I love this Edward very much. His pain is so real. But Carlisle? I almost don't know if i can continue. that breaks my heart so badly, because to me, Carlisle is the true hero of the entire saga, and the gentlest most compassion being. Of course, I will continue, and I hope you have very bad things planned for the horrible wolves. But this development is really sad. If I'd known before I started reading that Carlisle had been killed, I wouldn't have read at all. but it's a testament to your fantastic story telling ability, that in spite of that, I want to continue the story.
Reviewer: fifi_fiction (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
I love this story sooooo much I'm reviewing it in both places. Thanks for an excellent story.
Reviewer: mathqueenb (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 19
Completely enjoying your story! I wish I could review from my iphone which is where I read twilighted most of the time. I would have left you several by now! Thank you for writing, it's fantastic so far! I love wary Bella and nervous Edward!
Reviewer: flabella (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ooo I love Evermore Experience!
Anywho, I'm so glad Bella is giving him a chance. I can't wait to see their relationship flourish, though I am a little concerned about those pesky shape shifters.
Reviewer: flabella (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 18
Awww damn. He's so sweet!
Reviewer: flabella (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 15
This chapter slayed me. It's not very often I legit LOL while reading, but I was laughing til I had tears in my eyes.
You are so freakin' talented!
Reviewer: flabella (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
"Mr. Pale and Tragic..." *snort*
If that doesn't sum up just about every Edward I've ever read.
Reviewer: jjohnson78587 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 19
I just caught up with this story and I'm loving it very much. And yes, I saw it rec'd on Twitter. I love the bookstore setting. And I love your take on the Twilight stories.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 19
Ohh how devastating...Carlisle's loss is so sad. I have to wonder if Carlisle tried to distract the wolves long enough so his family could get away. There were definatly tears reading about that encounter...sigh. I can't wait to see how Bella reacts to Jacob now...
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 19
poor edward and esme! i hope that esme can find someone to be a companion so she doesn't have to be without someone for all that time!
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 19
Finally getting around to reading my favorite stories....holiday, company, etc... Feel bad for Esme. I like that Edward is opening up and telling Bella more personal details. Great chapter. Look forward to the next.
Reviewer: Tora (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 19
I'm an aerospace engineer, and I must confess that your reference to low-alloy steel as a strong substane confused me - steel is a substance, and you can have an alloy of it, but there's no such thing as a "low" alloy as far as I know. Are you refering to its density, its porosity, its mass...?
Besides that, I wanted to let you know that I really like the premiss of your story, that Edward owns a bookstore. It's perfect!
Author's Response: From what I understand, low alloy steel is stronger than the more typical carbon steel. The term low alloy evidently refers to the low levels of alloyants. I didn't get into what elements would be used as alloyants because I clearly have no idea what I'm talking about. Does any of that make sense? Should I phrase it a different way, or am I just out in left field? Let me know, and thanks for the heads-up!
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 19
I still can't belive what happened to Carlisle, so sad. Its good to see Bella and Edward's relationship starting to blossom.
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 18
Loved it.
Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 19
Amazing chapter! I don't review all of them, but I love your story!!
Please, continue!!
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ugh...reading about Carlise and poor Esme makes me tear up! And hate the woves so fucking much, more than I already did (except for Seth & Leah).
Which is saying something, believe me.
Great chapter, really lovely! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: So, are you saying you don't hate Seth and Leah as much as the other wolves, or that you hate them more?
Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 18
You should look up Hunterhunting on facebook. More stuff plus she posts pics of Rob. ::drool::
This was a great chapter! If Bella is going to be reluctant, perhaps my husband and I could move in there? We would appreicate it! Move the hell over, Bella!
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
so Bella now knows part of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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