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Reviewer: mylittlebakersdozen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 04:20 PM · On: Prologue
i've had this story listed in my faves as one i wanted to get to next. well, today seems to be "next" and i am so glad it is.
the ambience you have created with just your words makes me want to crawl inside and swim around in them.
i admire your writing style and the words you have so carefully chosen. you seem to be a master at the art of showing, not telling, and this is merely the first chapter of what appears to be a lengthy story. i am in for a treat!
i clink my virtual teacup with you, my dear!
--jen
Author's Response: Quickly falling in love with your reviews...you have quite the way with words yourself, dear!
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 42
For some reason my email is not getting your updates. I was like three chapters behind, damn! Anyway now I know what is up great story really gotta read the chapter after the next. So......
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 43
The death of Calisle bothered me from the begining. I guess bc in myhead no matter how the fan fic authors write in their characters, they are who they are in my head.....the Cullens. They hold a special place in my heart. So Esme without Carlise is just to much. So I get the need that Esme has to not be here anymore without him. I don't know how even after 60 years or so with the same person that once they leave here we are expected to carry on. It's nice to think that once we leave here there is a different space we go to.....some know that is not true......others do.....the are the lucky ones, the ones who believe that. I really don't agree that the Harry Potter books are trying to tell us that fear of dying is an "unhealthy obsession". I think the author did it bc she hated having to write so many. LOL. I was angry when Cedric died, and I hated her when Dobbie died. She like everyone else makes evil win out in more ways than one. The death of both Voldermort and Lestrange were so anti climatic, almost as if it was an afterthught, like the author did it bc she was told to. Just my opinion but Harry lost everyone......they all lost so much and then in the end.....well it's just my opinion but RL leaves us with all the shitbags and takes the great people too early.
Author's Response: That's cool that you don't agree about HP. Perhaps I was getting that because *I* have an unhealthy obsession with death. But Voldemort's whole thing is how to avoid death - he expends all his energy in making horcruxes and protecting himself from death, and in the process becomes a monster who has no concept of love, compassion or trust.
Anyway, this story is supposed to be about living life to the fullest even though death lingers around every corner. Edward has shut himself away because he was hurt so badly by Carlisle's death, and Bella basically forces him to rejoin the world. Through her he reconnects with his family and learns to put his heart in her hands.
See? Unhealthy obsession with death. That's me. :)
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 44
I loved how it was Bella who took control, kept things "safe" while encouraging Edward at the same time. It was simply wonderful....
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 44
That poem is perfect here. (Want an Edward-clone for myself *sigh*)
Happy Holidays
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Author's Response: Don't we all? :)
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 44
Best chapter by far and not just because they were finally together
Author's Response: LoL but that's all it was, one long lemon!
Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 44
That was great! Love the poem too. Are you reading Breakers by les16 here? Love it! Has a wonderful Bella and Edward is pained but wonderful with Bellas daughter. He is an ex con starting over in a small fishing town in Maine.
I hope you have a wonderful holiday!
Merrily
Kat
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 44
*shivers* damn woman. You may have teased us mercilessly for the previous 44 chapters, but you definitely delivered in this one. Loved it. It was so, so, so good. French poetry. *swoons*
Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 44
The hayall? You end it now? With the steamy vampire lovin' just stopping? Just like that? Aaaagh. Hmph. Not impressed. I doubt Edward is, either.
Please update soon!!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 44
Don't you just love a completely overwhelmed Edward and patient Bella? Shouting out words during sex, "you're like a furnace!". Too funny!
Author's Response: Hahahaha
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 44
All I can say is "HOLY SHIT THAT WAS HOT"!!!!!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 44
Thanks for the new chapter. I hope they figure out what their future will be...for a lifetime or forever.
Author's Response: So you got caught up! Good grief!
Reviewer: pito (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 44
Great chapter. I hope we get more hot lovemaking in the next chapter with Edward lasting longer this time:)
Author's Response: Snort. He's such a boy.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 44
Great chapter. Their first time was pretty perfect and so sweet, I love how Bella knew exactly what Edward needed. He may not have lasted long but at least he's got the stamina and endurance to more than make up for it. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Author's Response: LoL...
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 44
I still feel so bad that Esme felt she had to end herself, but she missed Carlisle so much, it's understandable she wanted to be with him. It sure took a toll on Edward, as well as the rest of the Cullens. There is solace for Edward, only in Bella, and her love for him. She is his savior in every way, physically, mentally, sexually and spiritually. I truly have loved this story. Thanks for the recs, though I have already devoured Music of the Night. You're right on, it's a wonderful story.
Author's Response: Yep. I just adored what theladyingrey did with Bella's talent. It was so cool and poetic.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 44
Squeee go Bella!!! I love her go gettem attitude!! Shes doing so well!! Post again soon I can't wait to see them talk about forever!!!
Author's Response: LoL Okay!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 44
That was some hot loving!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 40
Killer chapter
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 39
Great chapter. I love you author notes. I didn't think I would ever like reading books on a computer. That changed when I started reading fic. Just got an iPad. I love the freedom. The library is my sanctuary for everything I want in print. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Author's Response: No, thank you!
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 38
My thought when you added a unidentified girl...she would be an imprint for one of the wolves. Which one? Jacob?
Great chapter
Author's Response: Ding ding ding! FTW!
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
I didn't make the connection because Edward was writing letters to Carlisle.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 37
Great job moving the storyalong. I would like to know what Bella thought about Edwards profession of love.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 36
Thanks for writing. I hope Be.la and Edward work this out.
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 35
Thank you for the chapter...I like the Fallen series too. Not ready for the fanfic. Be well.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2011 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 43
Well, to sound trite, that's a downer! I suppose if there was never anyone who will love you as a lover could, and you would never naturally die, what else could you do? Somehow, I think Edward's night will be a bit different than he envisioned.
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